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Describe a person who has done a lot of work to help people. v.1

Describe a person who has done a lot of work to help people. v. 1
Describe a person who has done a lot of work to help people. You should say: who this person is/was where this person lives/lived what he/she has done/ did to help people and explain how you know about this person. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer 1: This is an interesting topic. Many people help others as part of their professional role – perhaps giving advice, teaching students or providing medical treatment. Of course, all of these things are incredibly important, impressive and of course helpful. And today, I’ll tell you about a person I know about who I believe has helped a lot of people. So the person is known locally as The Mohican Runner, he lives in my home city of Sheffield. To be quite honest, when I first spotted him it was simply because he has a very distinctive look. He is quite lean and athletic and a talented runner, so a fast and furious participant in many local races. However, what makes him stand out is that he has a well sculptured Mohican haircut. It’s a punk style where the sides of his head are shaved, and then he has a distinctive central strip of long hair down the middle. His arms are heavily inked with various geometric designs, other shapes are marked on his shaved head and legs. If you just saw him, it is possible that you might feel quite intimidated by him at first glance, but once you know his story you will realise you shouldn’t be. Rather you should approach him and congratulate him and shake him by the hand. Because The Mohican Runner runs and lives locally, I saw him around a lot. He, like me, is a regular attendee at my local Saturday morning 5 km parkrun. (Though unlike me he always finishes near the front! ) About a year ago, I found out that he was setting himself some running challenges to raise money for some children’s charities. This caught my attention. Not content with seeking sponsorship for doing a single event, The Mohican Runner set himself the challenge of running a half-marathon every month for 13 months, the following year it was to run a race every weekend for a year. The challenges are in themselves impressive, but also not the point. It turns out that what drove this fundraising addiction was his own personal experience. He was himself the victim of really horrific physical child abuse when he was growing up. He was isolated, bullied and vulnerable. He was only able to escape his situation when certain charities got involved and intervened and he was then removed from his family. His story was so extreme it was used as the basis of a UK-wide funding appeal for a national charity. His fundraising achievements are extraordinary, his story and efforts have raised somewhere around £1. 3 million, which is an amazing sum of money. However, I believe it isn’t just that he has helped people through fundraising. I believe by being courageous enough to tell his story he reminds everyone of how important it is to be alert to the often hidden problem of child abuse. I think what he does is helpful beyond measure because even without the fundraising, he is giving a voice to a section of society that is often completely powerless and without a voice to represent them at all. There are few things more powerful than hearing someone talk from personal experience. I think it must take extraordinary courage to tell and retell a painful story that I’m sure you would much prefer to be able to forget. So to conclude, I think the Mohican Runner has done an enormous amount to help people, in particular children who are victims of physical and sexual abuse who perhaps we would rather pretend weren’t there because their plight is hidden and it seems so impossible to comprehend and hard to help. He has helped by raising money; he has helped by making his own story public and he has helped by being a role model. He should be recognised for what he has done for others.   If you ever come to Sheffield do look out for him, you’ll spot him sooner or later I’m sure, he’s hard to miss, and he’s seemingly ‘always’ out and about, clocking up the miles, putting in the training and powering on for his favoured charities. [ Written by - Lucy Marris (2016):   Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam) ] Sample Answer 2: After being matured I came to know about lots of people who spent their entire life for humanity. Among them, the contributions of Mother Teresa undoubtedly are more than any other one. In her life, Mother Teresa was a Roman Catholic nun and missionary. She had spent her entire life to care for the poor and destitute.   She passed a notable part of her life in India and was moved by the pathetic condition of the people living in streets. So, she established some of the shelter homes for them in different parts of India. She is also the founder of Missionaries of Charity, and this is a Roman Catholic religious group that helps the people in distress with all sorts of facilities including the arrangement of their medical treatment, rehabilitation etc. for free of cost. Mother Teresa was born on August 26 in 1910 in Skopje which is now the capital of the Republic of Macedonia. She was named as Agnes which resembled the little flower. Her father was a politician and she was the youngest of all the children. Her parents had met from two separate villages. Unfortunately, she lost her father at the age of eight. In her early childhood, she preferred to listen to stories of missionaries, their activities to remove grief of the people in different parts of the world. When she turned 12, she decided to devote her life to the humankind and when she was 18, she left home to join Sisters of Loreto. She had never met her family members again in her life after she left the home. Mother Teresa did a lot of humanitarian works in her life. She learnt different languages to communicate directly with