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Describe your favourite season in your country. v.1

Describe your favourite season in your country. v. 1
Describe your favourite season in your country. You should say: what it is and when it comes what the season is like changes that happen and things you like to do during this season and explain why this is your favourite season. Follow-up Questions: 1. Describe the seasons in your country. 2. What is the most comfortable season in your country? 3. What's the necessity of clothes in a particular season? 4. What are the seasons you have in your country but other countries do not?   Model Answer 1: In Bangladesh, there are six seasons, each containing a period of two months of intensive period. While all the seasons in my country carry their distinct “flavours” and characteristics, "spring" undoubtedly is my most favourite season. Spring runs from mid-February to mid-April in my country.   This season is liked by all since there is no piercing heat or bone-chilling cold in this season or is there any rain at this time. It is the best season. During this season, "nature" in my country flourishes as if it is wearing a green dress. The plants and flower trees in the fields are decorated with all kinds of beautiful flowers of all colours, offering all of them a new lease of fresh life.   Besides, people in my think that this spring season is the period of abundance since the farmers finally get ready to harvest their crops and enjoy the fruits of their labour. Of course, the poets also get busy with writing their poems during this season. The poor are happy to have it as a relief from severe cold. Then, during this season, the sky remains cloudless. Flowers bloom everywhere, with their sweet smell spreading in all directions, and bees fly from one flower to another in order to pollinate. A breeze begins to blow. Sweet twitters of birds are heard, as well as the melodious voice of cuckoos in order to please our ear. Anyway, this is my favourite season because I can actually do a lot of things and outdoor activities, including cycling, enjoying a picnic or travelling to a beautiful natural site, during this period. Besides, I also like to hang out with my friends late at night in order to enjoy the beautiful and clear night sky. The beauty of spring season makes forget about our sorrows and also allows us to enjoy the nature around us to the fullest.   Finally, it is my favourite season also because it allows me to enjoy the perfect temperature, which is neither too hot nor too cold, no matter I stay inside my house of enjoying some outdoor activities.   Model Answer 2: I come from the "United Kingdom" where talking about the weather is always a topic of conversation. That is because we have four different seasons, and each is special and beautiful in its own way. Each different time of year also has its own distinct weather. Today I’m going to tell you about my favourite season, when it is, why I like it and what changes it brings, as well as the things I like to do in this season. So in the UK, our four seasons are spring, summer, autumn and winter. I like all of them in a way, but if I must choose, then I think my favourite must be autumn. Autumn is usually between around September and November each year, though it can shift a little if we have a long hot summer. Factually, autumn is the time of year when the days start to get shorter again, the temperature cools and plants and trees start to shut down and prepare for winter. You might think this would be depressing, but I don’t think so. For me, autumn is something of a relief. I get terrible hay fever in the summer from pollen, and I’m not great in the heat, so I find the temperature much more comfortable in autumn and I can be a lot more active and do more things. The best thing about autumn is the way that the trees change colour. I’m lucky because I live near woodlands. As autumn begins the leaves on trees transform from green to rich oranges; vivid yellows; warm browns and blinding gold.   If you have never seen a forest in autumn, it’s quite hard to imagine, but really and truly, at this time of year, if the autumn sun catches leaves as they blow off in the wind they can look like flames or pure gold. It is astonishingly beautiful. I also like to be outside, in summer, everyone else has the same idea, but in the autumn there are still some mild days to be enjoyed and I like to wrap up warm and head off for long walks in the blustering wind and have the countryside all to myself. I like to look out for wildlife and interesting plants on my treks. Sometimes I’ll go walking or running with a friend and it feels like the whole place up on the hills belongs just to us. So for me, autumn is special because of its beautiful colours; the lack of pollen to give me hay fever, the possibility of long country walks and being able to enjoy our wonderful British countryside all to myself! Eventually autumn ends, and it becomes very dark and cold as we move into winter. I’m not so keen on that as there is very little daylight and it seems to go on forever.   On the other hand, we have some great winter festivals: Halloween; Bonfire night and of course Christmas, so every season has its good points in my view! [ Written by - Lucy Marris |  Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam)]
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in your
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. You should say: what it is and when it
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comes
what the
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is like
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changes
that happen and things you like to do during this
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and
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explain
why this is your
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. Follow-up Questions:

1.
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in your
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. What is the most comfortable
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in your
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. What's the necessity of clothes in a particular
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.
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are the
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you have in your
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country
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but
other
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do not?
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Model Answer 1:

In Bangladesh, there are six
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seasons
, each containing a
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period
of two months of intensive
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period
. While all the
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seasons
in my
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country
carry their distinct “
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flavours
” and characteristics,
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spring
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undoubtedly
is my most
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favourite
season.

