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Why do you admire BTS? Why are they legends?

Why do you admire BTS? Why are they legends? YBVwK
When it comes to admiration, a number of us will mistake it for love and respect. In fact, admiration is the state that arises when we refer to someone whose talents and abilities are beyond the norm. It is not the same as the love and respect we have for our families. Admiration helps promote self-fulfillment through learning from models. For me, when it comes to idols or more, I would proudly say it's BTS. First and for most, I admire them because of their perseverance. Surely everyone is familiar with BTS, in light of the fact that now they are a global phenomenon who inspires young people around the world. Their songs all have a special meaning, the music products they produced always reach the top trending of numerous countries, not only breaking the world records, but also set new world records. The name BTS always appears on the charts and prestigious music awards such as Billboard Hot 100, Grammy, AAA. . . Moreover, they have 4 times recorded their name in the Guinness with their achievements. On the contrary, when looking at what they achieved, I trust that anyone think that it was an arduous and hard process, it was not a path of roses, it was a road full of thorns with sweat and tears. . . BTS, a boy band from Korea, comes from a tiny company, not extremely well-known in this harsh entertainment industry. Each member of the group is from a poor province, for their passion, they came to Seoul to fulfill their dreams in this harsh land. Obviously, prior to that, they had more choices to enter enormous and prominent corporations, nonetheless they refused and chose an unknown one like BigHit. Since their trainee days, they have faced with a plethora of difficulties, things that can make people collapse in a second and until debuting, those obstacles are unchanged. While new groups are always invested, supported and promoted by the mother company, they ought to fend for themselves. Instead of giving up, they kept going. If others songs are about love, BTS's music is life and youth. If the other waste time and money on parties, they still busy following their passion. They gradually turned to other concept of music, they wrote and made music with their experiences, about difficult youth and how they grow up, about how to listen to themselves and love themselves. Their music is blood sweat and tears, therefor listeners always find themselves in their songs. A cup, then a second one, then a glass case full of cups, they have achieved countless successes along the way, what music enthusiasts always aim for, they have become a leader, an inspiration to young people about self-love and a model for youngsters to follow. If other people started from zero, they would start from negative number, raise from nobodies to worldwide legends. Another and merit worth mentionary in that, I love BTS for their character. Since knowing them, I found that they are such appealing personalities. During 8 years following dreams, they have never got a scandal about attitude. The more they be famous, the more they be modest and hard-working. They are not afraid to try new concepts, create new songs, get advertising contracts. . . Their schedules are full from morning till night, but every time someone asks about work, they always say that it's nothing, they just work like other artists…Even if they earn a lot of money, they still lead a minimalist and frugal lifestyle, doing charity to help the poor and orphan. Colleagues always praise them as kind, polite and sociable people who are always ready to help others. BTS is famous for being fan-loving people. During the pandemic COVID-19, while other artists stopped working, they still sat for hours in the studio filming online concerts, live stream every week or interacting with fans on social networks. . . The relationship between them and the fans is always close. Last but not least, I like these guys so much in the light of the fact that the way they had been inspiring youngsters to love themselves and the way their songs became world’s motivation. Language difference, geographical distance can't stop BTS touching everyone’s hearts. That's what creates BTS' music special. I think language is not a barrier, the real reason they succeed in composing music is since they dare to step out of the norm and assert themselves. I remember the group's inspirational speech at the United Nations that went like this: "Instead, I fit myself into the mold that other people created. So I started not speaking up, started merely listening to other people say. . . My heart stopped beating, my eyes closed. Thus, me, we lost ourselves, we became like ghosts. I made mistakes in the past, though the “me” in the past is still me. Today I am me with all my faults and shortcomings. Tomorrow, even though I may be a little more mature, it's unchanged me. Mistakes and shortcomings made me a star. We've learned to love ourselves, and now we want you to have your say. I want to ask you: what's your name, what makes you like get excited and make your heart beat, tell me your story, I want to hear your voice, I want to hear your opinion. No matter who you are, where you are from, no matter the color of your skin you, your gender, say your voice", and after that speech, I was really impressed and loved and admired them even more. Their music is always alive and strong even during the COVID-19 pandemic. BTS's song ‘Dynamite’ has become a source of strength and encouragement for doctors and patients against the epidemic… BTS’ music always filled with magic and wonder, they can touch everyone heart by their own way. I haven't followed BTS since the first day. By chance, one time I heard their songs, read the lyrics, I felt that I had just found my own self, found its messages, moreover I understood their stories, I had amazed with their accomplishments and I have loved and admired them. Since knowing them, I feel that I understand life and understand myself better, form my dreams, make my life more meaningful and especially, I find that I have found someone who sympathizes and confides in me through their songs. In addition, I have learned a plethora of things from BTS’ music, I have never felt pity for being their fan, and I think they are a momentous part of my growth. It's not natural for BTS to be likened to be the second of The Beatles, all for their reasons, all worthy of their relentless efforts and talent. Their music is geared towards everyone. The one who inspires young people without dreams, teaches them to love themselves is BTS. From zero to hero, from unknown to legendary, it's BTS.
When it
comes
to admiration, a number of us will mistake it for
love
and respect. In fact, admiration is the state that arises when we refer to someone whose talents and abilities are beyond the norm. It is not the same as the
love
and respect we have for our families. Admiration
helps
promote self-fulfillment through learning from models. For me, when it
comes
to idols or more, I would
proudly
say
it's
BTS.

