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One type of tree could be used for different purposes. A young tree for decoration, an older one for shade. It’s exactly like people. All people with different ages have free time, but they differ in how they use it. Does age impact how we will spend our free time? According to the table, teenagers have more free time. They tend to do more social activity on it – 350 hours doing activity with more than four people. In this age, friendship plays a major role in life. Tell me who your friends are. And, as the wise old saying goes, I will tell you who you are. On the other hand, people who are forty years old tend to have less social activity. Most of them spend a long time watching T. V. series. Folks keep watching for 500 hours about a month! At this age, their responsibilities hit the roof. If you were this age, wouldn’t you be fussy about choosing your friends? Yes! So it’s clear how people spend their time differently at different ages. Meanwhile as we turn the pages to age seventy and above, people keep in touch very little with those they love. Also, they don’t have any movement activities with others. They tend to stay home and be less active like an old tree which sticks in its place and is used for shade. People in each age practice certain activities. You won’t, in your twenties, enjoy the candy that is full of sugar as you did as a child.

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