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Describe something you did that was new or exciting. v.1

Describe something you did that was new or exciting. v. 1
Describe something you did that was new or exciting. You should say: what you did where and when you did this who you shared the activity with and explain why this activity was new or exciting for you. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer 1: I know what to tell you about here! I’m going to tell you all about what I did, where and when it was, who I shared the activity with and why it was both new and exciting for me. I love trying new things. I’m not particularly brave, but I hate missing out on adventures, and I am curious about the world. On balance, even if something is uncomfortable, or positively frightening, I’d much prefer to ‘give it a go’ and face the consequences than walk away from the opportunity and wonder what might have been. Last year I went on holiday to a fitness boot camp. It was in Northumberland, right by the sea. This is a wild and beautiful location in the north of England. The week involved lots of different activities, abseiling; hill walking; river kayaking; climbing (I was rubbish at that); body boarding; orienteering even learning how to build wild shelters out of scraps of wood. Lots of those activities were new and/or exciting, but there was one thing in particular we did that gave me a massive adrenalin high! Coasteering! Now I’d never even heard of this before, so I think you might also need me to explain a bit more about what exactly it is! Essentially coasteering is a cross between orienteering and coastal (ocean) swimming. The activity involves exploring a rocky coastline from the sea, by climbing, jumping, and swimming along its edge. It is quite strenuous, and you have to be brave as you are moving along the coast in an inter-tidal area with ocean currents, tides and hidden rocks to contend with. It isn’t just clambering over rock pools, nor is it swimming as such it is something in between. With the cold rough waters of the North Sea, it is an activity it would be far too dangerous to do on your own. You need to be with a group and a leader who knows the area and what is safe and what is not. So the activity was coasteering, the location was Northumberland, and the timing was August 2015 I think. In terms of who I shared this with, well, I went out with a group of about 6 other fellow holiday-makers and our very experienced, patient and lovely guide Bruce. We all wore full wetsuits and old trainers to protect our feet as well as life jackets (buoyancy aids) and helmets. Even so, I was very apprehensive as we walked over the slippery seaweed covered rocks towards the crashing waves. The first challenge was just climbing into the water as the waves seemed huge and the water was freezing. However, once you have literally taken the plunge, the shock of adrenalin and the effect of the wetsuit soon warms you up! Our leader was very safety conscious thankfully, so although I was a bit scared (I’m not all that strong a swimmer) in fact he carefully checked each route before we followed, using a rope to link us all together where necessary. As the time passed we got ever more confident, at times the waves washed us off rocks like we were droplets being shaken off the coat of a wet dog, but after a bit you start to realise that even though you feel like you are being tossed around in a giant washing machine it is actually pretty safe. The buoyancy aid makes it impossible to sink, and as long as you don’t fight the currents, but go with them, it is really fun. You do have to surrender control to some extent which feels weird and unsettling but once you do, oh my what a ride! It was incredibly exciting. You are seeing the landscape (coastline in this case) from a really new perspective, in amongst the waves, gazing up at huge rocky cliffs, jumping in and out of rock pools, and screaming with laughter as you are swept along. Without the necessary equipment and guidance, it would be terrifying, you’d end up drowning, or injuring yourself by being battered against the rocks but this way it was enormous fun. So coasteering was new and exciting because it was something I’d never even heard of before, let alone experienced. I had no idea at all what to expect. It was exciting because it moves you out of your comfort zone. Your heart is racing and it is a physical as well as a mental challenge to keep on going. However, it was also incredibly enjoyable and rewarding. Because we were a small group we all encouraged one another and pulled together, it was a great way to make new friends. I’m not sure it would suit everyone as a team building activity in the workplace but I guarantee it would be effective! Although it was hilarious, it was challenging.   I’m really, really glad I did it, once. However, I don’t know if I’m quite brave enough to do it again! That said, I’ve already admitted I do have a terrible fear of missing out, so I think I probably would!   You should too, if you ever get the chance, but please make sure you trust your guide first, and don’t even think about it without proper equipment, it would be all too easy to get swept away, the oceans are a powerful force, and not to be trifled with!   