Spring runs from mid-February to mid-April in my
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country
.
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This
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season
is liked
by all since there is no piercing heat or bone-chilling
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cold
in this
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season
or is there any rain at this
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. It is the best season.

During this
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,
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nature
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in my
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flourishes as if it is wearing a green dress. The plants and
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flower
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trees
in the fields
are decorated
with all kinds of
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beautiful
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flowers
of all
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colours
, offering all of them a new lease of fresh life.
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Besides
,
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people
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think
that this spring
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season
is the
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period
of abundance since the farmers
finally
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get
ready to harvest their crops and
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enjoy
the fruits of their
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labour
.
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, the poets
also
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busy with writing their poems during this
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season
. The poor are happy to have it as a relief from severe
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cold
. Then, during this
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season
, the sky remains cloudless.
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Flowers
bloom everywhere, with their sweet smell spreading in all directions, and bees
fly
from one
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flower
to another in order to pollinate. A breeze
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begins
to blow. Sweet twitters of birds
are heard
, as
well
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please
our ear.

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, this is my
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beautiful
natural site, during this
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.
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, I
also
like to hang out with my friends late at night in order to
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enjoy
the
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night sky. The beauty of spring
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makes
forget about our sorrows and
also
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allows
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the nature around us
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also
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it
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, no matter I stay inside my
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house
of enjoying
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some
outdoor activities.
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I
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United Kingdom
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where talking about the weather is always a topic of conversation.
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because
we have four
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seasons
, and each is special and
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in its
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own
way. Each
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also
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own
distinct weather.
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, when it is, why I like it and what
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changes
it brings, as
well
as the things I like to do in this
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.
So
in the UK, our four
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are spring,
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, autumn and
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winter
. I like all of them in a way,
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if I
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usually
between around September and November each
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, though it can shift a
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if we have a long hot
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summer
.
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, autumn is the
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of
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year
when the days
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start
to
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shorter again, the temperature cools and plants and
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trees
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start
to shut down and prepare for
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winter
. You might
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this would be depressing,
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so
. For me, autumn is something of a relief. I
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get
terrible hay fever in the
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from pollen, and I’m not great in the heat,
so
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trees
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change
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colour
. I’m lucky
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I
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near woodlands. As autumn
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begins
the
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leaves
on
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transform from green to rich oranges; vivid yellows; warm browns and blinding gold.
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If you have never
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really
and
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of
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, if the autumn sun catches
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as they blow off in the wind they can look like flames or pure gold. It is
astonishingly
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. I
also
like to be outside, in
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, everyone else has the same
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idea
,
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in the autumn there are
still
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some
mild days to
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and I like to wrap up warm and head off for long walks in the blustering wind and have the countryside all to myself. I like to look out for wildlife and interesting plants on my treks.
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I’ll go walking or running with a friend and it feels like the whole place up on the hills belongs
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just
to us.
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for me, autumn is special
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of its
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colours
; the lack of pollen to give me hay fever, the possibility of long
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country
walks and being able to
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enjoy
our wonderful British countryside all to myself!
Eventually
autumn ends, and it becomes
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very
dark and
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cold
as we
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move
into
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winter
. I’m not
so
keen on that as there is
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daylight and it seems to go on forever.
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On the other hand
, we have
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great
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winter
festivals: Halloween; Bonfire night and
of course
Christmas,
so
every
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season
has its
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good
points in my view!
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Written by
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Lucy
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Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam)]
19Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
87Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
31Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe your favourite season in your country. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
10 paragraphs
962 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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