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Describing a map that has turned into city from a village.

Describing a map that has turned into city from a village. EeyD

The map illustrates how the village turned into more modernized area over the quarter century. Overall, the significant modifying arised to the south and northeast of area of the village. In 1995, there has situated farmland and woodland on the right of the area but it has converted sport facilities (golf land and tennis court) until present. Moreover, there was running fishing industry and there were a large commercial area that was sold fish on the south side of a land and fish markets and fish port demolished and they were turned into residental area. Furthermore, shops has modified into restaurants and there was built a park lot near hotel. As can be seen, there lies a housing area on the map, through the road on the northwest area and it has enlarged slightly during these years. In addition, there is a small change on the infrastructure on the left side of the the village and there was construct a street on the left hand corner on map.

The map illustrates how the village turned into more modernized You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 over the quarter century.

Overall
, the significant modifying Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "arose", the past tense form of the verb 'arise'?aroseraisedarisearisesarisenarsed
arised
 to the south and northeast of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 of the village.

In 1995, there has situated farmland and woodland on the right of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it has converted sport facilities (golf land and tennis court) until present. Moreover
, there was running fishing industry and there were a large commercial You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 that was sold
 fish on the south side of a land and fish markets and fish port Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).demolished, and
demolished and
 they were turned
 into Possible spelling mistake found.residential
residental
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. Furthermore
, shops has modified into restaurants and there was built
 a park lot near hotel.

As can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
, there lies a housing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 on the map, through the road on the northwest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 and it has enlarged slightly
 during these years. In addition
, there is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 on the infrastructure on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.the
the the
 village and there was construct a street on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 hand corner on map. 