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Describe an educational television program. v.1

Describe an educational television program. v. 1
Describe an educational television program. You should say: what it was on which channel it was telecasted what you learned from it and explain why you think it was a good educational program. Model Answer 1: I am incredibly lucky, because I live in the UK, and we have the BBC – British Broadcasting Company, which is funded by a licence fee payable by all British households, companies and organisations. As such, it has a particular public service broadcasting remit, it isn’t funded by advertising, and is expected to produce quality, unbiased factual and ‘public interest’ material. Amongst other things, it has an educational responsibility as part of its remit. Perhaps because of this, the BBC is renowned worldwide for the quality of some of its programmes. In particular, its wildlife broadcasting is breathtakingly good. It happens, that only today I watched the most amazing wildlife documentary, I’m going to tell you all about. What it was on, what channel it was broadcast on and what I learned from it. I think it will be pretty obvious why it is so brilliant – not just in worthy educational terms, but as extraordinary visual entertainment too. The programme was just one of a whole series called ‘The Hunt’. Each episode concentrates on a different part of the natural world, taking an intimate and detailed look at the remarkable strategies employed by hunters to catch their prey and what the hunted have to do to escape. Today’s episode was called, ‘Hunger at sea’ and was about the oceans. Amongst other things, the team had spent years trying to get footage of remarkable marine animals including blue whales – which are the heaviest animal ever to have existed on our planet (it’s 30 metres long, and they weigh appreciably more than even the largest of known dinosaurs), but can still be elusive in the vast expanse of the seas. However, the programme looked at lots of different creatures as well as the blue whales. There were films of sharks, sea lions, frigate birds, dolphins and albatrosses cleverly revealing the strategies they use to hunt for prey in the big blue waters of the oceans. I don’t live near the sea so whilst I know it’s beautiful and I worry a lot about pollution impacting on it, I don’t get to see if very often. This programme demonstrated that the open ocean is an immense wilderness that covers more than half the surface of our planet, yet for the most parts, it's a watery desert, largely devoid of life. It is a fragile ecosystem, and predators face an endless search to find and catch food, yet these great tracts of ocean are home to some of the most remarkable hunters on the planet. The production values of the series were beyond your wildest imaginings. The film footage is remarkable. It took two years, but a team of scientists and underwater photographers eventually got footage not only of a blue whale – a rare enough achievement in itself, but a blue whale feeding on a massive ball of krill, gulping in water and the tiny zooplankton creatures all at once.   It was really extraordinary to see. The programme series is being narrated by Dir David Attenborough – he is a well-respected broadcaster and scientist who delivers interesting information with passion and clarity. The photography though is just amazing. Close up shots of these extraordinary creatures in their natural habitat, the tenacity and dedication of the production teams in obtaining such footage can only be imagined. The programme is currently on BBC1, but I’m sure it will end up being broadcast worldwide as well. I learned so much about marine life, ecosystems and how so many animals survival is interconnected. It makes me sad that our oceans are being polluted and fish stocks over-fished, but I take hope that such extraordinary television programmes might help raise awareness about the complexity and fragility of life in the seas. The programme gave a glimpse of an underwater world that would be otherwise impossible to see, it not only increased my knowledge, but the footage obtained is of scientific importance too, because they were able to capture on film animal behaviour that has never been recorded before. That’s quite something. I think this programme series The Hunt, is well deserving of the accolade of a brilliant education TV programme on natural history. If you get the chance to see it, do so! [ Written by - Lucy Marris: Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam) ]   Sample Answer 2: A few years ago, I was very fond of watching television programmes but I was a bit selective in that case. I saw only the highly educative programs on television. And in this case, Cosmos: A Space-Time Odyssey was the best one for me. Here, I will give a brief description of the television show.   By the way, these days I can hardly manage times to watch TV programmes and mostly watch BBC or CNN for global news and updates. Cosmos: A Space-Time Odyssey began as a television show in 2014. This is a TV series that deals with the past, present and future of the space activities. Besides, the existing show was the follow up of another show that took place in the 1980s, which was named as Cosmos: A Personal Voyage. Days have been passed and the show started a new journey with newer topics. The earlier one has been considered as the milestone for scientific documentaries on television and has started a new era in the exploration of space. Even today, the show is as popular as it was in the past days. The first show was telecasted on the Public Broadcasting Service in the USA and now the later one is telecasted on the 10 channels of 21st Century Fox network. The channels broadcast the show in different times of the weeks and thus I could manage my convenient time to enjoy the show. To make the show, relevant people had to struggle a lot and preparation began a couple of years ago. Detailed plans were made and it also required a huge financial investment. Neil deGrasse Tyson currently hosts the show and he got inspiration to present the show from the previous one when he was a high school student in the 1980s. The show is made with different attractive stories. The impressive feature of the show is the updated use of graphics and special effects to make the events reliable than it was before. I learnt various information about space from this television show. The narrative technique of the show is simple – it appears that the host is telling a story and showing evidence in favour of his story. Besides, the information and facts represented in the show are real and trustworthy. In fact, it does not exhibit some fictional facts to grab attention from the audience. The present show comes with the latest available information about the space and deals with the future events that may take place after many years. The extensive use of graphics and animation is a great feature of this program that has made learning easier. Due to its popularity, the series was available around the globe on numerous television channels until the end of the season. This is surely a great educational program. Before the broadcasting of this program, there were no such educative programs before. This program has gained a huge popularity. The second part of the series underwent several struggles and challenges. Many of the television channels turned reluctant to telecast the program. They were unable to analyse the educative value of the program. But later the program has won several awards for its educative contents. In fact, the contents of the program help us thinking about the outer space and other related matters. It creates a sensitivity among the viewers. So, I think this was really an educative series I have ever seen. Similar Cue Card Topics: Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a TV programme you often watch. Describe your favourite TV show. Describe something interesting you often do. Describe one of your leisure activities. Describe a TV programme you really like.
Describe
an
educational
television
program
. You should say: what it was on which
channel
it was
telecasted
what you learned from it and
explain
why you
think
it was a
good
educational
program
. Model Answer 1:

