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TPO11- some people think that children should be allowed to watch whatever television program they choose to. Others think that parents should exercise control over the television program their children watch. v.2

TPO11- some people think that children should be allowed to watch whatever television program they choose to. Others think that parents should exercise control over the television program their children watch. v. 2
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS speaking TPO11- some people think that children should be allowed to watch whatever television program they choose to. Others think that parents should exercise control over the television program their children watch. v. 2

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  American English
1 paragraphs
0 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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