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Talk about a high-paying job in your country. v.1

Talk about a high-paying job in your country. v. 1
Talk about a high-paying job in your country. You should say: what job it is what the job involves if it is a popular job and what the requirements are to get the job or a similar job that is highly paid. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer: Lawyer's job is a highly paid job in Germany. This is a fascinating job and is related to providing legal services and supports to the people who are in need. The people who are engaged in the job are skilled and they also have a very good public relation. This is a great cue card for me and I am feeling exalted with this topic. The job of a lawyer involves a wide number of things. When people are in legal troubles, they need to get support from lawyers as they do not understand or know about the legal matters. As a result, the lawyers are of great help to them. They also help to get the justice for the deprived people if needed. In fact, without the help of a lawyer, it is not possible to stand before a court and place the arguments. The lawyers play the role of advocates for their clients in the court. This is a popular job across Germany. A good number of students are pursuing the degree to become a lawyer. The lawyers could be hired or they can also get connected with larger companies as in-house lawyers. When they work with companies, they cannot practise privately. But there are some lawyers who are freelancers. They work round the day for their clients. When a lawyer gets involved with a firm, s/ he gets a smart amount of salary for the service. So, this has become a popular career among the young generation. Completion of at least a Bachelor’s Degree in law is a must to become a lawyer. Besides, the lawyer should also pass the law school admission test in respective region and pass the Bar examination. These are the basic requirements to be a lawyer. But to become a great lawyer, someone needs experience, great knowledge of the laws and judicial system. Getting hired by a top-notch law firm ensures a bright career and a great remuneration. More Ideas to help you prepare your own answer: Cue Card Topic: Talk about a high-paying job in your country. 1.   The job of an IT professionals is a high-paying job in the UK. The job involves different sort of tasks related to Web technology, programming, designing, server administration and so on. In fact, the demand for such jobs is growing in present times. A good number of universities have started offering degrees on this subject. The job has become a popular one in the country and many of the youths are pursuing them. A bachelor degree is a must to apply for such jobs and a higher degree is also appreciated. 2. Managerial jobs in Malaysia pay higher than any other types of jobs. A manager usually gets a high salary than other employees at an office. The manager needs to take care many of the issues at the office. The job also involves travelling in and out of the country for various job purposes. The benefits of the jobs are also rewarding. So, this has become a popular job in the country. Graduation in management and MBA degree are preferable to get such types of jobs in Malaysia. 3. The job of a 3D artist is different from the other jobs in Ukraine. The job requires completing projects related to 3D. Animation of 3D movies and objects is also a part of the job. And the assignments may vary based on the organization. This is a popular job across the country and many of the youths are adopting the profession. A professional degree in animation and 3D movements is a must. Without the degree and skill on designing, the candidature of the applicants is annulled. 4. In India, the job of a Chartered Accountant is highly demanding. The job pays very well than any other types of jobs. It requires to assess the financial issues of organizations and auditing their annual expenses and other relevant matters. This is a popular form of a job for the local citizens. But it requires a CA degree to get engaged in the profession. And obtaining the degree is extremely hard in many cases mostly because it is time-consuming and has many exams. 5. The demand for dentists is appealing in Texas. Hence, it has become a great job for doctors with the subject. And it pays them very well too. The job of a dentist is to take care of the teeth and oral hygiene of their patients. They need to make surgeries to remove teeth, fill the teeth and other necessary tasks. This is a very popular job across the state. But to become a dentist, someone needs to get a professional or academic degree from a renowned and registered medical college or other similar types of institutions.
Talk about a high-paying
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in your
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. You should say: what
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it is what the
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job
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involves
if it is a
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popular
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job
and what the requirements are to
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get
the
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job
or a similar
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job
that is
highly
paid. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
Loose punctuation mark.
]
Sample Answer:

Lawyer's
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job
is a
highly
paid
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job
in Germany. This is a fascinating
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job
and
is related
to providing legal services and supports to the
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people
who are in
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need
. The
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people
who
are engaged
in the
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job
are
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skilled and
they
also
have a
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very
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good
public relation. This is a
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great
cue card for
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me and
I am feeling exalted with this topic.

