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Describe a place that can be good to relax (except home). v.1

Describe a place that can be good to relax (except home). v. 1
Describe a place that can be good to relax (except home). You should say: where this place is what it is like what you can do there and explain why you think it is a good place to relax. Sample Answer 1: Thank you for this nice topic and the time you allowed me to talk about a place which is good to relax. Without any doubt, most of the people would consider their home for the ideal place to relax. I would also agree with them but this cue card topic specifically  instructs to pick a different place than my home. Well, a park which is located near my home, in my opinion, is also a very good place to relax. The park I am talking about is called (. . . give a park's name which is located near your home. . . ) and it takes only 15 minutes for me to reach there from my home. This is a beautiful park and I feel quite relaxed there. Every time I go there, I feel a different kind of peace that the busy city, where I live in, rarely offers. The scenic beauty, the large lake, places for picnic, boat rides, green vista, harmonic songs of nature, the chirping of the birds, sweet aroma of  different flowers make it a paradise. Interestingly this place is preferred by many young artists and it is quite common to spot an artist busy in his work inside this park. Usually, I go there to walk or to get away from the crowd. It is also a good place to read books or newspapers. I often take a book and read under one of the large trees. When I go there with my friends, I mostly prefer to sit beside the lake and gossip with them. The total area of the park is more than 100 acres and it is maintained by the Metropolitan Park Authority. The busy city has very fewer places like this one. Once inside, I can forget the busy schedule, think clearly, concentrate on revising my plans, breathe fresh air, sit in a silent corner of the park and can read books or a magazine without any interruption. It might sound a bit awkward but I one spelt there under a tree. I was quite stressed out and tired after a long and busy day. On my way home, I went to this park and sat under a tree. After a while, I fall asleep. I have never told about this anyone. Probably you are the first person I am telling this and to explain how good a place this is! The beautiful trees, sweet gentle breeze, symphonious ripples on the lake and various beautiful birds make it an ideal place to remain close to nature, think about ourselves without any disturbance, relax our mind and get away from the monotonous city life. I know this park for a long time and I have been there for countless times. This is an excellent place where I can relax and I believe I will go there many more times as long as I live in this city.   Sample Answer 2: Relaxation is one of the greatest demands for people and they need it indeed to remain active and vigorous in their day to day life. I also have a place for relaxation and the place is a public library. I love to spend time here by reading different books which makes me feel relaxed. It may sound weird to many that I go to a library for relaxation despite numerous other methods. But the preference of relaxation differs from person to person. I love to read books and in a quiet place. Accordingly, a library is the right place for me. The New Orleans Public Library is just a few blocks away from my home and I often visit the place to read books. In fact, this is the only place in the entire city where I can have some quietness. This is a large place. It appears to me that the entire history of human and civilization is kept in the books on the shelves. The library also comes with some other features. There are plenty of spaces to take a book and start reading them. It really looks good to see a large number of books well decorated in the huge shelves. Besides, the variety of the books is another interesting issue. Almost all types of books are available here. This is like a heavenly place where everyone is busy with reading books. The seating arrangements are also fine and comfortable. I love the way to collect books and borrow them for reading at home as well. My initial purpose is to read books at the library. But there are some preconditions to read inside the library. This is the place where nobody is allowed to break the silence. If I need something or to do something else, I need to do it silently. I love the way of working in a silent manner. Besides, I am also allowed to borrow books of my interest. I am a member of this public library and often bring books at home which I cannot finish reading in the library. Further, I am happy to have this library adjacent to me as I do not need to spend more time on visiting the place. I can reach the library within a few minutes from my residence. Sometimes, I take light snacks from the coffee shop inside the library. But mostly I spend time in reading there and it is in the evening. This is a good place in many view. Firstly, this is an interesting place to sit and relax with the books. While reading books, I feel a sense of peace inside me. In fact, reading books brings the inner peace and satisfies the mind. Besides, there are variety of books available and I can take any one of them after my taste. I also like the environment of the library. Everyone is busy with their respective activities. There is no chaos but everything is running smoothly inside the building without any noise. Besides, this is a very good place to relax and anyone can read books as long as they want before the closure of the library. Considering all such benefits and features, this is a good place for relaxation to me.
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Describe
a
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place
that can be
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good
to
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relax
(except home). You should say: where this
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place
is what it is like what you can do there and
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explain
why you
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think
it is a
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good
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place
to
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relax
. Sample Answer 1:

Thank you for this nice topic and the
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time
you
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allowed
me to talk about a
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place
which is
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good
to
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relax
. Without any doubt, most of the
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people
would consider their home for the ideal
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place
to
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relax
. I would
also
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agree
with them
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but
this cue card topic
specifically
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instructs to pick a
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different
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place
than my home.
Well
, a
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park
which
is located
near my home, in my opinion, is
also
a
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very
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good
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place
to relax.