I am
incredibly
lucky,
because
I
live
in the UK, and we have the BBC
British
Broadcasting
Company
, which
is funded
by a
licence
fee payable by all British households,
companies
and
organisations
. As such, it has a particular public service
broadcasting
remit, it isn’t funded by advertising, and is
expected
to produce quality, unbiased factual and ‘public interest’ material. Amongst other things, it has an
educational
responsibility as
part
of its remit. Perhaps
because of this
, the BBC
is renowned
worldwide for the quality of
some
of its
programmes
.
In particular
, its wildlife
broadcasting
is
breathtakingly
good
. It happens, that
only
today
I
watched
the most amazing wildlife documentary, I’m going to
tell
you all about. What it was on, what
channel
it was broadcast on and what I learned from it. I
think
it will be pretty obvious why it is
so
brilliant
not
just
in worthy
educational
terms,
but
as
extraordinary
visual entertainment too. The
programme
was
just
one of a whole
series
called ‘The Hunt’. Each episode concentrates on a
different
part
of the natural world, taking an intimate and detailed look at the
remarkable
strategies employed by hunters to catch their prey and what the hunted
have to
do to escape.
Today
’s episode
was called
, ‘Hunger at
sea’
and was about the
oceans
. Amongst other things, the team had spent years trying to
get
footage
of
remarkable
marine
animals
including
blue
whales
which are the heaviest
animal
ever to have existed on our planet (it’s 30
metres
long, and they weigh
appreciably
more than even the largest of known dinosaurs),
but
can
still
be elusive in the vast expanse of the
seas
.
However
, the
programme
looked at lots of
different
creatures as
well
as the
blue
whales
. There were films of sharks,
sea
lions, frigate birds, dolphins and albatrosses
cleverly
revealing the strategies they
use to
hunt for prey in the
big
blue
waters of the
oceans
. I don’t
live
near the
sea
so
whilst I know it’s
beautiful
and I worry a lot about pollution impacting on it, I don’t
get
to
see
if
very
often
. This
programme
demonstrated that the open
ocean
is an immense wilderness that covers more than half the surface of our planet,
yet
for the most
parts
, it's a watery desert,
largely
devoid of life. It is a fragile ecosystem, and predators face an endless search to find and catch food,
yet
these great tracts of
ocean
are home to
some
of the most
remarkable
hunters on the planet. The production values of the
series
were beyond your wildest imaginings. The film
footage
is
remarkable
. It took two years,
but
a team of scientists and underwater photographers
eventually
got
footage
not
only
of a
blue
whale
a rare
enough
achievement in itself,
but
a
blue
whale
feeding on a massive ball of krill, gulping in water and the tiny zooplankton creatures all at once.
 