First
and for most, I admire them
because
of their perseverance.
Surely
everyone
is familiar with BTS, in light of the fact that
now
they are a global phenomenon
who
inspires young
people
around the
world
. Their songs all have a special meaning, the
music
products they produced always reach the top trending of numerous countries, not
only
breaking the
world
records,
but
also
set
new
world
records. The name BTS always appears on the charts and prestigious
music
awards such as Billboard Hot 100, Grammy, AAA.
.
.
Moreover
, they have 4
times
recorded their name in the Guinness with their achievements.
On the contrary
, when looking at what they achieved, I trust that anyone
think
that it was an arduous and
hard
process, it was not a path of roses, it was a road full of thorns with sweat and tears.
.
.
BTS, a boy band from Korea,
comes
from a tiny
company
, not
extremely
well
-known in this harsh entertainment industry. Each member of the group is from a poor province, for their passion, they came to Seoul to fulfill their
dreams
in this harsh land.
Obviously
, prior to that, they had more choices to enter enormous and prominent corporations, nonetheless they refused and chose an unknown one like
BigHit
. Since their trainee days, they have faced with a plethora of difficulties, things that can
make
people
collapse in a second and until debuting, those obstacles
are unchanged
. While
new
groups are always invested, supported and promoted by the mother
company
, they ought to fend for themselves.
Instead
of giving up, they
kept
going. If others songs are about
love
, BTS's
music
is life and youth. If the
other
waste
time
and money on parties, they
still
busy following their passion. They
gradually
turned to
other
concept of
music
, they wrote and made
music
with their experiences, about difficult youth and how they grow up, about how to listen to themselves and
love
themselves. Their
music
is
blood sweat and tears
, therefor listeners always find themselves in their songs. A cup, then a second one, then a glass case full of cups, they have achieved countless successes along the way, what
music
enthusiasts always aim for, they have become a leader, an inspiration to young
people
about self-
love
and a model for youngsters to follow. If
other
people
started
from zero, they would
start
from
negative
number, raise from nobodies to worldwide legends.

Another and merit worth
mentionary
in that, I
love
BTS for their character. Since knowing them, I
found
that they are such appealing personalities. During 8 years following
dreams
, they have never
got
a scandal about attitude. The more they be
famous
, the more they be modest and
hard
-working. They are not afraid to try
new
concepts, create
new
songs,
get
advertising contracts.
.
.
Their schedules are full from morning till night,
but
every
time
someone asks about work, they always say that
it's
nothing, they
just
work like
other
artists…
Even
if they earn
a lot of
money, they
still
lead a minimalist and frugal lifestyle, doing charity to
help
the poor and orphan. Colleagues always praise them as kind, polite and sociable
people
who
are always ready to
help
others. BTS is
famous
for being fan-loving
people
. During the pandemic COVID-19, while
other
artists
stopped
working, they
still
sat for hours in the studio filming online concerts,
live
stream every week or interacting with fans on social networks.
.
.
The relationship between them and the fans is always close.

Last
but
not least, I like these guys
so
much in the light of the fact that the way they had been inspiring youngsters to
love
themselves and the way their songs became
world’s
motivation. Language difference, geographical distance can't
stop
BTS touching
everyone’s
hearts
. That's what creates BTS'
music
special. I
think
language is not a barrier, the real reason they succeed in composing
music
is since they dare to step out of the norm and assert themselves. I remember the group's inspirational speech at the United Nations that went like this:
"
Instead
, I fit myself into the mold that
other
people
created.
So
I
started
not speaking up,
started
merely
listening to
other
people
say.
.
.
My
heart
stopped
beating, my eyes closed.
Thus
, me, we lost ourselves, we became like ghosts. I made mistakes in the past, though the “me” in the past is
still
me.
Today
I am me with all my faults and shortcomings. Tomorrow,
even though
I may be a
little
more mature,
it's
unchanged me. Mistakes and shortcomings made me a star. We've learned to
love
ourselves, and
now
we
want
you to have your say. I
want
to ask you: what's your name, what
makes
you like
get
excited and
make
your
heart
beat,
tell
me your story, I
want
to hear your voice, I
want
to hear your opinion. No matter
who
you are, where you are from, no matter the color of your skin you, your gender, say your voice
"
, and after that speech, I was
really
impressed and
loved
and admired them even more. Their
music
is always alive and strong even during the COVID-19 pandemic. BTS's song ‘Dynamite’ has become a source of strength and encouragement for doctors and patients against the epidemic… BTS’
music
always filled with magic and wonder, they can touch
everyone
heart
by their
own
way. I haven't followed BTS since the
first
day. By chance, one
time
I heard their songs, read the lyrics, I felt that I had
just
found
my
own
self,
found
its messages,
moreover
I understood their stories, I had amazed with their accomplishments and I have
loved
and admired them. Since knowing them, I feel that I understand life and understand myself better, form my
dreams
,
make
my life more meaningful and
especially
, I find that I have
found
someone
who
sympathizes and confides in me through their songs.
In addition
, I have learned a plethora of things from BTS’
music
, I have never felt pity for being their fan, and I
think
they are a momentous part of my growth.

It's not natural for BTS to
be likened
to be the second of The Beatles, all for their reasons, all worthy of their relentless efforts and talent. Their
music
is geared
towards
everyone
. The one
who
inspires young
people
without
dreams
, teaches them to
love
themselves is BTS. From zero to hero, from unknown to legendary,
it's
BTS.
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