people in the Indian sub-continent. She played the role of a teacher in schools to teach students about numerous issues. She turned into a nun in 1931, and selected a name which she had to alter the spelling for another nun had the same name with the same spelling. She served for around 20 years at Loreto convent school in Calcutta. But the poorness, ill conditions and deaths of the poor people disturbed her seriously. So, she planned to help the distressed. Accordingly, she arranged for opening some shelters in Calcutta to help them. Nirmal Hriday is one of her shelters where the poverty-stricken, ill-fated people can have their treatments for some specific diseases and it is for free. She is a motherly figure in the world and has been admired even after her death. She is mostly famous for her charitable works and Missionaries of Charities which comes in helping of the destitute across the world. In her lifetime, she was awarded numerous prizes and in 1979 she won the Noble Prize in Peace. But some of her activities were under criticism like the hospitals she ran received a huge amount of donations but on the contrary, the service quality did not improve at all and there were shortages of medical care. Her life has been the subject of literature, documentaries and films. She has been portrayed as an affectionate character who served the humanity with great care and love. She really was an admirable woman of the world. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe a person who has done a lot of work to help people. 1. Raising consciousness is a great job but it needs special efforts. Benjamin Franklin is one of those leading personalities who had devoted his entire life to helping people in terms of raising their awareness through writing. He was born in the USA in a large but poor family. He was a prolific writer than any other of his professions. His writing helped to raise a sense of awareness and the humor also attracted attention from a large part of the society. Recently, I have read an article authored by him and realized that he was a great man with a modern thought even in his days. 2. South Africa is indebted to Nelson Mandela for his outstanding role to emancipate people from the mental and physical domination of different issues. He was born in South Africa and had to lead a struggling life. He struggled against racism. He wanted to bring a balance in the society. He never desired that the blacks or the whites would be dominated by each other. Rather he dreamt of a society that will bring a harmony and peace. I had no idea that he was such a great man until I read an article in a newspaper in my school days. Earlier, I thought that he might be a local leader but his biography changed my idea about him completely. 3. The theory of relativity is probably the greatest achievement in physics and has helped greatly to improve this branch of science. Albert Einstein is the founder of this theory. He was born in Germany and later received the US citizenship. He helped to expand some of the branches of science. In fact, the Quantum Theory and theoretical physics are the greatest contributions from this scientist. I came to know about him during my physics class in my school. The teacher was describing him and asked us all to collect few more insight into this great personality to present in the next class. 4. Disability is a great issue of concern in the present perspective and Helen Keller is a pioneer in this case. She was born in Alabama but her childhood illness caused the greatest damage to her life – she became deaf and blind. She initiated movements to raise social awareness among the mass people. And she is most famous for her charity works for the blind people. I came to know about her from a friend of mine who works at an international organization named after Helen Keller. It was a great event for me to know about this philanthropist woman despite her handicaps. 5. Among the Greek philosophers, Socrates is most celebrated for his outstanding way of expressing the truth. He was born in Greece and mostly known for his ethics. He wanted to share his knowledge with his students and fellow people. But he had to sacrifice his life as the rulers of that time did not want him to express the truths. Being a student of history at a local university in Indonesia, I came to know about him. In fact, I had to prepare an assignment on him which made me aware of his contributions to the Greek society and the consequences of his life. Part 3 – Two-way discussion: Helping other people in the community: Q. What are some of the ways people can help others in the community? Which is most important? Q. Why do you think some people like to help other people? Q. Some people say that people help others in the community more now than they did in the past. Do you agree or disagree? Why? Community Services: Q. What types of services, such as libraries or health centres, are available to the people who live in your area? Do you think there are enough of them? Q. Which groups of people generally need the most support in a community? Why? Q. Who do you think should pay for the services that are available to the people in a community? Should it be the government or individual people?
Describe
a
person
who
has done a
lot
of
work
to
help
people
. You should say:
who
this
person
is/was where this
person
lives
/
lived
what he/she has done/ did to
help
people
and
explain
how you
know
about this
person
. [You will
have to
talk about the
topic
for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
think
about what you are going to say. You can
make
some
notes to
help
you if you wish.
]
Sample Answer 1: This is an interesting
topic
.
Many
people
help
others as
part
of their professional
role
perhaps giving advice, teaching
students
or providing medical treatment.
Of course
, all of these things are
incredibly
important
, impressive and
of course
helpful. And
today
, I’ll
tell
you about a
person
I
know
about
who
I believe has
helped
a
lot
of
people
.