It was
really
extraordinary
to
see
. The
programme
series
is
being narrated
by Dir David Attenborough
he is a
well
-respected broadcaster and scientist who delivers interesting
information
with passion and clarity. The photography though is
just
amazing. Close up shots of these
extraordinary
creatures in their natural habitat, the tenacity and dedication of the production teams in obtaining such
footage
can
only
be imagined
. The
programme
is
currently
on BBC1,
but
I’m sure it will
end
up being broadcast worldwide as
well
. I learned
so
much about marine life, ecosystems and how
so
many
animals
survival
is interconnected
. It
makes
me sad that our
oceans
are
being polluted
and fish stocks over-fished,
but
I take hope that such
extraordinary
television
programmes
might
help
raise awareness about the complexity and fragility of life in the
seas
. The
programme
gave a glimpse of an underwater world that would be
otherwise
impossible to
see
, it not
only
increased my knowledge,
but
the
footage
obtained is of scientific importance too,
because
they were able to capture on film
animal
behaviour
that has never
been recorded
before
. That’s quite something. I
think
this
programme
series
The Hunt, is
well
deserving of the accolade of a brilliant education TV
programme
on natural history. If you
get
the chance to
see
it, do
so
!
[
Written by
-
Lucy
Marris
: Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam)
]
 
Sample Answer 2:

A few years ago, I was
very
fond of watching
television
programmes
but
I was a bit selective
in that case
. I
saw
only
the
highly
educative
programs
on
television
. And
in this case
, Cosmos: A Space-Time Odyssey was the best one for me. Here, I will give a brief description of the
television
show
.
 
By the way, these days I can hardly manage times to
watch
TV
programmes
and
mostly
watch
BBC or CNN for global news and updates.

Cosmos: A Space-Time Odyssey began as a
television
show
in 2014. This is a TV
series
that deals with the past, present and future of the
space
activities.
Besides
, the existing
show
was the follow up of another
show
that took place in the 1980s, which
was named
as Cosmos: A Personal Voyage. Days have
been passed
and the
show
started
a new journey with newer topics. The earlier one has
been considered
as the milestone for scientific documentaries on
television
and has
started
a new era in the exploration of
space
. Even
today
, the
show
is as popular as it was in the past days.

The
first
show
was
telecasted
on the Public
Broadcasting
Service in the USA and
now
the later one is
telecasted
on the 10
channels
of 21st Century Fox network. The
channels
broadcast the
show
in
different
times of the weeks and
thus
I could manage my convenient time to enjoy the
show
. To
make
the
show
, relevant
people
had to struggle a lot and preparation began a couple of years ago. Detailed plans
were made
and it
also
required a huge financial investment. Neil
deGrasse
Tyson
currently
hosts the
show and
he
got
inspiration to present the
show
from the previous one when he was a high school student in the 1980s. The
show
is made
with
different
attractive stories. The impressive feature of the
show
is the updated
use
of graphics and special effects to
make
the
events
reliable
than it was
before
.

I
learnt
various
information
about
space
from this
television
show
. The narrative technique of the
show
is simple
it appears that the host is telling a story and showing evidence in
favour
of his story.
Besides
, the
information
and facts represented in the
show
are real and trustworthy. In
fact
, it does not exhibit
some
fictional facts to grab attention from the audience. The present
show
comes
with the latest available
information
about the
space
and deals with the future
events
that may take place after
many
years. The extensive
use
of graphics and animation is a great feature of this
program
that has made learning easier. Due to its popularity, the
series
was available around the globe on numerous
television
channels
until the
end
of the season.

This is
surely
a great
educational
program
.
Before
the
broadcasting
of this
program
, there were no such educative
programs
before
. This
program
has gained a huge popularity. The second
part
of the
series
underwent several struggles and challenges.
Many
of the
television
channels
turned reluctant to telecast the
program
. They were unable to
analyse
the educative value of the
program
.
But
later the
program
has won several awards for its educative contents. In
fact
, the contents of the
program
help
us
thinking
about the outer
space
and other related matters. It creates a sensitivity
among
the viewers.
So
, I
think
this was
really
an educative
series
I have ever
seen
.

Similar Cue Card Topics: Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
Describe
a TV
programme
you
often
watch
.
Describe
your
favourite
TV
show
.
Describe
something interesting you
often
do.
Describe
one of your leisure activities.
Describe
a TV
programme
you
really
like.
23Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
139Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
48Mistakes
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