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Stories are the sobriquet of Life.

Stories are the sobriquet of Life. Q891L
Humans are made up of flash, blood and heartbeats. If asked what is more important, we fail to answer. They are all interconnected. Now, the heartbeat has been the source of numerous poems, prose and ballads. But what keeps the heartbeats going? Memories, moments, stories? I am not trying to deal with the scientific aspects of it. Memories, moments, stories. Just the human aspects. The human aspect of living is making stories. Stories of first blush, first love, stories of heartbreak, of strength and honor, stories of raindrops, of your vintage books, stories of childhood and of growing old. Stories are little heartbeats, pocketed in time. Which we can tell anyone, write whoever we want. Etched in the stone left to be discovered after centuries, or scribble in a papyrus scroll and box it up to be treasured by time and dust or bottle it up and throw it into the ocean for the someone on the other side to fish it out and feel hopeful avout life. Stories are as many as there are human emotions. Have you ever tried? Counting the human emotions and putting it in a box, locked and stored? Not possible, is it? It breaths, Of style and simplicity brings in the renaissance of human empathy through it concise, incisive and creep narration. Putting in the worldly pomposity never makes a good story; putting in your experiences, feelings and vulnerability makes it a relatable one. It catches the eyes, touches the soul and makes you age with grace. Stories are the sobriquet of Life.
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up of flash, blood and
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heartbeats
. If asked
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, we fail to answer. They are all interconnected.

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, the
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has been the source of numerous poems, prose and ballads.

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But
what
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keeps
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heartbeats
going?

Memories, moments, stories?

I am not trying to deal with the scientific aspects of it.

Memories, moments, stories.

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Just
the
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human
aspects.

The
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aspect of living is making stories.

Stories of
first
blush,
first
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, stories of heartbreak, of strength and honor, stories of raindrops, of your vintage books, stories of childhood and of growing
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Stories are
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, pocketed in time.

Which we can
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anyone, write whoever we want.

Etched in the stone
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after centuries, or scribble in a papyrus scroll and box it up to
be treasured
by time and dust or bottle it up and throw it into the ocean for
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on the other side to fish it out and feel hopeful
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life.

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emotions.

Have you ever tried? Counting the
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emotions and putting it in a box, locked and stored?

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breaths,

Of style and simplicity

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brings
in the renaissance of
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empathy through it concise, incisive and creep narration.

Putting in the worldly pomposity never
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it a relatable one. It catches the eyes, touches the soul and
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you age with grace.

Stories are the sobriquet of Life.
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IELTS speaking Stories are the sobriquet of Life.

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21 paragraphs
259 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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