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The table below shows the information about the average length of stay and spend of overseas to Austialia. Write a short report for a university lecture describing the changes.

The table below shows the information about the average length of stay and spend of overseas to Austialia. Write a short report for a university lecture describing the changes. yLRDg
The table provides information about the average of stay and spend of overseas vistos to Australia. Overall, the data in indicates that changes of the university lecture. we can see from the table, the most longest length of stay is 10 days in 1995, while it was 9 days in 1996, which is the shortest length. It can be seen that expenses of person visit get a raise from 287 A$ in 1994 to 630 A$ in 1996 but expenses of day and the days of stay have variation. Fristly, the days of stay rise from 9. 2 days to 10 days and the expenses of days reduce from 50. 5A$ to 49. 9A$ from 1994 to 1995. Secondly, the days of stay reduce from 10 days to 9 days and the expenses of days rise from 499A$ to 630A$ from 1995 to 1996. in 3 years, the difference in increase and decrease is not equal.
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from the table, the
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is 10 days in 1995, while it was 9 days in 1996, which is the shortest length. It can be
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that expenses of person visit
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a raise from 287
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in 1994 to 630
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in 1996
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expenses of day and the days of
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have variation.
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, the days of
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rise from 9. 2 days to 10 days and the expenses of days
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reduce
from 50. 5A$ to 49. 9A$ from 1994 to 1995.
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, the days of
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reduce
from 10 days to 9 days and the expenses of days rise from 499A$ to 630A$ from 1995 to 1996.
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in
3 years, the difference in increase and decrease is not equal.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the information about the average length of stay and spend of overseas to Austialia. Write a short report for a university lecture describing the changes.

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