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Overall, it is a natural and cyclical with seven phrases, commencing from fertilizing eggs in some place in a home and culminating with forming an adult fly.

Overall, it is a natural and cyclical with seven phrases, commencing from fertilizing eggs in some place in a home and culminating with forming an adult fly. BLag6
The presented diagram elucidates an illustration of the life cycle of a fly. Overall, it is a natural and cyclical with seven phrases, commencing from fertilizing eggs in some place in a home and culminating with forming an adult fly. At the initial stage, the adult pest flies fertilize their eggs in a home it is possible to protect and grow; then, those fertilized eggs become larvae; after that, the flies deposit their eggs in pupae, and they feed them by hook in order to grow them; in other words, the fly eggs grow up and take nutrients in the pupae Subsequently, in the pupae, the fly eggs have a body shapes, and they will be ready to go outside during this part. Afterward, a little fly will come out their pupae At the final stage phase, this young fly alters into a mature and adult pest fly.
The presented diagram elucidates an illustration of the life cycle of a
fly
.

Overall
, it is a natural and cyclical with seven phrases, commencing from fertilizing eggs in
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some
place in a home and culminating with forming an adult
fly
.

At the initial stage, the adult pest flies fertilize their eggs in a home it is possible to protect and grow; then, those fertilized eggs become larvae; after that, the flies deposit their eggs in pupae, and they feed them by hook in order to grow them;
in other words
, the
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fly
eggs grow up and take nutrients in the pupae

Subsequently
, in the pupae, the
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fly
eggs have a body shapes, and they will be ready to go outside during this part. Afterward, a
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little
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fly
will
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come
out their pupae

At the final stage phase, this young
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fly
alters into a mature and adult pest
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fly
.

IELTS academic Overall, it is a natural and cyclical with seven phrases, commencing from fertilizing eggs in some place in a home and culminating with forming an adult fly.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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