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Company celebrating 10th anniversary

Company celebrating 10th anniversary ORYWp

I am writing to enquire about venues for a conference dinner at your hotel. We are looking for a place at one garden big, one large room to celebrate my company 10th anniversary and this can accommodate 200 guests. We would like to set up a garden for guests to eat snacks and drinks before the event starts. We need to have a large room inside with round table and 10-12 people at each options. We are planning have a eat three-course meal, with vegetarian and vegan options. In addition, could you tell me know if you have microphone and good sound system for speeches? We would like hire band and we want to set up one space for dancing. And finaly, so could you tell me what your best price for this is?

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