It is being in amongst all that power of nature that made the experience so awesome and memorable! [ Written by - Lucy Marris (2016):   Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam)] Sample Answer 2: To avoid boredom and monotony in life, I, along with my three other college friends planned to have a camp out in Mather Campground located in Grand Canyon of Arizona. Accordingly, we planned and made the camp out a grand success. In fact, it is really intolerable to continue with academic studies, going to college, preparing assignments and again planning for the college in the next day. So, I needed a perfect break from everything. Hence, the idea of a camping out of home peeped in my mind. I placed the proposal to my close buddies and they also agreed with me. But it was difficult to prepare for everything and arrange a leave for the camping. But finally, we managed everything including permission from our parents, college and started for the campground by driving my Mazda 6. The experiences were really enjoyable for us. In the mid of the last October, we planned for the campout. Actually, in this last quarter of the year, there are huge pressures on us for completing the courses and appear in the final exams. To get rid of all the monotonous events, we decided to camp out. Initially, we wanted to set the camp at the garden in front of my residence. But the idea was not supported by others. Then we decided to move to the Grand Canyon national park. Accordingly, we hired a spot at the camping venue. Then we arranged for the necessary things. In fact, we wanted to spend a life leaving the modern city behind of us. So, we did not take our cell phones, laptops and other electronic gears with us. We started for the Mather Campground and it was nearly a half-day drive from our city. George, Robert, and David accompanied me on this camping trip. We all were excited and had different plans to execute at the campground. But we also experienced some troubles from our parents before we start. Actually, none of them allowed us to live outside the home. They did not agree with the idea of leaving the cell phones at home. Later, we had a meeting at my home and decided to take the help of a friendly lecturer of our college. I think our parents were worried about our safety and security in the campsite. So, it was really difficult for us to make them understand that we can take care of ourselves. Besides, Mr Johnson, the lecturer of college, also played an important role here. Finally, everything was set and we began the journey. This was a new experience for and for my friends as well. Neither had we seen the Grand Canyon before nor had we experienced a night out of our home. So, it was really thrilling. Moreover, the weather was good and comfortable. We had a barbeque set with us. So, we caught some trout from a nearby waterbody and had a wonderful dinner with the fried fishes. Though there were cottages and tents for sleeping at night in the campground, we had our own sleeping bags. Besides, we only had a radio set which was the link between us and the civilisation we left behind. The sky was clear and filled with bright stars. They appeared to so close enough that we could have touched them with hands. The entire environment was natural and extremely enjoying. Hence, it was a remarkable experience for me and the others. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe something you did that was new or exciting. 1. Learning to ride a bicycle was an interesting adventure for me as I did not have the experience before. So, learned to ride a bicycle. I did this here in Vietnam a few months ago. I learned it with the support from some of my cousins. They actually helped me a lot to learn to ride a bicycle. It was a new activity for me. And as a girl, I did not think that I would be able to ride a bicycle in my life. But my thoughts changed after learning it. 2. Passing night out of the home was an interesting event to me. And this was a new thing as well because I have never spent a single day out of my home. So, I felt a thrill inside my mind. I was accompanied by some of my friends. In fact, we all had planned for a party at night on the rooftop of a friend’s home. Accordingly, we arranged everything and spent the night very well. I enjoyed the barbeque party too much and it was a fresh experience for me indeed. 3. Going for a long drive in the daytime, and amid a busy day was interesting. All the elements to get irritated was present there but I ignored them. I took a long drive from Ohio to Dallas. It was a long way and also crowded. My buddy Robert and Sam accompanied me on the trip. It was an exciting trip for me because all of us knew that we would not complete the trip in the day for many reasons. But we took to attempt to make it happen and in fact, this was the very first trip for all of us together. So, it was exciting. 4. It was a wonder to me how people in wrestling mania have a sound health and fitness, and thus I got attached to a local gym. I joined the gym in the middle of last year. And I went there with a friend of mine. It was an exciting encounter for me. I have never thought that my fitness will reach such a great stage. And the exercises were attractive and interesting indeed. So, I felt thrilled. 5. My last trip to Thailand gave me a different experience. I took a full body massage there. I went there in last month for a vacation. And it was a solo visit there. I had heard about the full body massage and never tried it before. Considering everything, I took the body massage. They gave the massage so perfectly that I felt relaxed. It was a strange experience to me that I cannot express in words. 6. Although my mom does not love pets, I got one recently. I bought the pet from a local pet selling shop here in New Delhi. It was a nice looking cat. I started taking care of the pet all by myself while my mother used to shout at me about the issues. However, I was happy with the cat and it was also fond of me. In fact, we had a deep intimacy between us. So, it was an exciting experience for me. Part 3 – Two-way discussion: Doing new things: Q. Why do you think some people like doing new things? Q. What problems can people have when they try new activities for the first time? Q. Do you think it’s best to do new things on your own or with other people? Why? Learning new things: Q. What kinds of things do children learn to do when they are very young? How important are these things? Q.   Do you think children and adults learn to do new things in the same way? How is their learning style different? Q.   Some people say that it is more important to be able to learn new things now than it was in the past. Do you agree or disagree with that? Why?
Describe
something
you did that was
new
or
exciting
. You should say: what you did where and when you did this
who
you shared the
activity
with and
explain
why this
activity
was
new
or
exciting
for you. [You will
have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
think
about what you're going to say. You can
make
some
notes to
help
you if you wish.
]
Sample Answer 1:

