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Diagram of chocolate producing

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The given process diagram represents chocolate production. This essay will introduce the way how luqid chocolate is produced. Overall, it can be seen that there are 10 stages which is begun by growning up a cacao tree and ending with pressing the chocolate in order to make it liquid. At first, the grown pods are collected from America, Africa and Indonesia. Then beans which are the inner part of pods are fermented. By following it the fermented beans dry under the sun. The dried beans are packed into the big sacks. Next stage is that the lorry transports all row materials they have to the factory, where they will be heated up to the 350 degrees of C. The hot beans are crushed into the smal pieces and during this process shells will be removed. The press machine makes the powder into the liquid substance so chocolate is ready for consuming.

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 process diagram representsPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
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luqid
 chocolate is produced
.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that there are 10 stages which is begun
 by Possible spelling mistake found.growingdrowningcrowningBrowninggrowlingbrowning
growning
 up a cacao tree and ending with pressing the chocolate in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it liquid.

At first
, the grown pods are collected
 from America, Africa and Indonesia. Then You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 which are the inner part of pods are fermented
. By following it the fermented You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 dry under the sun. The dried You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
are packed
 into the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 sacks. Next
 stage is thatPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
the lorry transports all row materials they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 the factory, where they will be heated
 up to the 350 degrees of C. The hot You use this word too often, consider replacing it withkernelgrainberry
beans
 arePossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
crushed into the Possible spelling mistake found.smallsealSmallMALSEALSMA
smal
 pieces and during this process shells will be removed
. The press machine This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 the powder into the liquid substance This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 chocolate is ready for consuming. 