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Changes made to West Park Secondary School from 1950 to 2010 are depicted by the three diagrams

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Changes made to West Park Secondary School from 1950 to 2010 are depicted by the three diagrams. Overall, it can be observed that the expansion of available study space has been emphasized and capacity of car park has been increased between 1980 and 2010. Between 1950 and 1980, significant overhaul of the infrastructure took place. The 3 row-houses beside the school were completely demolished and were replaced by a car parking area and science block. On the top of that, agricultural land beside the play ground was converted into a sports field. Between 1980 and 2010, minor changes were made in order to increase car parking space. To achieve this, the sports area and playground were shrunken down. The play area was cut down by approximately 20% while the space for sports was reduced to mere 25% of its original size and it was moved to the free space of playground.

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Changes
 made to West Park Secondary School from 1950 to 2010 are depicted
 by the three diagrams.

Overall
, it can be observed
 that the expansion of available study You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslotarenacapacityzoneareaspot
space
 has been emphasized
 and capacity of car park has been increased
 between 1980 and 2010.

Between 1950 and 1980, significant overhaul of the infrastructure took place. The 3 row-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 beside the school were completely demolished and were replaced
 by a car parking area and science block. On the top of that, agricultural land beside the play ground was converted
 into a sports field.

Between 1980 and 2010, minor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
were made
 in order to increase car parking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslotarenacapacityzoneareaspot
space
. To achieve this, the sports area and playground were shrunken down. The play area was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 down by approximately 20% while the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslotarenacapacityzoneareaspot
space
 for sports was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 to mere 25% of its original size and it was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the free You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslotarenacapacityzoneareaspot
space
 of playground. 