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BTS – Rise from Nobodies to Legends

BTS – Rise from Nobodies to Legends 53G9e
When it comes to admiration, many of us will mistake it for love and respect. In fact, admiration is the state that arises when we refer to someone whose talents and abilities are beyond the norm. It is different from the love and respect we have for our families. Admiration helps promote self-fulfillment through learning from models. For me, when it comes to idols or more, I would proudly say it's BTS. Surely everyone is familiar with this name, because now they are a global phenomenon who inspires young people around the world. Their songs all have a special meaning, the music products they make always reach the top trending of many countries, even breaking the record of their seniors for 6 decades, moreover breaking the their records. The name BTS always appears on the charts and prestigious music awards such as Billboard hot 100, Grammy, AAA, . . . Moreover, they have 4 times recorded their name in the Guinness with their achievements. ARMY is the people who love and support BTS, they are a true "army", always supporting and loving BTS the way they do with their family. . . BTS and ARMY are two inseparable names, they always go together on the road to success. But when looking at what they achieved, does anyone think that it is an arduous and hard process, it is not a path of roses, it’s a road full of thorns with sweat and tears. . . BTS - a boy band from Korea, comes from a small company, not very famous in this harsh entertainment industry. Each member of the group is from a small town, because of their passion, they came to Seoul to fulfill their dreams in this harsh land. Obviously, before that, they had more choices to enter big and famous corporations, but they refused and chose a small one like Big Hit. Since their trainee days, they have faced many difficulties, things that can make people collapse in a second: huge amounts of debt, practicing in the basement, having to borrow each other's clothes, not enough money to eat. . . But with passion and understanding, they continued to walk together. . . Until their debut, everything seemed even more difficult. They debuted as an unpopular Hip Hop group, with many judgments, small fandom, fan meeting in the park, selling concert tickets on the street by themselves. . . That's different. While new groups are always invested, supported and promoted by the mother company, they have to fend for themselves. It was difficult, but instead of giving up, they kept going. If the songs out there are about love, BTS's music is life and youth. If the guys out there party, they still write music and dance. They gradually turned to different concept of music, they wrote and made music themselves with their experiences, about difficult youth and how people grow up, about how to listen to themselves and love themselves. Their music is blood sweat and tears, so listeners always find themselves in their songs. A cup, then a second one, then a glass case full of cups, they have achieved countless successes along the way, what music enthusiasts always aim for, they have become a leader, an inspiration to young people about self-love and a model for those who follow. If other people start from zero, they start from negative number, from nobodies to worldwide legends. That is BTS. I haven't followed BTS since the first day. But one day, when I heard their songs, read the lyrics, I felt that I had just found my own self, found its messages, moreover I understood their stories, I have loved and admired them. Since knowing them, I feel that I understand life and understand myself better, form my dreams, make my life more meaningful and especially, I find that I have found someone who sympathizes and confides in me through their songs. Language difference, geographical distance can't stop connecting BTS' hearts to everyone. That's what makes BTS' music special. I think language is not a barrier, the real reason they succeed is because they dare to step out of the norm and assert themselves. I remember the group's inspirational speech at the United Nations that went like this: "Instead, I fit myself into the mold that other people created. So I started not speaking up, started just listening to other people say. . . My heart stopped beating, my eyes closed. So me, we lost ourselves, we became like ghosts. I made mistakes in the past. , but the me in the past is still me. Today I am me with all my faults and shortcomings. Tomorrow, even though I may be a little more mature, it's still me. Mistakes and shortcomings made me a star. We've learned to love ourselves, and now we want you to have your say. I want to ask you: what's your name, what makes you like get excited and make your heart beat, tell me your story, I want to hear your voice, I want to hear your opinion. No matter who you are, where you are from, no matter the color of your skin you, your gender, say ti my voice", and after that speech, I was really impressed and loved and admired them even more. Their music is still alive and strong even during the COVID-19 pandemic. BTS's song "Dynamite" has become a source of strength and encouragement for doctors and patients against the epidemic… BTS’ music always fill with magic and wonder, they can touch everyone heart by their own way. As I mentioned, I have learnt many things from BTS’ music and I think they are a important part of my growth. It's not natural for BTS to be likened to be the second of The Beatles, all for their reasons, all worthy of their relentless efforts and talent. Their music is geared towards everyone. The one who inspires young people without dreams, teaches them to love themselves is BTS. From zero to hero, from unknown to legendary, it's BTS
When it
comes
to admiration,
many
of us will mistake it for
love
and respect. In fact, admiration is the state that arises when we refer to someone whose talents and abilities are beyond the norm. It is
different
from the
love
and respect we have for our families. Admiration
helps
promote self-fulfillment through learning from models. For me, when it
comes
to idols or more, I would
proudly
say it's BTS.

