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emission carbon dioxide in 4 counties

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the line chart gives information about a amout of carbon dioxide exchanging per person in 4 different countries from 1967 to 2007. The data is presented in metric tonnes and can be split in to 2 groups, upward trend and downward trend. Overall, it can be seen United Kingdom was the highest emission carbon dioxide in over the period. To begin, there was a 3 fold increase, rising from 1. 8 to 5. 6 in Portugal. Italy experienced a dramatic growth of 3. 6 between 4. 2 and 7. 8. although Sweden rose slightly by 1. 8 to 10. 1 in 1977, and sharply decrease to 7 in 1987, after that 2007 saw a slowly drop untill equal emission carbon dioxide same Portugal in the end of the period. whereas United Kingdom had remain stable in 1977, before there was a moderate reduce to 9 in the end of period

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