So
the
person
is known
locally
as The Mohican
Runner
, he
lives
in my home city of Sheffield. To be quite honest, when I
first
spotted him it was
simply
because
he has a
very
distinctive look. He is quite lean and athletic and a talented
runner
,
so
a
fast
and furious participant in
many
local
races.
However
, what
makes
him stand out is that he has a
well
sculptured Mohican haircut. It’s a punk style where the sides of his head
are shaved
, and then he has a distinctive central strip of long hair down the middle.

His arms are
heavily
inked with various geometric designs,
other
shapes
are marked
on his shaved head and legs. If you
just
saw
him, it is possible that you might feel quite intimidated by him at
first
glance,
but
once you
know
his
story
you will
realise
you shouldn’t be.
Rather
you should approach him and congratulate him and shake him by the hand.

Because
The Mohican
Runner
runs and
lives
locally
, I
saw
him around a
lot
. He, like me, is a regular attendee at my
local
Saturday morning 5 km
parkrun
. (Though unlike me he always finishes near the front!
)
About a
year
ago, I found out that he was setting himself
some
running challenges to raise money for
some
children’s
charities
. This caught my attention. Not content with seeking sponsorship for doing a single
event
, The Mohican
Runner
set himself the challenge of running a half-marathon every month for 13 months, the following
year
it was to run a race every weekend for a
year
. The challenges are in themselves impressive,
but
also
not the point. It turns out that what drove this fundraising addiction was his
own
personal experience. He was himself the victim of
really
horrific physical child abuse when he was growing up. He
was isolated
, bullied and vulnerable.
He
was
only
able to escape his situation when certain
charities
got
involved and
intervened and
he was then removed from his family. His
story
was
so
extreme it was
used
as the basis of a UK-wide funding appeal for a national charity.

His fundraising achievements are extraordinary, his
story
and efforts have raised somewhere around £1. 3 million, which is an amazing sum of money.
However
, I believe it isn’t
just
that he has
helped
people
through fundraising. I believe by being courageous
enough
to
tell
his
story
he reminds everyone of how
important
it is to be alert to the
often
hidden problem of child abuse. I
think
what he does is helpful beyond measure
because
even without the fundraising, he is giving a voice to a section of
society
that is
often
completely powerless and without a voice to represent them at all. There are few things more powerful than hearing someone talk from personal experience. I
think
it
must
take extraordinary courage to
tell
and retell a painful
story
that I’m sure you would much prefer to be able to forget.

So
to conclude
, I
think
the Mohican
Runner
has done an enormous amount to
help
people
,
in particular
children
who
are victims of physical and sexual abuse
who
perhaps we would
rather
pretend weren’t there
because
their plight
is hidden
and it seems
so
impossible to comprehend and
hard
to
help
. He has
helped
by raising money; he has
helped
by making his
own
story
public and
he has
helped
by being a
role
model. He should be
recognised
for what he has done for others.
 
If you ever
come
to Sheffield do look out for him, you’ll spot him sooner or later I’m sure,
he’s
hard
to miss, and
he’s
seemingly
‘always’ out and about, clocking up the miles, putting in the training and powering on for his
favoured
charities.

[
Written by
-
Lucy
Marris
(2016):
 
Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam)
]
Sample Answer 2:

After
being matured
I
came
to
know
about
lots
of
people
who
spent their entire
life
for humanity. Among them, the contributions of Mother Teresa
undoubtedly
are more than any
other
one.

In her
life
, Mother Teresa was a Roman Catholic nun and
missionary
. She had spent her entire
life
to care for the poor and destitute.
 
She passed a notable
part
of her
life
in India and was
moved
by the pathetic condition of the
people
living in streets.
So
, she established
some of the
shelter homes for them in
different
parts
of India. She is
also
the founder of
Missionaries
of
Charity
, and this is a Roman Catholic religious group that
helps
the
people
in distress with all sorts of facilities including the arrangement of their medical treatment, rehabilitation etc. for free of cost.

Mother Teresa
was born
on August 26 in 1910 in Skopje which is
now
the capital of the Republic of Macedonia. She
was named
as Agnes which resembled the
little
flower. Her father was a
politician and
she was the youngest of all the children. Her parents had met from two separate villages. Unfortunately, she lost her father at the age of eight. In her early childhood, she preferred to listen to
stories
of
missionaries
, their activities to remove grief of the
people
in
different
parts
of the
world
. When she turned 12, she decided to devote her
life
to the humankind and when she was 18, she
left
home to
join
Sisters of
Loreto
. She had never met her family members again in her
life
after she
left
the home.

