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Describe a typical day in your life when you were a child. v.1

Describe a typical day in your life when you were a child. v. 1
Describe a typical day in your life when you were a child. You should say: what you did and ate what sorts of game or sports you played who looked after you and explain what was most enjoyable of it. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Model Answer 1: As a child, my typical days were like that of most other children, who were attending an elementary school, except, of course, on the days when the weekend arrived because all I used to do during my weekend was to mostly sleep. Anyway, my typical day started at around 7: 00 am when I used to get ready to go to my school after freshening up and eating my breakfast. By the way, I really enjoyed having milk and cereal as my breakfast, but sometimes I had to eat just a plain vegetable sandwich with a glass of milk with it when there was no cereal. After arriving my school, of course, I needed to attend classes and other school activities for a marathon 7 hours that included an hour of lunch break and 30 minutes of physical exercise, which, by the way, I never really liked, although I liked the tiffin, provided by my school, of boiled egg, potato chips and a banana/apple a lot during the lunch hour. After finishing school, I straight returned to my home and had to take some rest, as was the rule, put forth by my mother, before going out to play with my friends. Sometimes, I used to play football with my friends, and I used to serve as their regular goalkeeper, at a playground next to my home. Sometimes, I used to ride my bicycle there also without going too far from my home as my mother would never approve of that. Later in the day, I sometimes used to watch some TV as well with my family. The most enjoyable part of my day was walking to school with my friends as I could talk about a lot of things with them and make jokes. Another thing, which I really enjoyed, was buying my favourite ice-creams during the lunch break at my school and sharing them with my friends. Finally, I also enjoyed it a lot when my mother sometimes allowed me to watch my favourite children movie before going to bed at night.   Model Answer 2: Thank you sir/madam for this interesting topic. I spent my childhood in a beautiful suburban area and my childhood was quite exciting. Honestly speaking, my childhood was magical and full of surprises. There was no crisis, anxiety or responsibilities and every moment, I was ready to explore the unknown and do something new and interesting.   I would like to talk about a typical day of my childhood when I was around 7 or 8 years old. I used to wake up very early and get ready for my school. I used to eat my breakfast at around 6. 30 in the morning and the milk, bread, banana and egg were the usual breakfast items. My mother prepared breakfast for the whole family. Then I rode with my dad on his motorbike every day to school. I played with my classmates before and after our classes. I mostly played football, chess, hide-and-seek and the merry-go-round with my classmates and friends.      When I returned home at around 2. 00 pm, it was the time for taking a shower and no matter how hard I tried to avoid it, my mother always made sure that I took my shower. For lunch, we ate what my mother cooked at home and she was a gorgeous cook who had an uncanny power of cooking delicious meals. Interestingly, I never wanted to take a nap after lunch and play instead, but my mother would not let me.   As I can recall, my mother mostly looked after me while my father tried to spend quality time with both of us when he was at home. He often helped me complete my homework, or played chess with me. I must be very lucky to have such passionate, caring and friendly parents who always sacrificed their interests to be with my side and to make us happy. I did not have any brother or sister and I always thought kids with a lot of siblings had more fun!   The afternoon was the most exciting time for me as I could do anything at that time and was not forced to study. I often went outside to play with my friends. We played football, chess and merry-go-round and the type of games we played varied based on the season. Sometimes we ran and shouted for no apparent reason. At night I spend a couple of hours to watch TV and then complete my homework. I usually went to bed at around 10. 30 pm.   I would say everything in my childhood was exhilarating. However, the natural beauty around our neighbourhood, my parents, unbound freedom to play and good friends were something truly special and I still miss those days. I wish I could get back to those days and enjoy my time as a child again!   Your readiness to talk about this topic would enable you to talk about the following topics: 1. Talk about a day in your childhood. 2. Describe something interesting you remember doing in your childhood. 3. Talk about your days in your teenage period. 4. Talk about how you spent your childhood. 5. Describe a happy moment in your life.
Describe
a
typical
day in your life when you were a child. You should say: what you did and
ate
what sorts of game or sports you
played
who
looked after you and
explain
what was most enjoyable of it. [You will
have to
talk
about the
topic
for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
think
about what you are going to say. You can
make
some
notes to
help
you if you wish.
]
Model Answer 1: As a child, my
typical
days were like that of most other children,
who
were attending an elementary
school
, except,
of course
, on the days when the weekend arrived
because
all I
used
to do during my weekend was to
mostly
sleep.

