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Co education and separate

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Last few year, parents think that their Children want to learn sty in Co-education Schoolsbut others individuals trust that separate Schools are better because they think In these Schools their Kids and Safe So they agree wille this Statement. But I try to discuss the both view and describe the benfit and nagelive effect - To commence with, In my opinio, mostly parents penfer to their Children go to mixed School plethorn & benefit of their infants and Children mentally level up day by day more over hand full negative point of view. Such as girl Safety because some girls are nots +Safe feel in Co-education School In addition, Some people think that Separate School are
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IELTS academic Co education and separate

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
115 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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