The
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park
I am talking about
is called
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.
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.
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give
a park's name which
is located
near your home.
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.
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)
and it takes
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only
15 minutes for me to reach there from my home. This is a
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beautiful
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park
and I
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feel
quite relaxed there. Every
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time
I go there, I
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feel
a
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different
kind of peace that the
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busy
city, where I
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live
in, rarely offers. The scenic beauty, the
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large
lake,
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places
for picnic, boat rides, green vista, harmonic songs of nature, the chirping of the birds, sweet aroma of
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different
flowers
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make
it a paradise.
Interestingly
this
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place
is preferred
by
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many
young artists and it is quite common to spot an artist
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busy
in his work
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inside
this park.

Usually
, I go there to walk or to
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get
away from the crowd. It is
also
a
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good
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place
to
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read
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books
or newspapers. I
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often
take a
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book
and
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read
under one of the
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large
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trees
. When I go there with my friends, I
mostly
prefer to sit beside the lake and gossip with them. The total area of the
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park
is more than 100 acres and it
is maintained
by the Metropolitan
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Park
Authority.

The
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busy
city has
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very
fewer
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places
like this one. Once
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inside
, I can forget the
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busy
schedule,
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think
clearly
, concentrate on revising my plans, breathe fresh air, sit in a silent corner of the
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park
and can
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read
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books
or a magazine without any interruption. It might sound a bit awkward
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but
I
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one
spelt there under a
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tree
. I was quite
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stressed
out and tired after a
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long
and
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busy
day. On my way home, I went to this
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park
and sat under a
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tree
. After a while, I fall asleep. I have never
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told
about this anyone.
Probably
you are the
first
person I am telling this and to
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explain
how
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good
a
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place
this is!

The
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beautiful
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trees
, sweet gentle breeze,
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symphonious
ripples on the lake and various
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beautiful
birds
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make
it an ideal
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place
to remain close to nature,
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think
about ourselves without any disturbance,
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relax
our mind and
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get
away from the monotonous city life. I know this
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park
for a
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long
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time
and I have been there for countless
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times
. This is an excellent
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place
where I can
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relax
and I believe I will go there
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many
more
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times
as
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long
as I
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live
in this city.
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Sample Answer
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2: Relaxation
is one of the greatest demands for
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people and
they
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need
it
indeed
to remain active and vigorous in their
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day to day
life. I
also
have a
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place
for
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relaxation
and the
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place
is a public library. I
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love
to spend
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time
here by
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reading
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different
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books
which
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makes
me
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feel
relaxed.

It may sound weird to
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many
that I go to a library for
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relaxation
despite numerous other methods.
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But
the preference of
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relaxation
differs from person to person. I
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love
to
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read
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books
and in a quiet
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place
.
Accordingly
, a library is the
right
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place
for me. The New Orleans Public Library is
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just
a few blocks away from my home and I
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often
visit the
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place
to
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read
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books
. In fact, this is the
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only
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place
in the entire city where I can have
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some
quietness.

This is a
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large
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place
. It appears to me that the entire history of human and civilization is
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kept
in the
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books
on the shelves. The library
also
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comes
with
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some
other features. There are
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plenty
of spaces to take a
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book
and
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start
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reading
them. It
really
looks
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good
to
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see
a
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large
number of
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books
well
decorated in the huge shelves.
Besides
, the variety of the
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books
is another interesting issue. Almost all types of
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books
are available here. This is like a heavenly
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place
where everyone is
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busy
with
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reading
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books
. The seating arrangements are
also
fine and comfortable. I
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love
the way to collect
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books
and borrow them for
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reading
at home as
well
.

My initial purpose is to
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read
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books
at the library.
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But
there are
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some
preconditions to
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read
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inside
the library. This is the
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place
where nobody is
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allowed
to break the silence. If I
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need
something or to do something else, I
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need
to do it
silently
. I
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love
the way of working
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in a silent manner
.
Besides
, I am
also
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allowed
to borrow
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books
of my interest. I am a member of this public library and
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often
bring
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books
at home which I cannot finish
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reading
in the library.
Further
, I am happy to have this library adjacent to me as I do not
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need
to spend more
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time
on visiting the
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place
. I can reach the library within a few minutes from my residence.
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Sometimes
, I take light snacks from the coffee shop
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inside
the library.
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But
mostly
I spend
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time
in
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reading
there and it is in the evening.

This is a
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good
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place
in
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many view
.
Firstly
, this is an interesting
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place
to sit and
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relax
with the
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books
. While
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reading
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books
, I
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feel
a sense of peace
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inside
me. In fact,
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reading
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books
brings the inner peace and satisfies the mind.
Besides
, there are variety of
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books
available and I can take any one of them after my taste. I
also
like the environment of the library. Everyone is
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busy
with their respective activities. There is no chaos
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but
everything is running
smoothly
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inside
the building without any noise.
Besides
, this is a
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very
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good
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place
to
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relax
and anyone can
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read
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books
as
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long
as they want
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before
the closure of the library. Considering all such benefits and features, this is a
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good
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place
for
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relaxation
to me.
21Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
145Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a place that can be good to relax (except home). v. 1

Speaking
  American English
11 paragraphs
1076 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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