The
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job
of a
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lawyer
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involves
a wide number of things. When
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people
are in legal troubles, they
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need
to
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get
support from
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lawyers
as they do not understand or know about the legal matters.
As a result
, the
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lawyers
are of
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great
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help
to them. They
also
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help
to
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get
the justice for the deprived
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people
if needed. In fact, without the
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help
of a
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lawyer
, it is not possible to stand
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before
a court and place the arguments. The
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lawyers
play the role of advocates for their clients in the court.

This is a
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popular
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job
across Germany. A
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good
number of students are pursuing the
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degree
to
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become
a
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lawyer
. The
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lawyers
could be
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hired or
they can
also
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get
connected with larger
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companies
as in-
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house
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lawyers
. When they work with
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companies
, they cannot
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practise
privately
.
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But
there are
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some
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lawyers
who are freelancers. They work round the day for their clients. When a
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lawyer
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gets
involved with a firm, s/ he
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gets
a smart amount of salary for the service.
So
, this has
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become
a
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popular
career among the young generation.

Completion of at least a Bachelor’s
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Degree
in
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law
is a
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must to
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become
a
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lawyer
.
Besides
, the
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lawyer
should
also
pass the
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law
school admission
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test
in respective region and pass the Bar examination. These are the basic requirements to be a
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lawyer
.
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But
to
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become
a
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great
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lawyer
, someone
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needs
experience,
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great
knowledge of the
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laws
and judicial system. Getting hired by a top-notch
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law
firm ensures a bright career and a
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great
remuneration. More
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Ideas
to
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help
you prepare your
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own
answer: Cue Card Topic: Talk about a high-paying
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job
in your
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country
. 1.
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The
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job
of an IT professionals is a high-paying
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job
in the UK. The
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job
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involves
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different
sort of tasks related to Web technology, programming, designing, server administration and
so
on. In fact, the demand for such
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jobs
is growing in present times. A
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good
number of universities have
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started
offering
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degrees
on this subject. The
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job
has
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become
a
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popular
one in the
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country
and
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many
of the youths are pursuing them. A bachelor
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degree
is a
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must to
apply for such
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jobs
and a higher
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degree
is
also
appreciated.

2. Managerial
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jobs
in Malaysia pay higher than any
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other
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types
of
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jobs
. A manager
usually
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gets
a high salary than
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other
employees at an office. The manager
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needs
to take care
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many
of the issues at the office. The
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job
also
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involves
travelling in and out of the
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country
for various
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job
purposes.
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The
benefits of the
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jobs
are
also
rewarding.
So
, this has
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become
a
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popular
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job
in the
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country
. Graduation in management and MBA
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degree
are preferable to
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get
such
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types
of
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jobs
in Malaysia.

3. The
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job
of a 3D artist is
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different
from the
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other
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jobs
in Ukraine. The
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job
requires completing projects related to 3D. Animation of 3D movies and objects is
also
a part of the
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job
. And the assignments may vary based on the organization. This is a
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popular
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job
across the
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country
and
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many
of the youths are adopting the profession. A professional
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degree
in animation and 3D movements is a
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must
. Without the
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degree
and
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skill
on designing, the candidature of the applicants
is annulled
.

4. In India, the
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job
of a Chartered Accountant is
highly
demanding. The
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job
pays
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very
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well
than any
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other
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types
of
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jobs
. It requires to assess the financial issues of organizations and auditing their annual expenses and
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other
relevant matters. This is a
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popular
form of a
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job
for the local citizens.
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But
it requires a CA
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degree
to
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get
engaged in the profession. And obtaining the
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degree
is
extremely
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hard
in
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many
cases
mostly
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because
it is time-consuming and has
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many
exams.

5. The demand for dentists is appealing in Texas.
Hence
, it has
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become
a
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great
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job
for doctors with the subject. And it pays them
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very
well
too. The
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job
of a dentist is to take care of the teeth and oral hygiene of their patients. They
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need
to
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make
surgeries to remove teeth, fill the teeth and
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other
necessary tasks. This is a
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very
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popular
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job
across the state.
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to
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become
a dentist, someone
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needs
to
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get
a professional or academic
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degree
from a renowned and registered medical college or
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other
similar
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types
of institutions.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
135Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS speaking Talk about a high-paying job in your country. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
9 paragraphs
876 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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