I know what to
tell
you about here! I’m going to
tell
you all about what I did, where and when it was,
who
I shared the
activity
with and why it was both
new
and
exciting
for me.
I
love
trying
new
things.
I
’m not
particularly
brave,
but
I hate missing out on adventures, and I am curious about the world. On balance, even if
something
is uncomfortable, or
positively
frightening, I’d much prefer to ‘give it a go’ and face the
consequences than
walk away from the opportunity and wonder what might have been. Last year I
went
on holiday to a fitness boot camp. It was in Northumberland,
right
by the sea. This is a wild and
beautiful
location in the north of England. The week involved lots of
different
activities
, abseiling; hill walking; river kayaking; climbing (I was rubbish at that);
body
boarding; orienteering even
learning
how to build wild shelters out of scraps of wood. Lots of those
activities
were
new
and/or
exciting
,
but
there was one thing
in particular
we did that gave me a massive adrenalin high!
Coasteering
!
Now
I’d never even heard of this
before
,
so
I
think
you might
also
need me to
explain
a bit more about what exactly it is!
Essentially
coasteering
is a cross between orienteering and coastal (ocean) swimming. The
activity
involves exploring a rocky coastline from the sea, by climbing, jumping, and swimming
along
its edge. It is quite strenuous, and you
have to
be brave as you are moving
along
the coast in an inter-tidal area with ocean currents, tides and hidden
rocks
to contend with. It isn’t
just
clambering over
rock
pools, nor is it swimming as such it is
something
in between. With the
cold
rough waters of the North Sea, it is an
activity
it would be far too
dangerous
to do on your
own
. You need to be with a group and a leader
who
knows the area and what is safe and what is not.
So
the
activity
was
coasteering
, the location was Northumberland, and the timing was August 2015 I
think
. In terms of
who
I shared this with,
well
, I
went
out with a group of about 6
other
fellow holiday-makers and our
very
experienced
, patient and lovely guide Bruce. We all wore full wetsuits and
old
trainers to protect our feet as
well
as
life
jackets (buoyancy aids) and helmets. Even
so
, I was
very
apprehensive as we walked over the slippery seaweed covered
rocks
towards the crashing
waves
. The
first
challenge was
just
climbing into the water as the
waves
seemed huge and the water was freezing.
However
, once you have
literally
taken the plunge, the shock of adrenalin and the effect of the wetsuit
soon
warms you up! Our leader was
very
safety conscious
thankfully
,
so
although I was a bit scared (I’m not all that strong a swimmer) in
fact
he
carefully
checked
each route
before
we followed, using a rope to link us all together where necessary. As the time passed we
got
ever more confident, at times the
waves
washed us off
rocks
like we were droplets
being shaken
off the coat of a wet dog,
but
after a bit you
start
to
realise
that
even though
you feel like you are
being tossed
around in a giant washing machine it is
actually
pretty safe. The buoyancy aid
makes
it impossible to sink, and as
long
as you don’t fight the currents,
but
go with
them, it is
really
fun. You do
have to
surrender control to
some
extent which feels weird and unsettling
but
once you do, oh my what a
ride
! It was
incredibly
exciting
. You are seeing the landscape (coastline
in this case
) from a
really
new
perspective, in amongst the
waves
, gazing up at huge rocky cliffs, jumping in and out of
rock
pools, and screaming with laughter as you
are swept
along
. Without the necessary equipment and guidance, it would be terrifying, you’d
end
up drowning, or injuring yourself by
being battered
against the
rocks
but
this way it was enormous fun.
So
coasteering
was
new
and
exciting
because
it was
something
I’d never even heard of
before
,
let
alone
experienced
. I had no
idea
at all what to
expect
. It was
exciting
because
it
moves
you out of your comfort zone. Your heart is racing and it is a physical as
well
as a mental challenge to
keep
on going.
However
, it was
also
incredibly
enjoyable and rewarding.
Because
we were a
small
group we all encouraged one another and pulled together, it was a great way to
make
new
friends
. I’m not sure it would suit everyone as a team building
activity
in the workplace
but
I guarantee it would be effective! Although it was hilarious, it was challenging.
 
