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Describe your favourite actor. v.1

Describe your favourite actor. v. 1
Describe your favourite actor. You should say: Who is he What type of actor he is What are some programs/ movies he acted in And describe why he is your favourite actor. Model Answer: Brad Pitt is one of my very favourite actors and I am a huge fan of his movies. He is a famous Hollywood actor and has got several prizes for his superb work in movies. Honestly, he is a good actor who is known worldwide. He is the husband of another famous female actress Angelina Jolie. His full name is William Bradley "Brad" Pitt and he is around 50 years old now. For his excellent performance in acting he has received a Golden Globe Award, a Screen Actors Guild Award, and three Academy Award nominations in acting categories. He has done some film production works as well. He is a fine actor with a natural gift of depicting the characters. Often his performance in movies gets very high applauses and because of that, he was nominated for Oscars more than once. He usually acts in drama and action movies but his acting varies from the character of a vampire to a war hero and legendary characters as well. I have enjoyed most of the movies acted by him and his performance in movies like Seven, Interview with the vampire, The legend of the falls, 7 years in Tibet, Meet Joe Black was simply excellent. I find him to be a very high-class actor and a superb person with his tremendous activity in social welfare works. All these reasons make him to my favourite actor.
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Describe
your
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actor
. You should say: Who is he What type of
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actor
he is What are
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some
programs/
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movies
he acted in And
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describe
why he is your
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favourite
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actor
. Model Answer:

Brad Pitt is one of my
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very
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favourite
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actors and
I am a huge fan of his
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movies
. He is a
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famous
Hollywood
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actor
and has
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got
several prizes for his superb work in
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movies
.
Honestly
, he is a
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good
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actor
who
is known
worldwide. He is the husband of another
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famous
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female actress
Angelina Jolie. His full name is William Bradley
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Brad
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Pitt and
he is around 50 years
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old
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now
. For his excellent performance in acting he has received a Golden Globe Award, a Screen
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Actors
Guild Award, and three Academy Award nominations in acting categories. He has done
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some
film production works as
well
. He is a fine
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actor
with a natural gift of depicting the characters.
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Often
his performance in
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movies
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gets
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very
high
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applauses
and
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because
of that, he
was nominated
for Oscars more than once. He
usually
acts in drama and action
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movies
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but
his acting varies from the character of a vampire to a war hero and legendary characters as
well
. I have enjoyed most of the
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movies
acted by him and his performance in
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movies
like Seven, Interview with the vampire, The legend of the falls, 7 years in Tibet,
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Meet
Joe Black was
simply
excellent. I find him to be a
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very
high-
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class
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actor
and a superb person with his tremendous activity in social welfare works. All these reasons
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make
him to my
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favourite
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actor
.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe your favourite actor. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
268 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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