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Talk about a painting you would like to have in your home. v.1

Talk about a painting you would like to have in your home. v. 1
Talk about a painting you would like to have in your home. You should say: what is it how you know about it how much it would cost you and explain why you want to have it in your home. Sample Answer: ‘The Creation of Adam’ painted by Michelangelo is the painting that I would like to have in my house. This is a painting that forms the part of the Sistine Chapel Ceiling and it illustrates the Biblical creation narration of human from the book of Genesis. This picture depicts the creation of human where God breathes the life into Adam. This is considered to be one of the finest works ever done by a painter and only rivalled by two other great painting: Mona Lisa and The Last Supper. I saw a picture of this painting in our history book when I was in high school and then I was amazed by the painting and the idea of the painting. I am sure this painting is priceless and no individual would be able to own it and hang it in his/her house. But I can buy a copied version of this painting which would cost me around $90. When I looked at the painting in my early childhood, I was enthralled by the idea and fine work of this painting.   This was the painting that inspired me to learn more about painting and greatest work of mythological paintings. Later I learned about other great paintings by Michelangelo and by other greatest artists. Furthermore, every time I look at this picture, I feel the overwhelming joy of creation, the human race and divinity. Because of this, I would like to have this picture (more accurately the copy of the original one) in my home. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe something you want to buy.   Describe an important possession you have at your home.   Describe a painting or artwork you know about.   Describe something  you have at your home for a long.   Describe a photo or art you remember.
Talk about a
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painting
you would like to have in your home. You should say: what is it how
you know
about it how much it would cost you and
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explain
why you want to have it in your home. Sample Answer:

‘The
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Creation
of Adam’ painted by Michelangelo is the
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painting
that I would like to have in my
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house
. This is a
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painting
that forms the part of the Sistine Chapel Ceiling and it illustrates the Biblical
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creation
narration of human from the
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book of Genesis
. This
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picture
depicts the
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creation
of human where God breathes the life into Adam.
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This
is considered
to be one of the finest works ever done by a painter and
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only
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rivalled
by two other great
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painting
: Mona Lisa and The Last Supper.

I
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saw
a
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picture
of this
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painting
in our history book when I was in high school and then I
was amazed
by the
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painting
and the
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idea
of the
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painting
. I am sure this
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painting
is priceless and no individual would be able to
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own
it and hang it in his/her
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house
.
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But
I can
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buy
a copied version of this
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painting
which would cost me around $90. When I looked at the
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painting
in my early childhood, I
was enthralled
by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
and fine work of this
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painting
.
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This was the
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painting
that inspired me to learn more about
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painting
and greatest work of mythological
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paintings
. Later I learned about other great
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paintings
by Michelangelo and by other greatest artists.
Furthermore
, every time I look at this
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picture
, I feel the overwhelming joy of
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creation
, the human race and divinity.
Because of this
, I would like to have this
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picture
(more
accurately
the copy of the original one) in my home.

Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
something you want to
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buy
.
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Describe
an
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important
possession you have at your home.
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Describe
a
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painting
or artwork
you know
about.
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Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
something
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you have at your home for a long.
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Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a photo or art you remember.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS speaking Talk about a painting you would like to have in your home. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
4 paragraphs
364 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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