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Describe the happiest person you know. v.1

Describe the happiest person you know. v. 1
Describe the happiest person you know. You should say: who this person is how you know this person how he shows happiness and explain why you consider him/ her to be the happiest person you know. Sample Answer: Happiness is hard to define and so does the happiest man. Sometimes the people we think are very happy confess that they have great sufferings and sorrows in their lives. However, if we spend a great deal of time with someone and if we can observe him/ her closely, then we can make a very good assumption of his characteristics and his ideas. I would pick my friend (…say a name of your friend…) to be the happiest person I have ever met or seen. He is my friend from the early childhood and in my opinion he knows the value of being happy and no matter what happens, he is contented and that makes him happy. I first met him in my high school and we both of us used to do debate together. Thus the closeness and friendship grew between us and later on our friendship grew even further when we got admitted to the same university. He has a positive attitude and he is very contented with whatever he has. That’s attitude and positive thinking makes him happy. He does not repent for thinks undone or bad things that happened to him. I heard him saying that life is hard and you can be happy if you are happy in your mind. That’s something I agree and I have found him to be happy in his mind even from the worst experience. He always smiles and never regrets the things undone like others. He feels that happiness is inside us and our positive attitude can make us happy. He has a positive attitude of removing the negativity of life. He loves to enjoy the fuller possibility of life and he has a charismatic character to make his friends happy. For the positive and satisfied mentality he possesses and the happy behaviours he shows always make me consider him to be the happiest person I have ever known.
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Describe
the
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happiest
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person
you
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know
. You should say: who this
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person
is how you
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know
this
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person
how he
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shows
happiness and
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explain
why you consider him/ her to be the
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happiest
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person
you
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know
. Sample Answer:

Happiness is
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hard
to define and
so
does the
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happiest
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man
.
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Sometimes
the
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people
we
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think
are
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very
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happy
confess that they have great sufferings and sorrows in their
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lives
.
However
, if we spend a great deal of time with someone and if we can observe him/ her
closely
, then we can
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make
a
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very
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good
assumption of his characteristics and his
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ideas
.

I would pick my
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friend
(…say a name of your
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friend…)
to be the
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happiest
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person
I have ever met or
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seen
. He is my
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friend
from the early childhood and in my opinion he
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knows
the value of being
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happy
and no matter what happens, he
is contented
and that
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makes
him happy.

I
first
met him in my high
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school and
we both of us
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used
to do debate together.
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Thus
the closeness and friendship grew between us and later on our friendship grew even
further
when we
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got
admitted to the same university.

He has a
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positive
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attitude and
he is
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very
contented with whatever he has. That’s
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attitude
and
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positive
thinking
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makes
him
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happy
. He does not repent for
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thinks
undone or
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bad
things that happened to him. I heard him saying that life is
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hard
and you can be
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happy
if you are
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happy
in your mind. That’s something I
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agree
and I have found him to be
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happy
in his mind even from the worst experience.

He always smiles and never regrets the things undone like others. He feels that happiness is inside us and our
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positive
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attitude
can
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make
us
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happy
.
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He
has a
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positive
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attitude
of removing the negativity of life.
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He
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loves
to enjoy the fuller possibility of
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life and
he has a charismatic character to
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make
his
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friends
happy.

For the
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positive
and satisfied mentality he possesses and the
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happy
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behaviours
he
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shows
always
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make
me consider him to be the
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happiest
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person
I have ever known.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
42Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe the happiest person you know. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
7 paragraphs
358 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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