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Describe a place in another part of the world that you would love to visit in the future. v.1

Describe a place in another part of the world that you would love to visit in the future. v. 1
Describe a place in another part of the world that you would love to visit in the future. You should say: what you know about the place how you know about it how you would go there and explain why you would love to visit that place. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer: Bali Island is one of the most charming places in the world and is located in Indonesia. This is a beautiful place indeed to visit. The island is also famous for its mountains formed from volcanic eruptions many years ago, the splendid beach, sunset scenes, coral reefs, temples, resort towns and many more attractive spots. The most important thing is that this is a perfect place for relaxation. The island is also famous for the meditation and yoga practice. I would like to thank you for this nice cue card topic. I came to know about the island first from a US magazine where an article was published about the island. I came to know about the beach views and the geographical characteristics of the island which is really interesting. Besides, visiting the island was also beneficial for mental health. All the matters made me interested to gather more information about this island. Finding no other ways, I took help from Google as well to know more about it. What I found later was amazing. Visiting the island is not very difficult for me. In fact, I will need to obtain a tourist visa from the Indonesian Embassy here in San Francisco. I hope I will get the visa if I could submit the proper documents and explain my purposes of visiting the country. There are no other ways to travel there except the aeroplane. So, I also will need to book the fight with a return ticket. Generally, I love to enjoy the natural views and have already visited many of the parts of the USA. Therefore, now I would like to visit the other parts of the world in immediate. As part of the visit, I am making plans to visit the places in the Bali Island is on the top of the list for its distinguished features and exotic locations. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe a place in another part of the world that you would love to visit in the future. 1. Buckingham Palace is a great one to visit in England. This is the residence of the monarch of the country and also the administrative headquarters. The palace is located in Westminster. I came to know about it from the general knowledge book. To visit the place, I have to collect my passport and visa for England. Besides, I also may need permissions to enter the palace. This is a nice place and related to numerous history. So, I would love visiting there. 2. Darwin is a wonderful place in Australia. The coastline of the city looks wonderful. The sandy sea beach is always filled with the crowd. I was browsing a website to know about beautiful places in Australia and it appeared before me. Australia is far away from my own land. I live in South Africa. So, I will need to arrange for many things to make it come true. I want to visit the place to enjoy the beauties of the country. 3. The Red Fort is located in Delhi and a historical place as well. The fort has been used as the residence of Mughal emperors in their regime. An Indian friend of mine told me about the establishment. Visiting the fort is not easy. At first, I have to go Delhi from New York City. Then I will need my friend’s help to reach the fort. So far, I heard that it was a historical place and different attractive relics are there. So, I would love to go there. 4. South Korea has some special things to explore and the N Seoul Tower is one of them. Officially the tower is known as the YTN Seoul Tower. The Seoul Tower is the second highest point in the country. A recent article about the tower informed me all the information. Visiting the country is a bit troublesome for me from Britain. But I have a plan to go there somehow. This is a very attractive place and a perfect position for observation. So, I want to go there. 5. Neelum Valley in Pakistan is a wonderful place to visit around the year. The place is under the Azad Kashmir area – on the opposite of India occupied Kashmir. The valley is around 240 kilometres in length. This is beautiful land indeed and the entire locality is a blue gem in a practical sense. After reading an article on Kashmir, I came to know about the area. Managing visa for Pakistan would be hard for me. I have seen some photos and they were magnificent. So, I would like to go there. If you can talk about this cue card topic, you should be able to answer the following topics as well: 1. Describe your favourite place. 2. Describe a place you would like to visit in the future. 3. Describe a place near river or sea. 4. Describe a worth visiting place in your city. 5. Talk about a place you liked visiting. 6. Describe a city in your country. 7. Describe a place you went with your parents in your childhood.
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a
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place
in another
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part
of the
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world
that you would
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love
to
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visit
in the future. You should say: what you
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know
about the
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place
how you
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know
about it how you would go there and
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explain
why you would
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love
to
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visit
that
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place
. [You will
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have to
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talk
about the
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topic
for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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Sample Answer:

Bali
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Island
is one of the most charming
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places
in the
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world
and
is located
in Indonesia. This is a
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beautiful
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place
indeed
to
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visit
. The
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island
is
also
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famous
for its mountains formed from volcanic eruptions
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many
years ago, the splendid beach, sunset scenes, coral reefs, temples, resort towns and
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many
more attractive spots. The most
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important
thing is that this is a perfect
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place
for relaxation.
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The
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island
is
also
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famous
for the meditation and yoga practice. I would like to thank you for this nice cue card topic.

