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Talk about a historical building in your country or city that you know. v.1

Talk about a historical building in your country or city that you know. v. 1
Talk about a historical building in your country or city that you know. You should say: what and where is it? when was it built? Why? what is it known for? and describe this historic building. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer 1: I live in England in the United Kingdom where we have a wealth of historic buildings. For this topic, I could take my pick from castles, to manor houses and even prehistoric stone circles! I am spoilt for choice in thinking about what historic structure to talk about. However, instead of telling you about one of our more obvious and famous places, I want to tell you about a little piece of living history that is near to where I currently live in Sheffield. I shall tell you what and where it is; and fill in as many details as I can about when it was built; why; what it is known for and describe it as best I can. I first came across this construction when I was exploring a woodland trail near to where I had just moved to in Sheffield after I had to relocate to this city for work. Hidden in amongst the trees, and next to a carefully constructed waterway where the narrow river seemed to have been diverted, was a humble looking stone-built workshop of some sort. When I first discovered it, the building was very run-down, almost completely derelict. Although it was clearly part of the area’s industrial heritage, I had no idea what it was originally built for. It was overgrown with trees, brambles and ivy, and the wooden shutters on the windows were falling off and rotting away. Someone must have told me it was known locally as ‘The Shepherd Wheel’ but that made little sense. It didn’t seem to be in an area where sheep would be kept, and it seemed more likely it was for some sort of semi-industrial purpose, but what? So the building is ‘The Shepherd Wheel’ and it is in the woodland of the Porter Valley, in the south-west outskirts of the city of Sheffield. As to when it was built and why? - it took me a while to find this out! Over the course of the next couple of years, some money was made available by some sort of heritage trust, and a project commenced to return the building to its former glory. As part of the restoration project, some care was taken to put up signs explaining the history of the site, and eventually, I learned much more about it, and have been in to see the renovations, and even participated in some of the work to do so. Only last year I spent a morning volunteering on the project helping to paint the newly crafted wooden shutters on the windows, to protect them from the elements of driving rain. So I can now tell you that this construction is connected to the knife-grinding industry for which Sheffield was once renowned. Even today Sheffield has a proud heritage of Sheffield Steel, and many of the buildings in the city are linked to the Steel industry and the work of ‘the cutlers’ who for some 400 years created fine knives, blades and other steel products. The building, is in fact, a surviving example of a cottage industry that was once widespread in the valley. Set in the picturesque valley of the Porter Brook, this Shepherd Wheel is a unique, now once again working example of Sheffield knife grinding industry. At one time there were many such small water-powered grinding workshops along Sheffield's rivers abut now this alone remains. I am told it is the earliest complete example of this industry with evidence dating it back to the 1500s. That is an extraordinary notion. That site has been worked for generations, a water wheel turning there since 1584 – or even earlier. It was mentioned in a will of that date when the wheel owner passed it to his sons, who knows how much further back in time something was first constructed on this site? From the outside, it is a single storey stone building, with windows at the side.   Inside is an open workshop that seems dark, despite the extent of the windows. However, at the side of the building, and this is what has now been restored to working order, is an enormous water wheel. Powered by the force of water diverted from the river to power the wheel, it turns, and through a clever mechanism provides the energy to power grit stones on which knives were sharpened as they rotated within the workshop itself.   Amazingly, the restoration project has managed to find photographs of people who worked in the Shepherd Wheel building toward the end of its time as a thriving industry, together with various tools and equipment that are now all on display. Pride of place is given to the two grinding hulls, grinding wheels and, of course, the waterwheel itself. It is a small working museum, staffed largely by volunteers. It is only open for a few days throughout the year, but well worth the visit.   On special days they will get the wheel turning, and give educational tours. You can begin to imagine how in this workshop, in dark, damp conditions, skilled grinders produced fine, sharp cutting edges. It was not until the 1930s that grinding ceased and the Wheel's pivotal role in Sheffield's cutlery industry ended, so this is relatively recent history, just about within living memory even though the site itself goes back for hundreds of years. I love this building, it is in a beautiful location, and has a solidity to it that pleases me. It is a link to our local industrial heritage. For those that worked there, the work was really hard. Back breaking, and very dusty conditions with the blade on the grindstones generating lots of dust. I suppose that’s where the phrase ‘keeping your nose to the grindstone’ comes from, bent double over a wheel, knife grinders had to lean right into the gritstone to sharpen blades, sometimes even lying flat on their fronts, with their faces near the grindstone in order to hold the blades against the stone. Lovely as the building is, and important as the heritage is, it is perhaps unwise to romanticise the reality of what it would be like to work there. All the same, I’m so happy that people have made the effort to restore the works, it is important to remember how working life was for local people in times past. [Written by - Lucy Marris (2016):   Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam)]
Talk about a historical
building
in your country or city that
you know
. You should say: what and where is it?
when
was it built? Why?
what
is it known for?
and
describe
this historic
building
. [You will
have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
think
about what you're going to say. You can
make
some
notes to
help
you if you wish.
]
Sample Answer 1:

I
live
in England in the United Kingdom where we have a wealth of historic
buildings
. For this topic, I could take my pick from castles, to manor
houses
and even prehistoric
stone
circles! I am
spoilt
for choice in thinking about what historic structure to talk about.
However
,
instead
of telling you about one of our more obvious and
famous
places, I want to
tell
you about a
little
piece of living history
that is
near to where I
currently
live
in Sheffield.

