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Castellon in 2000 versus today

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The two map show the main changes which have taken place in the city of Castellon between the year 2000 and today. In general, it appears that Castellon has become a much more modern city, with far more public transportation facilities, safety, and entertainment. One interesting change is that there wasn't any accommodation for the students in the city back in 2000, but now a hall of residence has been built near the university to accommodate them. A new tramline has been constructed, to connect the university with the city center. Another striking change is that the old market in the west of the city has been demolished to make way for the new shops. A completely covered market has also been built on the east side of the city. If we look at the port area, it has been pedestrianized since 2000, and a lot of entertainment facilities such as cinema, bars, and clubs have been built for the people of Castellon to enjoy. the northeastern of the city used to be a green area, with lots of trees, but the trees have been cut and a new shopping center has been built. A final interesting development had been the introduction of the bike rental service in the city center.
The two map
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the main
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which have taken place in the city of
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Castellon
between the year 2000 and
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today
.

In general
, it appears that
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Castellon
has become a much more modern city, with far more public transportation facilities, safety, and entertainment.

One interesting
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change
is that there wasn't any accommodation for the students in the city back in 2000,
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but
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now
a hall of residence has
been built
near the university to accommodate them. A new
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tramline
has
been constructed
, to connect the university with the city center.

Another striking
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change
is that the
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old
market in the west of the city has
been demolished
to
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make
way for the new shops. A completely covered market has
also
been built
on the east side of the city.

If we look at the port area, it has
been pedestrianized
since 2000, and
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a lot of
entertainment facilities such as cinema, bars, and clubs have
been built
for the
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people
of
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Castellon
to enjoy.
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the northeastern of
the city
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used
to be a green area, with lots of trees,
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but
the trees have been
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cut
and a new shopping center has
been built
. A final interesting development had been the introduction of the bike rental service in the city center.
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