I’m
really
,
really
glad I did it, once.
However
, I don’t know if I’m quite brave
enough
to do it again! That said, I’ve already admitted I do have a terrible fear of missing out,
so
I
think
I
probably
would!
 
You should too, if you ever
get
the chance,
but
please
make
sure you trust your guide
first
, and don’t even
think
about it without proper equipment, it would be all too easy to
get
swept away, the oceans are a powerful force, and not to
be trifled
with!
 
It is being in amongst all that power of nature that made the
experience
so
awesome and memorable!
[
Written by
-
Lucy
Marris
(2016):
 
Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam)] Sample Answer 2:

To avoid boredom and monotony in
life
, I,
along
with my three
other
college
friends
planned
to have a camp out in Mather
Campground
located in
Grand
Canyon of Arizona.
Accordingly
, we
planned
and made the camp out a
grand
success.

In
fact
, it is
really
intolerable to continue with academic studies, going to college, preparing assignments and again planning for the college in the
next
day.
So
, I needed a perfect break from
everything
.
Hence
, the
idea
of a camping out of home peeped in my mind. I placed the proposal to my close
buddies and
they
also
agreed
with me.
But
it was difficult to prepare for
everything
and arrange a
leave
for the camping.
But
finally
, we managed
everything
including permission from our parents, college and
started
for the
campground
by driving my Mazda 6. The
experiences
were
really
enjoyable for us.

In the mid of the last October, we
planned
for the
campout
.
Actually
, in this last quarter of the year, there are huge pressures on us for completing the courses and appear in the final exams. To
get
rid of all the monotonous
events
, we decided to camp out.
Initially
, we wanted to set the camp at the garden in front of my residence.
But
the
idea
was not supported by others. Then we decided to
move
to the
Grand Canyon national park
.
Accordingly
, we hired a spot at the camping venue. Then we arranged for the necessary things. In
fact
, we wanted to spend a
life
leaving the modern city behind of us.
So
, we did not take our cell phones, laptops and
other
electronic gears with us. We
started
for the Mather
Campground
and it was
nearly
a half-day drive from our city.

George, Robert, and David accompanied me on this camping
trip
. We all
were excited
and had
different
plans to execute at the
campground
.
But
we
also
experienced
some
troubles from our parents
before
we
start
.
Actually
, none of them
allowed
us to
live
outside the home. They did not
agree
with the
idea
of leaving the cell phones at home. Later, we had a meeting at my home and decided to take the
help
of a friendly lecturer of our college. I
think
our parents
were worried
about our safety and security in the campsite.
So
, it was
really
difficult for us to
make
them understand that we can take care of ourselves.
Besides
, Mr Johnson, the lecturer of college,
also
played an
important
role here.
Finally
,
everything
was set
and we began the journey.