Anyway
, my
typical
day
started
at
around
7: 00 am when I
used
to
get
ready to go to my
school
after freshening up and eating my
breakfast
. By the way, I
really
enjoyed having milk and cereal as my
breakfast
,
but
sometimes
I had to eat
just
a plain vegetable sandwich with a glass of milk with it when there was no cereal. After arriving my
school
,
of course
, I needed to attend classes and other
school
activities for a marathon 7 hours that included an hour of lunch break and 30 minutes of physical exercise, which, by the way, I never
really
liked, although I liked the
tiffin
, provided by my
school
, of boiled egg, potato chips and a banana/apple a
lot
during the lunch hour.

After finishing
school
, I straight returned to my home and had to take
some
rest, as was the
rule
, put forth by my
mother
,
before
going out to
play
with my
friends
.
Sometimes
, I
used
to
play
football with my
friends
, and I
used
to serve as their regular goalkeeper, at a playground
next
to my home.
Sometimes
, I
used
to ride my bicycle there
also
without going too far from my home as my
mother
would never approve of that. Later in the day, I
sometimes
used
to
watch
some
TV as
well
with my family.

The most enjoyable part of my day was walking to
school
with my
friends
as I could
talk
about a
lot
of things with them and
make
jokes. Another thing, which I
really
enjoyed, was buying my
favourite
ice-creams during the lunch break at my
school
and sharing them with my
friends
.
Finally
, I
also
enjoyed it a
lot
when my
mother
sometimes
allowed
me to
watch
my
favourite
children movie
before
going to bed at night.
 
Model Answer 2: Thank you sir/madam for this interesting
topic
. I spent my childhood in a
beautiful
suburban area and my childhood was quite exciting.
Honestly
speaking, my childhood was magical and full of surprises. There was no crisis, anxiety or responsibilities and every moment, I was ready to explore the unknown and do something new and interesting.
 
I would like to
talk
about a
typical
day of my childhood when I was
around
7 or 8 years
old
. I
used
to wake up
very
early and
get
ready for my
school
.
I
used
to eat my
breakfast
at
around
6. 30 in the morning and the milk, bread, banana and egg were the usual
breakfast
items. My
mother
prepared
breakfast
for the whole family. Then I rode with my dad on his motorbike every day to
school
. I
played
with my classmates
before
and after our classes. I
mostly
played
football, chess,
hide
-and-seek and the merry-go-round with my classmates and
friends
.
    
When
I returned home at
around
2. 00 pm, it was the
time
for taking a shower and no matter how
hard
I tried to avoid it, my
mother
always made sure that I took my shower. For lunch, we
ate
what my
mother
cooked at
home and
she was a gorgeous cook
who
had an uncanny power of cooking delicious meals.
Interestingly
, I never wanted to take a nap after lunch and
play
instead
,
but
my
mother
would not
let
me.
 
As I can recall, my
mother
mostly
looked after me while my father tried to spend quality
time
with both of us when he was at home. He
often
helped
me complete my homework, or
played
chess with me. I
must
be
very
lucky to have such passionate, caring and friendly parents
who
always sacrificed their interests to be with my side and to
make
us happy. I did not have any brother or sister and I always
thought
kids with a
lot
of siblings had more fun!
 
The afternoon was the most exciting
time
for me as I could do anything at that
time
and was not forced to study. I
often
went outside to
play
with my
friends
. We
played
football, chess and merry-go-round and the type of games we
played
varied based on the season.
Sometimes
we ran and shouted for no apparent reason. At
night I
spend a couple of hours to
watch
TV and then complete my homework. I
usually
went to bed at
around
10. 30 pm.
 
I would say everything in my childhood was exhilarating.
However
, the natural beauty
around
our
neighbourhood
, my parents, unbound freedom to
play
and
good
friends
were something
truly
special and I
still
miss those days. I wish I could
get
back to those days and enjoy my
time
as a child again!
 
Your readiness to
talk
about this
topic
would enable you to
talk
about the following
topics
: 1.
Talk
about a day in your childhood.

2.
Describe
something interesting you remember doing in your childhood.

3.
Talk
about your days in your teenage period.

4.
Talk
about how you spent your childhood.

5.
Describe
a happy moment in your life.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
84Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a typical day in your life when you were a child. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
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961 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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