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The great time in Virginia

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Everyone has their dreams, likewise I also have ones. When I was a kid, I enjoyed doing some things that involved aesthetics including sketching, watercolor painting, art craft, and listening to some kinds of music that favored once upon a time I had taken the journey to America with my grandmother. The state where we live is Virginia which is a place of peace. This area was the ancient site of American primitive. During spending time I had been joyful to do many adventurous moments; Taking some pictures of the sky at night because I love watching the moon, Painting some of the landscape pictures while drinking milk tea made by my grandmother, and had taken over to The Chrysler art museum; There are lots of compulsive arts and fetching glass artworks These are all of the activities that spent with the good times I always adore that valuable time. I wish I would be there de novo.

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