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A wave energy machine and also location of machines

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The diagram shows the mechanism of wave energy machines. These machines are located at the shore to any water resource. Mechanism takes place using the air and wave direction. Machine consists of two chambers, in that a turbine is provided in one of the chambers and the another one is for water level management. By the working of turbine, the generator attached to the machine produces electricity. This turbine uses the airflow from the top and also from the lower chamber of the water levels, then the airflow from the water levels gets released out through the turbine. The air released to the water levels is from outside. These machines are located in two options, one of the options requires high installation costs, it also produces high output with large waves. On the other hand, the small waves with low output is produced.
The diagram
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the mechanism of
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wave
energy
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machines
. These
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machines
are located
at the shore to any
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water
resource. Mechanism takes place using the air and
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wave
direction.
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Machine
consists of two chambers, in that a
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turbine
is provided
in one of the chambers and the another one is for
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water
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level
management. By the working of
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turbine
, the generator attached to the
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machine
produces electricity. This
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turbine
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uses
the airflow from the top and
also
from the lower chamber of the
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water
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levels
, then the airflow from the
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water
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levels
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gets
released out through the
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turbine
. The air released to the
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water
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levels
is from outside. These
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machines
are located
in two options, one of the options requires high installation costs, it
also
produces high output with large
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waves
.
On the other hand
, the
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small
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waves
with low output
is produced
.
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IELTS academic A wave energy machine and also location of machines

Academic
  American English
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143 words
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