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Describe a thing / subject that you want to learn more about. v.1

Describe a thing / subject that you want to learn more about. v. 1
Describe a thing / subject that you want to learn more about. You should say: what it was how you got interested in it what the benefits you get from it and explain why you want to learn more about it.   Sample Answer 1: I learned the Spanish language in my early school years and then moved to a different country with my parents. In three years I learned the very basic if this language and I am very much enthusiastic to enhance my proficiency in it. In fact, Spanish was my second language in my schools and I spent many hours studying and practising it not only to get a good grade on the exam but also to actually know this language. I did not have any alternative but to take part in the Spanish classes during my school days. However, in few days I found it very fascinating. I started spending a considerable amount of  time to learn more about this language and my mother bought me a story book written in Spanish. I was determined to be able to read it. That’s how I started to learn it. I had a moderate skill on handing the basic conversation and writing in Spanish. But a long time since then had passed and I never practised it later on. Learning a language is always helpful in terms of better understanding of their culture, tradition. It has other benefits like better migration and job aspects. I have few friends from Europe and they are my friends only because I could speak Spanish. I had also been able to read few books and magazines written in Spanish language and I enjoyed reading them thoroughly. I had twice been in Spain and I found the language knowledge very handy. Main reason I want to learn about it because I have a passion and enthusiasm to be able to speak Spanish fluently. My childhood memory is connected with it and I don’t want to miss any chance to worship my childhood memories. Apart from that, being able to speak Spanish would be an excellent chance for me to meet new people and read many new books. It would also be helpful to get some privileges to get a better job in a large multinational organisation. Considering all of this fact, I am very much eager to further learn it.   Sample Answer 2: I always wonder how the strings make the sweet sounds attached to a light wood or plastic structure. In fact, it is a surprising issue to me. So, I want to learn more about playing the guitar. I can play the guitar to some smaller scale but I am interested in learning it more skillfully. Guitar is a sort of musical instrument and I am attracted to it since my early childhood. There are a wide number of variations are available but I love the one with six strings most. Sometimes, electric amplifiers or speakers are used to project the sound loudly. Playing the guitar is not so easy. The guitar player needs to pluck the strings with fingers or fingernails, and it should be continuous to create the rhythm. In most of the cases, the strings are made with steel and need tuning. \I was attracted with this musical instrument since my early days. But my attraction increased to this instrument after attending a live concert in my residing place in Mexico City. Some of the rock bands performed at the event and I was amazed at the performances. Each of the strokes in the guitar created a rhythm which was an unforgettable experience to me. After that night, I decided to learn guitar perfectly. In fact, I have a guitar at my home and I play it irregularly. So, I am not a skilled guitarist. Moreover, due to my academic engagements, I am unable to concentrate on learning too. All such matters have made my interest in learning to play the guitar more accurately. The benefits are huge. In fact, learning to play the guitar will be an advantage for me. I want to be a singer in future and it is my passion. If I know how to play the guitar, I could sing songs very well. Further, keeping the practice of guitar will also help me to be in touch with the instrument. In fact, this is a skill and if I do not care for it, someday I will lose it. All my struggles to learn the guitar will go in vain. The most impressive benefit of learning guitar is that it keeps the memory sharp and boosts the creativity level. It also provides a sense of joy inside my mind and removes my worries away. Composing newer tunes is really enjoyable with the guitar. Furthermore, guitar lessons also help to synchronise my physical and mental faculties together. So, it appears that the benefits of learning guitar are adorable. Frankly speaking, I am obsessed with the guitar. I have passed many days and times after this instrument. But I was unable to learn something special. With the help of internet and some of my seniors, I have learnt the basics and practice them. But to be a passionate musician, I need to learn guitar completely. This is a kind of most necessary and basic musical instrument that a musician should know about. The more I will learn it, the more I will be skilled in playing the guitar. The synchronisation with the guitar tune with my fingers will be more smooth. The saying goes that practice makes a man perfect. I want to be a perfect guitarist. For all such reasons, I want to learn guitar more.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe something you want to learn in the future. Describe a skill you want to heave. Describe something interesting you want to do. Describe a skill someone you know has. Describe a plan you have for future. Describe something important you want to learn.
Describe
a thing / subject that you
want
to
learn
more about. You should say: what it was how you
got
interested in it what the
benefits
you
get
from it and
explain
why you
want
to
learn
more about it.
 
