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Describe an animal that lives in the water. v.1

Describe an animal that lives in the water. v. 1
Describe an animal that lives in the water. You should say: What is it How you know about it Is it common in your country and describe the animal.   Sample Answer: Whale is an animal that lives in the water and it is the largest animal among the living creatures in the world. The whales usually inhabit in the oceans all around the world and the size varies from 80 to 150 feet. They usually have a lifespan of average 77 years and some whales live over a century. I have heard about this large water animal in one of my textbooks when I was in the kindergarten and later I have seen this animal and their characteristics on different TV channels. No, this is not a common water animal in our country. In fact, fishes are the most common water animal in our country and very few whales could be found in the ocean in our country. This is the largest known animal in the animal kingdom which lives in water and is known as marine mammal animal. The average whales can be 30 meters long and they can have more than 180 tonnes weight. They are long-lived animals and some whales live over 100 years. Whales breathe air, like other mammals, and they are warm-blooded, feed milk to their infants and have body hair. The whale is considered to be an animal that learns, teaches, cooperates and even grieves like other mammal animals. Whales can make extremely loud sounds which are known as whale songs and these sounds are their communication media. It is generally considered that whales are predators but they also eat various other foods like plankton and other animals. Whales that have teeth often eat fish and squid which they mostly hunt using the echolocation. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a wild animal you know about.   Describe a common bird or animal in your country.   Describe your favourite animal.
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an
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animal
that
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lives
in the
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water
. You should say: What is it How
you know
about it Is it
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common
in your
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country
and
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describe
the
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animal
.
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Sample Answer:

Whale is an
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animal
that
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lives
in the
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water
and it is the largest
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animal
among the living creatures in the world. The
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whales
usually
inhabit in the oceans all around the world and the size varies from 80 to
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150 feet
. They
usually
have a lifespan of average 77 years and
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some
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whales
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live
over a century.

I have heard about this large
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water
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animal
in one of my textbooks when I was in the kindergarten and later I have
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seen
this
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animal
and their characteristics on
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different
TV channels. No, this is not a
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common
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water
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animal
in our
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country
. In fact, fishes are the most
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common
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water
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animal
in our
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country
and
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very
few
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whales
could
be found
in the ocean in our country.

This is the largest known
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animal
in the
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animal
kingdom which
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lives
in
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water
and
is known
as marine mammal
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animal
. The average
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whales
can be 30 meters
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long and
they can have more than 180 tonnes weight. They are long-
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lived
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animals
and
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some
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whales
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live
over 100 years.
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Whales
breathe air, like
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other
mammals, and they are warm-blooded, feed milk to their infants and have body hair.

The
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whale
is considered
to be an
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animal
that learns, teaches, cooperates and even grieves like
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other
mammal
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animals
.
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Whales
can
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make
extremely
loud sounds which
are known
as
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whale
songs and these sounds are their communication media. It is
generally
considered that
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whales
are predators
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but
they
also
eat various
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other
foods like plankton and
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other
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animals
.
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Whales
that have teeth
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often
eat fish and squid which they
mostly
hunt using the echolocation. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
a wild
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animal
you know
about.
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Describe
a
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common
bird or
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animal
in your
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country
.
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Describe
your
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favourite
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animal
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
57Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe an animal that lives in the water. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
347 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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