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The diagram illustrates the nine step process on how circuit-board is produced. Overall, It involves nine different stages beginning with delivery if circuit-board raw materials, then the sixth stage where chips from wasted chips discarded and finally ends when delivery to factories. At the beginning of the process, circuit-board raw materials are delivered, they are then cut and sprayed with fire retardant. After that, the cleaned materials are then loaded at a point they join the process stage from the other side, where final testing recycled back to automated IC attachment and soldering. In the next step, keen visual inspection is done, which is closely followed by quality control thereafter before testing takes place. At this point of time, chips from rejected board are discarded while approved quality are moved for final testing. Others are moved back the cycle leaving only good quality. The product is neatly packed and finally delivered to factories where they are used to make other electronics.
The diagram illustrates the
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nine step
process on how circuit-board
is produced
.

Overall
, It involves nine
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different
stages beginning with delivery if circuit-board raw materials, then the sixth stage where chips from wasted chips discarded and
finally
ends when delivery to factories.

At the beginning of the process, circuit-board raw materials
are delivered
, they are then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
and sprayed with fire retardant. After that, the cleaned materials are then loaded at a point they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
the process stage from the other side, where final testing recycled back to automated
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IC
attachment and soldering.

In the
next
step, keen visual inspection
is done
, which is
closely
followed by quality control thereafter
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before
testing takes place. At this point of time, chips from rejected board
are discarded
while approved quality are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
for final testing. Others are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
back the cycle leaving
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
quality. The product is
neatly
packed and
finally
delivered to factories where they are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
other electronics.

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