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Describe the most polite person you have come across in your life. v.1

Describe the most polite person you have come across in your life. v. 1
Describe the most polite person you have come across in your life. You should say: who that person is how you know the person how is he/she polite what your feeling is towards this person. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer: My meeting with John was an exceptional event. After my acquaintance with him, I felt like I met the most polite man in my life. He truly is a man of gentle nature. He is kind and loves to meet with people and help them in their needs. Though he needs to suffer for his politeness, he is unable to give up his natural habit. This is a nice cue card task for me and I am happy to have the chance of describing him. I came to know about John in my university. He is the only person who came to my help when I was in a dire need of support. In fact, I lost my class diary and a pen on my way to the university and it was John who helped me with his own pen and shared his notes. Later, I came to know that he had a single pen that he gave to me and he did not write a line on his exercise book for the want of a pen. When other students were busy with them, he came forward for my help selflessly. It was his politeness that made me amazed. John is polite in every sense. He never makes any rude remarks to anyone while others find it interesting to make statements on other's troublesome situations. Moreover, when someone is in distress, it is John who moves ahead before everyone else. His speeches are well constructed and he always carefully tries not to hurt anyone with his speech. He is unable to say something against any rude remarks to him and remains silent in this situations. He is well-known both for his gentle nature and talent. I am highly glad to have this person on my friend list. In fact, he is a model for everyone to learn courtesy. He never breaks his promises and makes promise considering his ability. So, I like him very much for his politeness and other qualities. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe the most polite person you have come across in your life. 1. Mark Austin appeared a perfect polite person to me. I met him at a social party here in London. I did not have any idea how a person could be so polite. He stepped forward to meet me when he came to know about my presence. I really like him. And obviously, there are reasons to like him because he exercises all the qualities that a gentleman should have. 2. John is a very polite person and in fact, he is the politest one I have ever met in my life. My meeting with John was interesting. I met him at a pub in California. I was drinking and at a stage, I fainted because it was my very first alcohol experience. John brought me back to home. Later, I came to know about different interesting matters about him. And now we are very good friends. I like him indeed. 3. Mr Johnson is my neighbour and he appears as a polite person. I met him at the tenant’s meeting at the building, located in Strasbourg in France. He speaks almost with a polite voice and behaves well with everyone. He does not talk much unless there is a necessity. Moreover, he tries to adore others for their qualities. In fact, Mr Johnson is the perfect gentleman I have ever meet. He loves to help others in needs and is available in the middle of the night. 4. Patrick is my college friend and his parents have been living here in Vietnam for many years. He is the nicest person I have ever encountered in my life. I met him at the college and his attitudes were adorable. He never takes part in gossip and does not tell lies to others which is a common phenomenon among my other friends. So, I like him much. He is a man of words too. I have never been refused from him whenever I asked for a support from him. 5. Samantha is my best friend and she is the politest person I have ever met. She is my cousin too. She is cultured in different senses. And I love her appreciation of others’ opinion. She never imposes her opinion to others rater tries to make the facts clear to other people. Finally, she wins the battle in a logical manner. For all the reasons, I like her most and believe that she is the most revered person in my circle.
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the most
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polite
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person
you have
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come
across in your
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life
. You should say:
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who
that
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person
is how you
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know
the
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person
how is he/she
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polite
what your feeling is towards this
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person
. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
Sample Answer:

My meeting with John was an exceptional
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event
. After my acquaintance with him, I felt like I
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met
the most
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polite
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man
in my
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life
. He
truly
is a
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man
of gentle nature. He is kind and
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loves
to
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meet
with
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people
and
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help
them in their
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needs
. Though he
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needs
to suffer for his politeness, he is unable to give up his natural habit. This is a nice cue card task for
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me and
I am happy to have the chance of describing him.

I
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came
to
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know
about John in my university. He is the
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only
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person
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who
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came
to my
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help
when I was in a dire
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need
of support. In
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fact
, I lost my
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class
diary and a
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pen
on my way to the university and it was John
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who
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helped
me with his
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own
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pen
and shared his notes. Later, I
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came
to
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know
that he had a single
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pen
that he gave to
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me and
he did not write a line on his exercise book for the want of a
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pen
. When
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other
students were busy with them, he
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came
forward for my
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help
selflessly
. It was his politeness that made me amazed.

John is
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polite
in every sense. He never
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makes
any rude remarks to anyone while others find it interesting to
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make
statements on other's troublesome situations.
Moreover
, when someone is in distress, it is John
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who
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moves
ahead
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before
everyone else. His speeches are
well
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constructed and
he always
carefully
tries not to hurt anyone with his speech. He is unable to say something against any rude remarks to him and remains silent in
Did you mean "these"?
this
situations. He is
well
-known both for his gentle nature and talent.

I am
highly
glad to have this
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person
on my
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friend
list. In
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fact
, he is a model for everyone to learn courtesy. He never breaks his promises and
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makes
promise considering his ability.
So
, I like him
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very
much for his politeness and
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other
qualities. More
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Ideas
to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic:
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Describe
the most
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polite
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person
you have
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come
across in your
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life
. 1. Mark Austin appeared a perfect
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polite
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person
to me. I
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met
him at a social party here in London. I did not have any
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idea
how a
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person
could be
so
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polite
. He stepped forward to
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meet
me when he
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came
to
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know
about my presence. I
really
like him. And
obviously
, there are reasons to like him
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because
he exercises all the qualities that a gentleman should have.

2. John is a
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very
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polite
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person
and in
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fact
, he is the politest one I have
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ever
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met
in my
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life
. My meeting with John was interesting. I
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met
him at a pub in California. I was drinking and at a stage, I fainted
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because
it was my
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very
first
alcohol experience. John brought me back to home. Later, I
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came
to
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know
about
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different
interesting matters about him. And
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now
we are
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very
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good
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friends
. I like him
indeed
.

3. Mr Johnson is my
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neighbour and
he appears as a
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polite
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person
. I
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met
him at the tenant’s meeting at the building, located in Strasbourg in France. He speaks almost with a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
polite
voice and behaves
well
with everyone. He does not talk much unless there is a necessity.
Moreover
, he tries to adore others for their qualities. In
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fact
, Mr Johnson is the perfect gentleman I have
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ever
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meet
. He
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loves
to
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help
others in
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needs
and is available in the middle of the night.

4. Patrick is my college
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friend
and his parents have been living here in Vietnam for
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many
years. He is the nicest
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person
I have
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ever
encountered in my
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life
. I
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met
him at the college and his attitudes were adorable. He never
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takes part
in gossip and does not
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tell
lies to others which is a common phenomenon among my
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other
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friends
.
So
, I like him much. He is a
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man
of words too. I have never
been refused
from him whenever I
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asked for
a support from him.

5. Samantha is my best
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friend and
she is the politest
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person
I have
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ever
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met
. She is my cousin too. She
is cultured
in
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different
senses. And I
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love
her appreciation of others’ opinion. She never imposes her opinion to others rater tries to
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make
the facts
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clear
to
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other
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people
.
Finally
, she wins the battle
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in a logical manner
. For all the reasons, I like her most and believe that she is the most revered
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person
in my circle.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
86Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
Language is not a genetic gift, it is a social gift. Learning a new language is becoming a member of the club – the community of speakers of that language.
Frank Smith

IELTS speaking Describe the most polite person you have come across in your life. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
9 paragraphs
839 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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