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DOES MODERN TECHNOLOGY MAKE LIFE MORE CONVENIENT OR WAS LIFE BETTER WHEN TECHNOLOGY WAS SIMPLER?

DOES MODERN TECHNOLOGY MAKE LIFE MORE CONVENIENT OR WAS LIFE BETTER WHEN TECHNOLOGY WAS SIMPLER? aEe1w
It is irrefutable that invention of new technologies has made our lives much easier. Science is a logical application with different experiments which leads to research, discovery and innovations. Nowadays, science and technology forms a life force that contributes to regulate our daily life. Staring with common view, inventing various kinds of devices has made life more convenient. Although, this can create some problems but with the advent of technology someone can feel pace of mind which is unavoidable. Taking communication for elaboration, in past times people used to send letters to their loved ones. Recipients usually received those letters after weeks or sometimes after months but now they can drop a message to their relatives and friends within seconds through mobile phone and email. This is the fastest mode of interacting with blood relations. Furthermore, before searching modern technologies there were limited modes of transportation. People had to wait for long time for public transports like buses. Additionally, roads were also not well maintained. However, in modern era, everyone has own vehicles. Consequently, travelling is much easier and comfortable at present. Moreover, now every individual can learn about outer part of their country. As a result, people are getting more keen to learn something new. Now, on mobile they can install an application like Google Earth map and so on. They can find any location from their destinations and can travel everywhere without searching on paper maps. Hence, in previous times it was not possible. From security point of view people are now much safer than in past because many devices have installed on each and every corner of the society that's why people commit fewer crimes. To conclude, technology, without any doubt has spread much knowledge all around the world and has made our livesmuch easier than before.
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technologies
has made our

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lives
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much
easier. Science is a logical application with
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different
experiments which leads to research, discovery and innovations. Nowadays, science and
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technology
forms a life force that contributes to regulate our daily life.

Staring with common view, inventing various kinds of devices has made life more convenient. Although, this can create
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problems
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with the advent of
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technology
someone can feel pace of mind which is unavoidable. Taking communication for elaboration, in past times
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people
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used
to
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letters to their
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ones. Recipients
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after months
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they can drop a message to their relatives and friends within seconds through mobile phone and email. This is the fastest mode of interacting with blood relations.

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,
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before
searching modern
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technologies
there
were limited
modes of transportation.
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had to wait for long time for public transports like buses.
Additionally
, roads were
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not well maintained.
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, in modern era, everyone has
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own
vehicles.
Consequently
, travelling is
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much
easier and comfortable at present.
Moreover
,
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every individual can learn about outer part of their country.
As a result
,
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people
are getting more keen to learn something new.
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Now
, on mobile they can install an application like Google Earth map and
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on. They can find any location from their destinations and can travel everywhere without searching on paper maps.
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, in previous times it was not possible. From security point of view
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people
are
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now
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much
safer than in past
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many
devices have installed on each and every corner of the society that's
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why


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people
commit fewer crimes.

To conclude
,
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technology
, without any doubt has spread
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much
knowledge all around the world and has made our

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livesmuch
easier than
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IELTS academic DOES MODERN TECHNOLOGY MAKE LIFE MORE CONVENIENT OR WAS LIFE BETTER WHEN TECHNOLOGY WAS SIMPLER?

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