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based on the data in the pie chart on advertising spending in US (1997).

based on the data in the pie chart on advertising spending in US (1997). BLbd6
The given figure compares data on add productions expenditure in the USA 1997. Looking from an overall perspective, it is apparent that direct all witnessed the highest portion in all given nine sections while outdoor and business showed the least ones. As the chart highlights, direct mall that showed the highest percentage, newspaper and televisions demonstrated higher proportions rather than other 6 ones, with 25%, 23%, 21% respectively as well. Looking for details, in the fours place, 9% was represented by two categories that named radio, additionally cable TV. Those that followed by magazines with 6%. In the last positions, outdoor as well as business papers saw the same trend with 2 % respectively. It is interesting to note that internet amazingly demonstrated 3 %. That 1point higher that outdoor and business papers ones.
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figure compares data on
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productions expenditure in the USA 1997.

Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is apparent that direct all witnessed the highest portion in all
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given
nine sections while outdoor and business
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showed
the least ones.

As the chart highlights, direct mall that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
the highest percentage, newspaper and televisions demonstrated higher proportions
rather
than other 6 ones, with 25%, 23%, 21%
respectively
as well
.

Looking for
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details
, in the fours place, 9%
was represented
by two categories that named radio,
additionally
cable TV. Those that followed by magazines with 6%. In the last positions, outdoor
as well
as business papers
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saw
the same trend with 2 %
respectively
. It is interesting to note that internet
amazingly
demonstrated 3 %. That 1point higher that outdoor and business papers ones.
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