I
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came
to
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know
about the
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island
first
from a US magazine where an article
was published
about the
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island
.
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I
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came
to
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know
about the beach views and the geographical characteristics of the
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island
which is
The extreme adjective for interesting is "fascinating", or "exciting".
really interesting
.
Besides
, visiting the
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island
was
also
beneficial for mental health. All the matters made me interested to gather more information about this
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island
. Finding no other ways, I took
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help
from Google as
well
to
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know
more about it. What I found later was amazing.

Visiting the
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island
is not
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very
difficult for me. In fact, I will
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need
to obtain a tourist visa from the Indonesian Embassy here in San Francisco. I hope I will
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get
the visa if I could submit the proper documents and
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explain
my purposes of visiting the
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country
. There are no other ways to travel there except the
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aeroplane
.
So
, I
also
will
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need
to book the fight with a return ticket.

Generally
, I
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love
to enjoy the natural views and have already visited
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many
of the
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parts
of the USA.
Therefore
,
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now
I would like to
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visit
the other
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parts
of the
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world
in immediate. As
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part
of the
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visit
, I am making plans to
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visit
the
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places
in the Bali
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Island
is on the top of the list for its distinguished features and exotic locations. More
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Ideas
to
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talk
about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card
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topic
:
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Topic
:
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Describe
a
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place
in another
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part
of the
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world
that you would
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love
to
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visit
in the future. 1. Buckingham Palace is a great one to
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visit
in England. This is the residence of the monarch of the
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country
and
also
the administrative headquarters. The palace
is located
in Westminster. I
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came
to
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know
about it from the general knowledge book. To
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visit
the
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place
, I
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have to
collect my passport and visa for England.
Besides
, I
also
may
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need
permissions to enter the palace. This is a nice
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place
and related to numerous history.
So
, I would
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love
visiting there.

2. Darwin is a wonderful
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place
in Australia. The coastline of the city looks wonderful. The sandy sea beach is always filled with the crowd. I was browsing a website to
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know
about
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beautiful
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places
in Australia and it appeared
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before
me. Australia is far away from my
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own
land. I
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live
in South Africa.
So
, I will
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need
to arrange for
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many
things to
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make
it
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come
true. I want to
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visit
the
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place
to enjoy the beauties of the
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country. 3
. The Red Fort
is located
in Delhi and a historical
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place
as
well
. The fort has been
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used
as the residence of Mughal emperors in their regime. An Indian friend of mine
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told
me about the establishment. Visiting the fort is not easy. At
first
, I
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have to
go Delhi from New York City. Then I will
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need
my friend’s
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help
to reach the fort.
So
far, I heard that it was a historical
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place
and
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different
attractive relics are there.
So
, I would
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love
to go there.

4. South Korea has
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some
special things to explore and the N Seoul Tower is one of them.
Officially
the tower
is known
as the
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YTN
Seoul Tower. The Seoul Tower is the second highest point in the
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country
. A recent article about the tower informed me all the information. Visiting the
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country
is a bit troublesome for me from Britain.
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But
I have a plan to go there somehow. This is a
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very
attractive
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place
and a perfect position for observation.
So
, I want to go there.

5.
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Neelum
Valley in Pakistan is a wonderful
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place
to
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visit
around the year. The
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place
is under the
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Azad
Kashmir area
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–
on the opposite of India occupied Kashmir. The valley is around 240
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kilometres
in length. This is
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beautiful
land
indeed
and the entire locality is a blue gem in a practical sense. After reading an article on Kashmir, I
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came
to
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know
about the area. Managing visa for Pakistan would be
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hard
for me. I have
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seen
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some
photos and they were magnificent.
So
, I would like to go there. If you can
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talk
about this cue card
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topic
, you should be able to answer the following
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topics
as
well
:

1.
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Describe
your
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favourite
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place. 2
.
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Describe
a
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place
you would like to
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visit
in the future.

3.
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Describe
a
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place
near river or sea.

4.
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Describe
a worth visiting
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place
in your city.

5.
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Talk
about a
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place
you liked visiting.

6.
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Describe
a city in your
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country. 7
.
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Describe
a
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place
you
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went with
your parents in your childhood.
17Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
101Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a place in another part of the world that you would love to visit in the future. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
16 paragraphs
946 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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