Mother Teresa did a
lot
of humanitarian works in her
life
. She
learnt
different
languages to communicate
directly
with
people
in the Indian sub-continent. She played the
role
of a teacher in
schools
to teach
students
about numerous issues.
She
turned into a nun in 1931, and selected a name which she had to alter the spelling for another nun had the same name with the same spelling.
She
served for around 20 years at
Loreto
convent
school
in Calcutta.
But
the poorness, ill conditions and deaths of the poor
people
disturbed her
seriously
.
So
, she planned to
help
the distressed.
Accordingly
, she arranged for opening
some
shelters in Calcutta to
help
them.
Nirmal
Hriday
is one of her shelters where the poverty-stricken, ill-fated
people
can have their treatments for
some
specific diseases and it is for free.

She is a
motherly
figure in the
world
and has
been admired
even after her death. She is
mostly
famous
for her charitable works and
Missionaries
of
Charities
which
comes
in helping of the destitute across the
world
. In her lifetime, she
was awarded
numerous prizes and in 1979 she won the
Noble Prize
in Peace.
But
some
of her activities were under criticism like the hospitals she ran received a huge amount of donations
but
on the contrary
, the
service
quality did not
improve
at all and there were shortages of medical care. Her
life
has been the subject of literature, documentaries and films. She has
been portrayed
as an affectionate character
who
served the humanity with
great
care and
love
. She
really
was an admirable woman of the
world
. More
Ideas
to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card
topic
:
Topic
:
Describe
a
person
who
has done a
lot
of
work
to
help
people
. 1. Raising consciousness is a
great
job
but
it needs special efforts. Benjamin Franklin is one of those leading personalities
who
had devoted his entire
life
to helping
people
in terms of raising their awareness through writing. He
was born
in the USA in a large
but
poor family. He was a prolific writer than any
other
of his professions. His writing
helped
to raise a sense of awareness and the humor
also
attracted attention from a large
part
of the
society
. Recently, I have read an article authored by him and
realized
that he was a
great
man
with a modern
thought
even in his days.

2. South Africa
is indebted
to Nelson Mandela for his outstanding
role
to emancipate
people
from the mental and physical domination of
different
issues. He
was born
in South Africa and had to lead a struggling
life
. He struggled against racism.
He
wanted to bring a balance in the
society
.
He
never desired that the blacks or the whites would
be dominated
by each
other
.
Rather
he dreamt of a
society
that will bring a harmony and peace. I had no
idea
that he was such a
great
man
until I read an article in a newspaper in my
school
days. Earlier, I
thought
that he might be a
local
leader
but
his biography
changed
my
idea
about him completely.

3. The theory of relativity is
probably
the greatest achievement in physics and has
helped
greatly
to
improve
this branch of science. Albert Einstein is the founder of this theory. He
was born
in Germany and later received the US citizenship. He
helped
to expand
some of the
branches of science. In fact, the Quantum Theory and theoretical physics are the greatest contributions from this scientist. I
came
to
know
about him during my physics
class
in my
school
. The teacher was describing him and asked us all to collect few more insight into this
great
personality to present in the
next
class
.

4. Disability is a
great
issue of concern
in the present perspective
and Helen Keller is a pioneer
in this case
. She
was born
in Alabama
but
her childhood illness caused the greatest damage to her
life
she became deaf and blind. She initiated movements to raise social awareness among the mass
people
. And she is most
famous
for her
charity
works for the blind
people
. I
came
to
know
about her from a friend of mine
who
works at an international organization named after Helen Keller. It was a
great
event
for me to
know
about this philanthropist woman despite her handicaps.

5. Among the Greek philosophers, Socrates is most celebrated for his outstanding way of expressing the truth. He
was born
in Greece and
mostly
known for his ethics. He wanted to share his knowledge with his
students
and fellow
people
.
But
he had to sacrifice his
life
as the rulers of that time did not want him to express the truths. Being a
student
of history at a
local
university in Indonesia, I
came
to
know
about him. In fact, I had to prepare an assignment on him which made me aware of his contributions to the Greek
society
and the consequences of his
life
.
Part
3
Two-way discussion: Helping
other
people
in the
community
: Q. What are
some of the
ways
people
can
help
others in the
community
? Which is most
important
? Q. Why do you
think
some
people
like to
help
other
people
? Q.
Some
people
say that
people
help
others in the
community
more
now
than they did in the past. Do you
agree
or disagree? Why?
Community
Services
: Q. What types of
services
, such as libraries or health
centres
, are available to the
people
who
live
in your area? Do you
think
there are
enough
of them? Q. Which groups of
people
generally
need the most support in a
community
? Why? Q.
Who
do you
think
should pay for the
services
that are available to the
people
in a
community
? Should it be the
government
or individual
people
?
22Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
189Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
36Mistakes

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