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describing a graph which shows how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK

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This bar chart illustrates how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK between 2004 and 2014. There are two colored bars which the blue one represents the "home owner" and the green one is the "renters". the vertical axis shows the percent and the horizontal axis is year. According to this chart, the population of owners have decreased during these years about 22%. The trend between 2004 and 2007 is decreasing modestly but the drop in percent of owners begin in 2008 and continues to 2011. Number of owners have been stable for 3 years about 43% and, after that the decreasing trend have started again and in 2014 their percentage were about 35%. Despite of owner's trend, the trend of renters is increasing. The bars show percent of renters in 2004 are just of 20% while it's rose to 48% in 2014. On the other words, increased 28% during a 10-year period. This trend is absolutely match with owner trend. In fact, though, the number of renters rose by decreased the number of owners. Renters population substantial rose during 2008 to 2011. One point which should attend in the chart, is the different between renters and owners. In order to describe this parameter, the number of owners and renters should be compared in same year. For example, in 2008, this difference was about 30%. The graph shows must different was in 2004 and must similar in 2011 and 2012. The values are about 40% and 2% respectively. To sum up, the number of owners have decreased during 2004 to 2014 while the renters population have rose. this trend caused that in 2014, the number of renters were more than owners about 12% whereas in 2004, the owners had more than population about 38%.
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people
aged 25-34
are housed
in the UK between 2004 and 2014. There are two colored bars which the blue one represents the
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home owner
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and the green one is the
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renters
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the
vertical axis
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shows
the percent and the horizontal axis is
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year
. According to this chart, the
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population
of
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owners
have decreased during these years about 22%. The
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trend
between 2004 and 2007 is decreasing
modestly
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but
the drop in percent of
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owners
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in 2008 and continues to 2011.
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of
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owners
have been stable for 3 years about 43% and, after that the decreasing
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trend
have
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started
again and in 2014 their percentage were about 35%.
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owner's
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trend
, the
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is increasing. The bars
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show
percent of
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renters
in 2004 are
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of 20% while it's
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rose
to 48% in 2014. On the other words, increased 28% during a
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10-year
period. This
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match with
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owner
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. In fact, though, the
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number
of
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renters
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rose
by decreased the
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number
of
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owners
.
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Renters
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population
substantial
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during 2008 to 2011. One point which should attend in the chart, is the
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describe
this parameter, the
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number
of
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was in 2004 and
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similar in 2011 and 2012. The values are about 40% and 2%
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. To sum up, the
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of
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owners
have decreased during 2004 to 2014 while the
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renters
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caused that in 2014, the
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renters
were more than
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about 12% whereas in 2004, the
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had more than
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about 38%.

IELTS academic describing a graph which shows how people aged 25-34 are housed in the UK

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