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Do you think richest countries help to poor countries

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In the current age of time there are a number of poorer nations in the world. Which can not basic facilities to our people's such as water food electricity and health services. These countries people demand our rights to elected government of these countries On the other hand, it can be seen that the richest country's in the map of the world. They provide all facilities to our nation's including health education and peace related needs. More over the economy of the richest countries is well stable and grow day by day as compared to poor countries. Further more we can say that richest countries operate to poor countries for various aspects such as provide loan and other facilities of these countries. In my opinion the richest countries should help to poorer countries due to the fact these countries could not survive without having support to the richest countries. At this time poorer countries fighting for poverty and other basic needs. I think the richest countries should collaborate to poorer country's for prevent of poverty and solve other problem. To conclude them the richest countries should give them money to poorer countries due to the fact the economy of poorer countries will grow from receiving financial resistance to the richest countries. I hope that richest countries will collaborate to poor countries
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country's in the map of the world. They provide all facilities to our nation's including health education and peace related needs. More over the economy of the
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is well stable and grow day by day as compared to poor
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IELTS academic Do you think richest countries help to poor countries

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