I shall
tell
you what and where it is; and fill in as
many
details
as I can about when it
was built
; why; what it
is known
for and
describe
it as best I can.

I
first
came across this construction when I was exploring a woodland trail near to where I had
just
moved
to in Sheffield after I had to relocate to this city for
work
. Hidden in amongst the trees, and
next
to a
carefully
constructed waterway where the narrow river seemed to have
been diverted
, was a humble looking stone-built
workshop
of
some
sort. When I
first
discovered it, the
building
was
very
run-down, almost completely derelict. Although it was
clearly
part of the area’s industrial
heritage
, I had no
idea
what it was
originally
built for. It was overgrown with trees, brambles and ivy, and the wooden shutters on the windows were falling off and rotting away. Someone
must
have
told
me it
was known
locally
as ‘The
Shepherd
Wheel’
but
that made
little
sense. It didn’t seem to be in an area where sheep would be
kept
, and it seemed more likely it was for
some
sort of semi-industrial purpose,
but
what?
So
the
building
is ‘The
Shepherd
Wheel’
and it is in the woodland of the Porter Valley, in the south-west outskirts of the city of Sheffield. As to when it
was built
and why?
-
it took me a while to find this out!

Over the course of the
next
couple of years,
some
money
was made
available by
some
sort of
heritage
trust, and a
project
commenced to return the
building
to its former glory. As part of the restoration
project
,
some
care
was taken
to put up signs explaining the history of the site, and
eventually
, I learned much more about it, and have been in to
see
the renovations, and even participated in
some of the
work
to do
so
.
Only
last
year
I spent a morning volunteering on the
project
helping to paint the
newly
crafted wooden shutters on the windows, to protect them from the elements of driving rain.

So
I can
now
tell
you that this construction
is connected
to the knife-grinding
industry
for which Sheffield was once renowned. Even
today
Sheffield has a proud
heritage
of Sheffield Steel, and
many
of the
buildings
in the city
are linked
to the Steel
industry
and the
work
of ‘the cutlers’ who for
some
400 years created fine knives,
blades
and other steel products. The
building
, is in fact, a surviving example of a cottage
industry
that was once widespread in the valley. Set in the picturesque valley of the Porter Brook, this
Shepherd
Wheel
is a unique,
now
once again
working
example of Sheffield knife grinding
industry
. At one
time
there were
many
such
small
water-powered grinding
workshops
along Sheffield's rivers abut
now
this alone remains. I am
told
it is the earliest complete example of this
industry
with evidence dating it
back
to the 1500s.
That is
an extraordinary notion. That site has
been worked
for generations, a water
wheel
turning there since 1584
or even earlier. It
was mentioned
in a will of that date when the
wheel
owner passed it to his sons, who knows how much
further
back
in
time
something was
first
constructed on this site?

From the outside, it is a single
storey
stone
building
, with windows at the side.
 
Inside is an open
workshop
that seems dark, despite the extent of the windows.
However
, at the side of the
building
, and this is what has
now
been restored
to
working
order, is an enormous water
wheel
. Powered by the force of water diverted from the river to power the
wheel
, it turns, and through a clever mechanism provides the energy to power grit
stones
on which knives
were sharpened
as they rotated within the
workshop
itself.
 
Amazingly
, the restoration
project
has managed to find photographs of
people
who worked in the
Shepherd
Wheel
building
toward the
end
of its
time
as a thriving
industry
, together with various tools and equipment that are
now
all on display. Pride of place is
given
to the two grinding hulls, grinding
wheels
and,
of course
, the waterwheel itself. It is a
small
working
museum, staffed
largely
by volunteers. It is
only
open for a few days throughout the
year
,
but
well
worth the visit.
 
On special days they will
get
the
wheel
turning, and give educational tours. You can
begin
to imagine how in this
workshop
, in dark, damp conditions, skilled grinders produced fine, sharp cutting edges. It was not until the 1930s that grinding ceased and the Wheel's pivotal role in Sheffield's cutlery
industry
ended,
so
this is
relatively
recent history,
just
about within living memory
even though
the site itself goes
back
for hundreds of years.

I
love
this
building
, it is in a
beautiful
location, and has a solidity to it that
pleases
me. It is a link to our local industrial
heritage
. For those that worked there, the
work
was
really
hard
.
Back
breaking, and
very
dusty conditions with the
blade
on the grindstones generating lots of dust. I suppose that’s where the phrase ‘keeping your
nose to the grindstone
comes
from, bent double over a
wheel
, knife grinders had to lean
right
into the
gritstone
to sharpen
blades
,
sometimes
even lying flat on their fronts, with their faces near the grindstone in order to hold the
blades
against the
stone
. Lovely as the
building
is, and
important
as the
heritage
is, it is perhaps unwise to
romanticise
the reality of what it would be like to
work
there. All the same, I’m
so
happy that
people
have made the effort to restore the works, it is
important
to remember how
working
life was for local
people
in
times
past.

[Written by
-
Lucy
Marris
(2016):
 
Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam)]
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
81Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Mistakes

IELTS speaking Talk about a historical building in your country or city that you know. v. 1

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