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British emigration to selected destination-2004-2007

The bar chart demonstrates the number of British emigrations to specified countries from 2004 to 2007. The horizontal line shows the countries and the vertical line shows the number in thousands, and the years demonstrated by colors. Overall, it can be seen that Australia is the most selected destination between 2002 to 2007, and after that, Spain, France, New Zealand, and the USA in consecutive order. The given data is based on the International Passenger Survey (ONS). The chart indicates that the number of passengers who emigrated to Australia, was at the highest number, just over than 50 thousand in 2006. The highest number in Spain took place in 2005, about 35 thousand, and in New Zealand, in 2004 we see the chart was on the highest number, and after that, it increases evidently. In the USA there is an up and down, which the highest number was in 2004 and then it decreased, but again in 2006, it revived to its highest record. In France, the number of passengers in 2005 was considerable, which it increased suddenly from 2004, but consequently, after 2005 it decreased gradually.

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