Surely
everyone
is familiar with this
name
,
because
now
they are a global phenomenon
who
inspires young
people
around the world. Their songs all have a special meaning, the
music
products they
make
always reach the top trending of
many
countries, even breaking the record of their seniors for 6 decades,
moreover
breaking
the their records
. The
name
BTS always appears on the charts and prestigious
music
awards such as
Billboard hot 100
, Grammy, AAA
, .
.
.
Moreover
, they have 4 times recorded their
name
in the Guinness with their achievements. ARMY is the
people
who
love
and support BTS, they are a true
"
army
"
, always supporting and loving BTS the way they do with their family.
.
.
BTS and ARMY are two inseparable
names
, they always go together on the road to success.
But
when looking at what they achieved, does anyone
think
that it is an arduous and
hard
process, it is not a path of roses, it’s a road full of thorns with sweat and tears.
.
.


BTS
-
a boy band from Korea,
comes
from a
small
company
, not
very
famous
in this harsh entertainment industry. Each member of the group is from a
small
town,
because
of their passion, they came to Seoul to fulfill their dreams in this harsh land.
Obviously
,
before
that, they had more choices to enter
big
and
famous
corporations,
but
they refused and chose a
small
one like
Big
Hit. Since their trainee days, they have faced
many
difficulties, things that can
make
people
collapse in a second: huge amounts of debt, practicing in the basement, having to borrow each other's clothes, not
enough
money to eat.
.
.
But
with passion and understanding, they continued to walk together.
.
.
Until their debut, everything seemed even more difficult. They debuted as an unpopular Hip Hop group, with
many
judgments,
small
fandom, fan meeting in the park, selling concert tickets on the street by themselves.
.
.
That's
different
. While new groups are always invested, supported and promoted by the mother
company
, they
have to
fend for themselves. It was difficult,
but
instead
of giving up, they
kept
going. If the songs out there are about
love
, BTS's
music
is life and youth. If the guys out there party, they
still
write
music
and dance. They
gradually
turned to
different
concept of
music
, they wrote and made
music
themselves with their experiences, about difficult youth and how
people
grow up, about how to listen to themselves and
love
themselves. Their
music
is
blood sweat and tears
,
so
listeners always find themselves in their songs. A cup, then a second one, then a glass case full of cups, they have achieved countless successes along the way, what
music
enthusiasts always aim for, they have become a leader, an inspiration to young
people
about self-
love
and a model for those
who
follow. If other
people
start
from zero, they
start
from
negative
number, from nobodies to worldwide legends.
That is
BTS.

I haven't followed BTS since the
first
day.
But
one day, when I heard their songs, read the lyrics, I felt that I had
just
found my
own
self, found its messages,
moreover
I understood their stories, I have
loved
and admired them. Since knowing them, I feel that I understand life and understand myself better, form my dreams,
make
my life more meaningful and
especially
, I find that I have found someone
who
sympathizes and confides in me through their songs. Language difference, geographical distance can't
stop
connecting BTS'
hearts
to
everyone
. That's what
makes
BTS'
music
special. I
think
language is not a barrier, the real reason they succeed is
because
they dare to step out of the norm and assert themselves. I remember the group's inspirational speech at the United Nations that went like this:
"
Instead
, I fit myself into the mold that other
people
created.
So
I
started
not speaking up,
started
just
listening to other
people
say.
.
.
My
heart
stopped
beating, my eyes closed.
So
me, we lost ourselves, we became like ghosts. I made mistakes in the past.
,
but
the me
in the past is
still
me.
Today
I am me with all my faults and shortcomings. Tomorrow,
even though
I may be a
little
more mature, it's
still
me. Mistakes and shortcomings made me a star. We've learned to
love
ourselves, and
now
we
want
you to have your say. I
want
to ask you: what's your
name
, what
makes
you like
get
excited and
make
your
heart
beat,
tell
me your story, I
want
to hear your voice, I
want
to hear your opinion. No matter
who
you are, where you are from, no matter the color of your skin you, your gender, say ti my voice
"
, and after that speech, I was
really
impressed and
loved
and admired them even more. Their
music
is
still
alive and strong even during the COVID-19 pandemic. BTS's song
"
Dynamite
"
has become a source of strength and encouragement for doctors and patients against the epidemic… BTS’
music
always fill with magic and wonder, they can touch
everyone
heart
by their
own
way. As I mentioned, I have
learnt
many
things from BTS’
music
and I
think
they are
a
important
part of my growth.

It's not natural for BTS to
be likened
to be the second of The Beatles, all for their reasons, all worthy of their relentless efforts and talent. Their
music
is geared
towards
everyone
. The one
who
inspires young
people
without dreams, teaches them to
love
themselves is BTS. From zero to hero, from unknown to legendary, it's
BTS
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