Sample Answer 1:

I learned the Spanish
language
in my early school years and then
moved
to a
different
country with my parents. In three years I learned the
very
basic
if this
language and
I am
very
much enthusiastic to enhance my proficiency in it. In
fact
, Spanish was my second
language
in my schools and I spent
many
hours studying and
practising
it not
only
to
get
a
good
grade on the exam
but
also
to
actually
know
this
language
. I did not have any alternative
but
to
take part
in the Spanish classes during my school days.
However
, in few days I found it
very
fascinating. I
started
spending a considerable amount of
 
time to
learn
more about this
language
and my mother
bought
me a story book written in Spanish. I
was determined
to be
able
to read it. That’s how I
started
to
learn
it. I had a moderate
skill
on handing the
basic
conversation and writing in Spanish.
But
a long time since then had passed and I never
practised
it later on.
Learning
a
language
is always helpful in terms of better understanding of their culture, tradition. It has other
benefits
like better migration and job aspects. I have few friends from
Europe and
they are my friends
only
because
I could speak Spanish. I had
also
been
able
to read few books and magazines written in Spanish
language
and I enjoyed reading them
thoroughly
.
I
had twice been in Spain and I found the
language
knowledge
very
handy. Main reason I
want
to
learn
about it
because
I have a passion and enthusiasm to be
able
to speak Spanish
fluently
. My childhood memory
is connected
with it and I don’t
want
to miss any chance to worship my childhood memories. Apart from that, being
able
to speak Spanish would be an excellent chance for me to
meet
new
people
and read
many
new books. It would
also
be helpful to
get
some
privileges to
get
a better job in a large multinational
organisation
. Considering all of this
fact
, I am
very
much eager to
further
learn
it.
 
Sample Answer 2:

I always wonder how the
strings
make
the sweet sounds attached to a light wood or plastic structure. In
fact
, it is a surprising issue to me.
So
, I
want
to
learn
more about playing the guitar. I can
play
the guitar to
some
smaller scale
but
I
am interested
in
learning
it more
skillfully
.

Guitar is a sort of musical
instrument and
I
am attracted
to it since my early childhood. There are a wide number of variations are available
but
I
love
the one with six
strings
most.
Sometimes
, electric amplifiers or speakers are
used
to project the sound
loudly
. Playing the guitar is not
so
easy. The guitar player needs to pluck the
strings
with fingers or fingernails, and it should be continuous to create the rhythm. In most of the cases, the
strings
are made
with steel and need tuning.

\I
was attracted
with this musical
instrument
since my early days.
But
my attraction increased to this
instrument
after attending a
live
concert in my residing place in Mexico City.
Some of the
rock bands performed at the
event and
I
was amazed
at the performances. Each of the strokes in the guitar created a rhythm which was an unforgettable experience to me. After that night, I decided to
learn
guitar
perfectly
. In
fact
, I have a guitar at my home and I
play
it
irregularly
.
So
, I am not a skilled guitarist.
Moreover
, due to my academic engagements, I am unable to concentrate on
learning
too. All such matters have made my interest in
learning
to
play
the guitar more
accurately
.

The
benefits
are huge. In
fact
,
learning
to
play
the guitar will be an advantage for me. I
want
to be a singer in future and it is my passion. If I
know
how to
play
the guitar, I could sing songs
very
well
.
Further
, keeping the practice of guitar will
also
help
me to be in touch with the
instrument
. In
fact
, this is a
skill
and if I do not care for it, someday I will lose it. All my struggles to
learn
the guitar will go in vain. The most impressive
benefit
of
learning
guitar is that it
keeps
the memory sharp and boosts the creativity level. It
also
provides a sense of joy inside my mind and removes my worries away. Composing newer tunes is
really
enjoyable with the guitar.
Furthermore
, guitar lessons
also
help
to
synchronise
my physical and mental faculties together.
So
, it appears that the
benefits
of
learning
guitar are adorable.

Frankly
speaking, I
am obsessed
with the guitar. I have passed
many
days and times after this
instrument
.
But
I was unable to
learn
something
special. With the
help
of internet and
some
of my seniors, I have
learnt
the basics and practice them.
But
to be a passionate musician, I need to
learn
guitar completely. This is a kind of most necessary and
basic
musical
instrument
that a musician should
know
about. The more I will
learn
it, the more I will
be skilled
in playing the guitar. The
synchronisation
with the guitar tune with my fingers will be more smooth.
The
saying goes that practice
makes
a
man
perfect. I
want
to be a perfect guitarist. For all such reasons, I
want
to
learn
guitar more.
 
Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
Describe
something
you
want
to
learn
in the future.
Describe
a
skill
you
want
to heave.
Describe
something
interesting you
want
to do.
Describe
a
skill
someone you
know
has.
Describe
a plan you have for future.
Describe
something
important
you
want
to
learn
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
94Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21Mistakes
Learn a new language and get a new soul.
Czech Proverb

IELTS speaking Describe a thing / subject that you want to learn more about. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
7 paragraphs
1022 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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