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Talk about a situation when you were surprised to see a person you know. v.1

Talk about a situation when you were surprised to see a person you know. v. 1
Talk about a situation when you were surprised to see a person you know. You should say: who this person was when and where you saw him/ her what you were doing then and explain why you were surprised to see this person. Model Answer 1: This is an easy, peasy topic for me to talk about! I can think of one particular situation that stands out in my memory when I bumped into someone totally unexpectedly, and in the most unlikely of situations. I’m going to enjoy telling you all about it, though I wonder if I’ll be able to convey to you exactly how bizarre it was that we met again in the way that we did.   I’ll explain who I met, when, where, what we were doing, and why it was such a big surprise for both of us. So the person I met was someone I’d been at school with. Now, for this story to make sense you have to know that I left school about thirty years ago, so I hadn’t seen this friend since the day we finished our exams three decades earlier. We were friendly at school, but not enough to keep in touch after we left, and as so often happens we went our different ways and had no idea at all what had happened to one another in the years that followed. A few years ago, I moved to Sheffield to take up a new job. I didn’t know the city or anyone in it. After I’d been there a couple of years, I decided I needed to get fit, and so when I heard about a local free 5km running event that took place every Saturday in a park near to where I lived I plucked up the courage to give it a go. Now, this was a really unlikely thing for me to do. I had never run before in my life, and it was not at all my natural habitat. I wasn’t very fast, but I did get round and in a peculiar way I enjoyed it enough that I went back again the following week. To my absolute amazement, it was at this return visit that I spotted a familiar face in the crowd of nearly 500 runners.   Someone I recognised from school! The weird thing was that I didn’t even know she’d also moved to Sheffield (we both went to school just outside London which is 200 miles away), what’s more, neither of us was remotely sporty at school, so seeing her there, so far from where we used to live, doing such an unlikely activity as running and recognising her after thirty years in such a big crowd was extraordinary! Even more amazingly, I just went up to her and said ‘hello Delia’ and she replied ‘hello Lucy’ and we just knew each other straight away. We were both amazed! We went off to have breakfast together and talked solidly for over three hours. (It was a long breakfast! ). It turned out she’d moved to Sheffield straight after doing her A-levels, so had lived here for years and years, and what’s more, her house was just a couple of miles away from the flat I was renting. We seemed to pick up exactly where we’d left off. Better than that really. We now meet up to run and then have breakfast together every week, but we also do other things like go to the cinema or theatre together. I help her on her allotment sometimes and she has been a great friend to me. I feel so lucky that this unlikely and unexpected meeting helped me to reconnect with a good friend from the past. It goes to show it pays to have your eyes peeled and your wits about you when you are out and about – you never know who you might encounter unexpectedly and where it might lead! ‘Surprise’ isn’t quite a big enough word for how I felt spotting her, but I’m so glad I did. [ Written by - Lucy Marris:   Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam) ]   Sample Answer 2: Meeting with people is interesting to me, especially when I meet people who were or are usually close to me. But suddenly meeting with a familiar one in a different place is more interesting and this is surprising as well. I met with Mr. David Johnson, my former teacher in Australia, at a shopping mall here in Tokyo, Japan and for this cue card topic, I would like to share this experience with you. In fact, I was a student of arts in Australia at the University of South Australia. I went there with a scholarship for higher education. Mr. Johnson was the associate professor of English literature there. I had an intimate contact with him while my study in Australia. But after I came back in Japan, my native land, the communications were a bit slower. Actually, I did not have any communication with the university anymore. So, there was a huge communication gap between me and my university, teachers and other students. I got busy with the family business here and thus I was unable to keep in touch with them anymore. Mr. Johnson is a great speaker and able to make things clearer in simple ways. He used to teach the novels and poems composed in Middles Age. He is really a man of letters and knows much about his subject. He loves his students as well and keeps close relations with them. It helps him to know more about the students and monitor their activities as well. Mr. Johnson is a smart and witty individual and owns clear idea about the teaching methods. I also maintained a close association with him and received many suggestions from him in my needs. Sudden meet with him at a local shopping mall in Tokyo surprised me greatly. In fact, I had not thought to meet him here. I met him last in Australia while my departure. He came to bade me farewell. But now meeting him in my country created a sense of joy inside me. I have to maintain my family business. Actually, I am the only boy of my family. So, I have to attend in different activities to run the family business. We deal with different things. The most profitable business is the clothing. We import different types of attires in Tokyo and sell them in local shopping malls. We also proudly own one of the best chain shops of the city. I was busy in talking with some of the staffs when I met Mr. Johnson. He was shopping at the store. He saw me first and approached to me and I really was glad. I was overwhelmed with joy. I met him last about five years ago when I left my Australian university. I welcomed him warmly to my country and entertained him as much was possible for me right then. I also presented with some of the items which made him happy indeed. But I was really surprised to see him in Japan. I could not think that he would ever come to my country. He came in Japan to attend a conference and told me that he lost my address. I also informed him about my engagement with the business. I have to travel in different Asian countries for collecting necessary items and products for my shops and selling points. Moreover, I also remain busy in different other issues like resolving problems with staffs, corporate relations and communication with both the clients and suppliers and much more. As a result, I cannot manage time for myself too. So, meeting with familiar people really makes me glad but I was extremely surprised with Mr. Johnson as it was beyond my expectation.
Talk about a situation when you were
surprised
to
see
a
person
you
know
. You should say:
who
this
person
was when and where you
saw
him/ her what you were
doing
then and
explain
why you were
surprised
to
see
this
person
. Model Answer 1:

