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Describe your favourite way to communicate someone. v.1

Describe your favourite way to communicate someone. v. 1
Describe your favourite way to communicate someone. You should say: What it is How you use it to communicate others How long you own it and explain why you prefer to use this way to communicate others. Sample Answer: We usually communicate others in several ways and these communication ways differ based on the person we are communicating and our convenience of communication devices. For instance, we usually communicate via email with our clients and co-workers while we prefer using a mobile phone to communicate our friends of family members. My favourite way of communication is the mobile phone. This is mostly because, it is cheaper, easy to use, easily accessible, movable, easily fit in the bags and pockets, could be used for using the internet and other necessary applications, cheaper call rate and offer effective communication. I have a personal mobile phone and when someone calls me, I can see the information of the caller and receive the phone using the touch or tap in a button. After the conversation is done, I just need to put the phone in the pocket. This is as simple as that. Whenever I want to call someone, I just need to dial his/ her number and after s/he receives the call, the connection is on. Besides the calling, someone can easily send and receive texts on the phones which also serve a good way of communicating others. I own a cell phone for more than 10 years and I find it very convenient for communication on personal and official matters. There are many reasons I prefer this way communication. First of all, it is easy to carry and we can take it wherever we go. The calling rates are very cheap nowadays and we can refill the credit of our cell phones very easily. Calling locally and internationally both are supported and hence I prefer to have it as my primary way of communication. Phone calls reach the recipient instantly unlike mail and email and this is why this is a very efficient way of communication when we need to reach someone urgently. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a modern technology you know about.   Describe a conversation you recently had with someone.   Describe an event when you talk to someone living abroad.
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Describe
your
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favourite
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way
to
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communicate
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someone
. You should say: What it is How you
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use
it to
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communicate
others How long you
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own
it and
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explain
why you
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prefer
to
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use
this
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way
to
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communicate
others. Sample Answer:

We
usually
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communicate
others in several
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ways
and these
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communication
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ways
differ based on the person we are communicating and our convenience of
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communication
devices.
For instance
, we
usually
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communicate
via email with our clients and co-workers while we
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prefer
using a mobile
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phone
to
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communicate
our friends of family members.

My
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favourite
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way
of
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communication
is the mobile
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phone
. This is
mostly
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because
, it is cheaper, easy to
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use
,
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easily
accessible, movable,
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easily
fit in the bags and pockets, could be
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used
for using the internet and
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other
necessary applications, cheaper
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call
rate and offer effective communication.

I have a personal mobile
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phone
and when
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someone
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calls
me, I can
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see
the information of the caller and receive the
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phone
using the touch or tap in a button. After the conversation
is done
, I
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just
need to put the
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phone
in the pocket. This is as simple as that. Whenever I want to
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call
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someone
, I
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just
need to dial his/ her number and after s/he receives the
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call
, the connection is on.
Besides
the calling,
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someone
can
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easily
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send
and receive texts on the
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phones
which
also
serve a
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good
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way
of communicating others. I
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own
a cell
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phone
for more than 10 years and I find it
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very
convenient for
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communication
on personal and official matters.

There are
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many
reasons I
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prefer
this
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way
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communication
.
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First of all
, it is easy to
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carry and
we can take it wherever we go. The calling rates are
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very
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cheap
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nowadays and
we can refill the credit of our cell
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phones
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very
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easily
. Calling
locally
and
internationally
both
are supported
and
hence
I
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prefer
to have it as my primary
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way
of
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communication
.
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Phone
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calls
reach the recipient
instantly
unlike mail and email and this is why this is a
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very
efficient
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way
of
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communication
when we need to reach
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someone
urgently
. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
a modern technology
you know
about.
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Describe
a conversation you recently had with
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someone
.
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Describe
an
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event
when you talk to
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someone
living abroad.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
56Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe your favourite way to communicate someone. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
402 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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