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who is the hero of your life?why do you call him so?

who is the hero of your life? why do you call him so? n62yn

My mother is my hero of life. She was considerate she helped people without any expectation. She was trustworthy. In addition, you could tell her your secrets. She had a humble life. She never made me sad. She ……. . ? complained of problems, though her problems are huge. She always hoped to the future. She didn’t have bothering anybody. I’d like to be like her. In conclusion I try to live hopeful, resolve people’s need, and be useful in society.

My mother is my hero of life. She was considerate she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 without any expectation. She was trustworthy. In addition
, you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 her your secrets. She had a humble life. She never made me sad. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
She
 ……. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
 ? This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterComplained
complained
 of problems, though her problems are huge. She always hoped to the future. She didn’t have bothering anybody. I’d like to be like her. In The comma is probably missing here: "conclusion, I".conclusion, I
conclusion I
 try to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 hopeful, resolve This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
’s need, and be useful in society. 