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chart on annual expenditures of a particular school in UK have changed over three years.

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The chart illustrates how the annual expenditures of a particular school in UK have changed over three years. Over the span of these years, stuff salary has remained being the highest cost with increment in the teacher’s salary from 40% in 1981 to 50% in 1991, while the salary of other stuff members showed a consecutive drop. Although, insurance cost remained constant with minimal change, the school spent more money on furniture and other resources in the following years. In summary, Although, teacher’s salary has persistently remained being the highest cost during those years, the cost on other resources has showed an inflation.
The chart illustrates how the annual expenditures of a particular school in UK have
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over three years.

Over the span of these years, stuff
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salary
has remained being the highest
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cost
with increment in the teacher’s
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salary
from 40% in 1981 to 50% in 1991, while the
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salary
of other stuff members
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showed
a consecutive drop. Although, insurance
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cost
remained constant with minimal
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change
, the school spent more money on furniture and other resources in the following years.

In summary, Although, teacher’s
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salary
has
persistently
remained being the highest
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cost
during those years, the
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cost
on other resources has
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showed
an inflation.
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IELTS academic chart on annual expenditures of a particular school in UK have changed over three years.

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3 paragraphs
103 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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