This was a
new
experience
for and for my
friends
as
well
. Neither had we
seen
the
Grand
Canyon
before
nor had we
experienced
a
night
out of our home.
So
, it was
really
thrilling.
Moreover
, the weather was
good
and comfortable. We had a
barbeque
set with us.
So
, we caught
some
trout from a nearby
waterbody
and had a wonderful dinner with the fried fishes. Though there were cottages and tents for sleeping at
night
in the
campground
, we had our
own
sleeping bags.
Besides
, we
only
had a radio set which was the link between us and the
civilisation
we
left
behind. The sky was
clear
and filled with bright stars. They appeared to
so
close
enough
that we could have touched them with hands. The entire environment was natural and
extremely
enjoying.
Hence
, it was a remarkable
experience
for me and the others. More
Ideas
to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic:
Describe
something
you did that was
new
or
exciting
. 1.
Learning
to
ride
a
bicycle
was an
interesting
adventure for me as I did not have the
experience
before
.
So
, learned to
ride
a
bicycle
. I did this here in Vietnam a few months ago. I learned it with the support from
some
of my cousins. They
actually
helped
me a lot to
learn
to
ride
a
bicycle
. It was a
new
activity
for me. And as a girl, I did not
think
that I would be able to
ride
a
bicycle
in my
life
.
But
my thoughts
changed
after
learning
it.

2. Passing
night
out of the home was an
interesting
event
to me. And this was a
new
thing as
well
because
I have never spent a single day out of my home.
So
, I felt a thrill inside my mind. I
was accompanied
by
some
of my
friends
. In
fact
, we all had
planned
for a party at
night
on the rooftop of a
friend’s
home.
Accordingly
, we arranged
everything
and spent the
night
very
well
. I enjoyed the
barbeque
party too much and it was a fresh
experience
for me
indeed
.

3. Going for a
long
drive in the daytime, and amid a busy day was
interesting
. All the elements to
get
irritated was present there
but
I
ignored
them. I
took
a
long
drive from Ohio to Dallas. It was a
long
way and
also
crowded. My buddy Robert and Sam accompanied me on the
trip
. It was an
exciting
trip
for me
because
all of us knew that we would not complete the
trip
in the day for
many
reasons.
But
we
took
to attempt to
make
it happen and in
fact
, this was the
very
first
trip
for all of us together.
So
, it was
exciting. 4
. It was a wonder to me how
people
in wrestling mania have a sound health and fitness, and
thus
I
got
attached to a local gym. I
joined
the gym in the middle of last year. And I
went
there with a
friend
of mine. It was an
exciting
encounter for me. I have never
thought
that my fitness will reach such a great stage. And the exercises were attractive and
interesting
indeed
.
So
, I felt thrilled.

5. My last
trip
to Thailand gave me a
different
experience
. I
took
a full
body
massage there. I
went
there in last month for a vacation. And it was a solo visit there. I had heard about the full
body
massage and never tried it
before
. Considering
everything
, I
took
the
body
massage. They gave the massage
so
perfectly
that I felt relaxed. It was a strange
experience
to me that I cannot express in words.

6. Although my mom does not
love
pets
, I
got
one recently. I
bought
the pet from a local pet selling shop here in
New
Delhi. It was a nice looking cat. I
started
taking care of the pet all by myself while my mother
used
to shout at me about the issues.
However
, I was happy with the cat and it was
also
fond of me. In
fact
, we had a deep intimacy between us.
So
, it was an
exciting
experience
for me. Part 3
Two-way discussion: Doing
new
things: Q. Why do you
think
some
people
like doing
new
things? Q. What problems can
people
have when they try
new
activities
for the
first
time? Q. Do you
think
it’s best to do
new
things on your
own
or with
other
people
? Why?
Learning
new
things: Q. What kinds of things do children
learn
to do when they are
very
young? How
important
are these things? Q.
 
Do you
think
children and adults
learn
to do
new
things
in the same way
? How is their
learning
style
different
? Q.
 
Some
people
say that it is more
important
to be able to
learn
new
things
now
than it was in the past. Do you
agree
or disagree with that? Why?
39Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
223Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
27Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe something you did that was new or exciting. v. 1

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