This is an easy,
peasy
topic for me to talk about! I can
think
of one particular situation that stands out in my memory when I bumped into someone
totally
unexpectedly
, and in the most
unlikely
of situations. I’m going to enjoy telling you all about it, though I wonder if I’ll be able to convey to you exactly how bizarre it was that we
met
again in the
way
that we did.
 
I
’ll
explain
who
I
met
, when, where, what we were
doing
, and why it was such a
big
surprise for both of us.
So
the
person
I
met
was someone I’d been at
school
with.
Now
, for this story to
make
sense you
have to
know
that I
left
school
about thirty years ago,
so
I hadn’t
seen
this friend since the day we finished our exams three decades earlier. We were friendly at
school
,
but
not
enough
to
keep
in touch after we
left
, and as
so
often
happens we
went
our
different
ways
and had no
idea
at all what had happened to one another in the years that followed. A few years ago, I
moved
to Sheffield to take up a new job. I didn’t
know
the city or anyone in it. After I’d been there a couple of years, I decided I needed to
get
fit, and
so
when I heard about a local free
5km
running
event
that took place every Saturday in a park near to where I
lived
I plucked up the courage to give it a go.
Now
, this was a
really
unlikely
thing for me to do. I had never run
before
in my life, and it was not at all my natural habitat. I wasn’t
very
fast
,
but
I did
get
round and in a peculiar
way
I enjoyed it
enough
that I
went
back again the following week. To my absolute amazement, it was at this return visit that I spotted a familiar face in the crowd of
nearly
500 runners.
 
Someone I
recognised
from
school
! The weird thing was that I didn’t even
know
she’d
also
moved
to Sheffield (we both
went
to
school
just
outside London which is
200 miles
away), what’s more, neither of us was
remotely
sporty at
school
,
so
seeing her there,
so
far from where we
used
to
live
,
doing
such an
unlikely
activity as running and
recognising
her after thirty years in such a
big
crowd was extraordinary! Even more
amazingly
, I
just
went
up to her and said ‘hello Delia’ and she replied ‘hello Lucy’ and we
just
knew
each
other
straight away. We were both amazed! We
went
off to have breakfast together and talked
solidly
for over three hours. (It was a long breakfast!
)
. It turned out she’d
moved
to Sheffield straight after
doing
her A-levels,
so
had
lived
here for years and years, and what’s more, her
house
was
just
a couple of miles away from the flat I was renting. We seemed to pick up exactly where we’d
left
off. Better than that
really
. We
now
meet
up to run and then have breakfast together every week,
but
we
also
do
other
things like go to the cinema or
theatre
together. I
help
her on her allotment
sometimes and
she has been a great friend to me. I feel
so
lucky that this
unlikely
and unexpected
meeting
helped
me to reconnect with a
good
friend from the past. It goes to
show
it pays to have your eyes peeled and your wits about you when you are out and about
you never
know
who
you might encounter
unexpectedly
and where it might lead! ‘Surprise’ isn’t quite a
big
enough
word for how I felt spotting her,
but
I’m
so
glad I did.
[
Written by
-
Lucy
Marris
:
 
Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam)
]
 
Sample Answer
2: Meeting
with
people
is
interesting to me,
especially
when I
meet
people
who
were or are
usually
close to me.
But
suddenly
meeting
with a familiar one in a
different
place is more interesting and this is surprising as
well
. I
met
with Mr. David Johnson, my former teacher in Australia, at a
shopping
mall here in Tokyo,
Japan
and for this cue card topic, I would like to share this experience with you.

In fact, I was a
student
of arts in Australia at the
University
of South Australia. I
went
there with a scholarship for higher education. Mr. Johnson was the associate professor of English literature there. I had an intimate contact with him while my study in Australia.
But
after I came back in
Japan
, my native land, the communications were a bit slower.
Actually
, I did not have any
communication
with the
university
anymore.
So
, there was a huge
communication
gap between me and my
university
, teachers and
other
students
. I
got
busy with the
family
business
here and
thus
I was unable to
keep
in touch with them anymore.

Mr. Johnson is a great speaker and able to
make
things clearer in simple
ways
. He
used
to teach the novels and poems composed in Middles Age. He is
really
a
man
of letters and
knows
much about his subject.
He
loves
his
students
as
well
and
keeps
close relations with them. It
helps
him to
know
more about the
students
and monitor their activities as
well
. Mr. Johnson is a smart and witty individual and
owns
clear
idea
about the teaching methods. I
also
maintained a close association with him and received
many
suggestions from him in my needs. Sudden
meet
with him at a local
shopping
mall in Tokyo
surprised
me
greatly
. In fact, I had not
thought
to
meet
him here. I
met
him last in Australia while my departure. He came to bade me farewell.
But
now
meeting
him in my
country
created a sense of joy inside me.

I
have to
maintain my
family
business
.
Actually
, I am the
only
boy of my
family
.
So
, I
have to
attend in
different
activities to run the
family
business
. We deal with
different
things. The most profitable
business
is the clothing. We import
different
types of attires in Tokyo and sell them in local
shopping
malls. We
also
proudly
own
one of the best chain shops of the city. I was busy in talking with
some of the
staffs when I
met
Mr. Johnson. He was
shopping
at the store. He
saw
me
first
and approached to me and I
really
was glad. I
was overwhelmed
with joy. I
met
him last about five years ago when I
left
my Australian
university
.
I
welcomed him
warmly
to my
country
and entertained him as much was possible for me
right
then.
I
also
presented with
some of the
items which made him happy
indeed
.

But
I was
really
surprised
to
see
him in
Japan
. I could not
think
that he would ever
come
to my
country
. He came in
Japan
to attend a conference and
told
me that he lost my address. I
also
informed him about my engagement with the
business
. I
have to
travel in
different
Asian
countries
for collecting necessary items and products for my shops and selling points.
Moreover
, I
also
remain busy in
different
other
issues like resolving problems with staffs, corporate relations and
communication
with both the clients and suppliers and much more.
As a result
, I cannot manage time for myself too.
So
,
meeting
with familiar
people
really
makes
me glad
but
I was
extremely
surprised
with Mr. Johnson as it was beyond my expectation.
17Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
109Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
27Mistakes

IELTS speaking Talk about a situation when you were surprised to see a person you know. v. 1

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  American English
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