Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Describe a time when you had to change your plan. v.1

Describe a time when you had to change your plan. v. 1
Describe a time when you had to change your plan. You should say: when this happened what made you change the plan what the new plan was and how you felt about the change. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer 1: I am not exactly one of those people who like to plan things ahead of the schedule. But, when I do plan, which seems to be harder for me than doing the actual works, I want to make sure that I am able to execute my plans properly in order to “reap” the benefits of my “hard work”. But, unfortunately, it was not the case when I planned for a camping trip with my cousins last time about 2 years ago in order to spend a night at a lake site. We knew exactly what we were up to. So, we prepared for everything by packing all the necessary things from sleeping bags, tents and outdoor cooking supplies to maps, compass, flashlights, extra clothing, lighters, candles and first aid kits. In fact, we had a perfect plan with everything under control except, of course, the weather. Well, we found out just before a day ahead of our scheduled trip that there would be a hailstorm with some heavy rains in the forecast the following day. So, the new plan (or its lack thereof) was that we would remain indoors the whole day while watching some footballs and movies over some freshly-baked popcorns and cans of cold coca cola on the sides. And, if weather permitting, we possibly could enjoy some grilled barbeque as well. Well, how I felt about the change? Let’s just say that the weather guy, who had forecasted about a bright and sunny day a week earlier on my TV, wouldn’t exactly be very pleased to know what I “called” him in his absence, only to realize at the end, of course, that the weather guy wasn’t exactly in control of the weather either. However, the worst part of changing the plan was that I was not allowed to enjoy our camping and a great outdoors near a beautiful lake while fishing in it with my cousins, courtesy to the “not-so” cooperative weather. Finally, unpacking my bags and luggage and putting the stuff back in the right places due to the change in the plan was also a bit irritating, to say the least. But, other than that, I was pretty relaxed, consoling myself, that there always was the next time. So, instead of remaining disappointed, I decided to enjoy my time inside my house with my cousins while planning for our next camping trip except, of course, this time around, we didn’t want to rely on a weather guy for our weather information.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Describe
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
when you had to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plan
. You should say: when this happened what made you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plan
what the new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plan
was and how you felt about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
. [You will
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
about what you are going to say. You can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
notes to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you if you wish.
Loose punctuation mark.
]
Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
 
Model Answer 1: I am not
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
exactly
one of those
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who like to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plan
things ahead of the schedule.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, when I do
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plan
, which seems to be harder for me than doing the actual works, I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that I am able to execute my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plans
properly
in order to “reap” the benefits of my “
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
work”.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, unfortunately, it was not the case when I planned for a camping trip with my cousins last
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
about 2 years ago in order to spend a night at a lake site. We knew
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
exactly
what we were up to.
So
, we prepared for everything by packing all the necessary things from sleeping bags, tents and outdoor cooking supplies to maps, compass, flashlights, extra clothing, lighters, candles and
first
aid kits. In fact, we had a perfect
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plan
with everything under control except,
of course
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weather
.
Well
, we found out
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
a day ahead of our scheduled trip that there would be a hailstorm with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
heavy rains in the forecast the following day.

So
, the new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plan
(or its lack thereof) was that we would remain indoors the whole day while watching
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
footballs and movies over
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
freshly
-baked
Possible spelling mistake found.
popcorns
and cans of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
coca cola on the sides. And, if
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weather
permitting, we
possibly
could enjoy
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
grilled
Possible spelling mistake found.
barbeque
as
well
.

Well
, how I felt about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
?
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
’s
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
say that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weather
guy, who had forecasted about a bright and sunny day a week earlier on my TV, wouldn’t
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
exactly
be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
to know what I “called” him in his absence,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
to realize at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
,
of course
, that the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weather
guy wasn’t
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
exactly
in control of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weather
either.
However
, the worst part of changing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plan
was that I was not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
allowed
to enjoy our camping and a great outdoors near a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
lake while fishing in it with my cousins, courtesy to the “not-
so
” cooperative
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weather
.
Finally
, unpacking my bags and luggage and putting the stuff back in the
right
places due to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
change
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plan
was
also
a bit irritating, to say the least.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, other than that, I was pretty relaxed, consoling myself, that there always was the
next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
So
,
instead
of remaining disappointed, I decided to enjoy my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
inside my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
with my cousins while planning for our
next
camping trip except,
of course
, this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
around, we didn’t want to rely on a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weather
guy for our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weather
information.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a time when you had to change your plan. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
493 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts