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Describe a special trip you would like to go on in the future. v.1

Describe a special trip you would like to go on in the future. v. 1
Describe a special trip you would like to go on in the future. You should say: when possibly it will be where would you go what preparation do you need for that trip and explain why this would be a special trip. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer 1: I love to travel and being in a new place is quite a sensational experience for me. I have visited more than 10 countries and most of the famous places in my homeland. However, most of my trips were either solo or with friends. A few months ago I planned a very special trip that I would like to go on in the near future. I want to visit (. . . a sea beach name in your country. . . ) and take my parents on this very special trip. The main reason this would be a special trip is that my parents would be with me and this would be the first time they will visit the largest sea beach in our country. Having my parents with me there would make it special. It's been more than 7 years when we had our last trip together. Probably we will have this special trip in the next January. I will take few days off from my office and would prepare for the trip. This would be 6-8 hours journey and we would prefer to travel by train rather than bus. My parents are also very excited about the journey and they are also looking forward to going on this trip. We do not need much preparation for this trip as this would a short trip and we would be staying for only 4-5 days, I guess. We would only need to be concerned about the weather condition and pick clothes that are suitable for the summer season. We will start this trip from the city train station and our preference would be to book a first-class compartment of the train. The train journey is usually pleasant in our country and we will have the chance to enjoy the scenic beauty on both sides of our route. After we arrive the destination, we will first reserve a nice hotel for us that will have the view of the sea beach. If we take the train at around 6: 00 in the morning, we will reach there just before 2: 00 pm, I assume. We will have our lunch and take rest for a couple of hours. In the afternoon we will go and enjoy the sea beach and stay for a couple of hours there. We will also enjoy the sea-foods from a renowned restaurant and get back to our hotel at night. During this trip, we will visit two other nearby famous tourists destinations and enjoy our stay there. We will buy some gifts for other family members and relatives and enjoy the whole trip.
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Describe
a
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special
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trip
you would like to go on in the future. You should say: when
possibly
it will be where would you go what preparation do you need for that
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trip
and
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explain
why this would be a
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special
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trip
. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
Sample Answer 1:

I
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love
to travel and being in a new place is quite a sensational experience for me. I have visited more than 10
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countries
and most of the
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famous
places in my homeland.
However
, most of my
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trips
were either solo or with friends. A few months ago I planned a
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very
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special
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trip
that I would like to go on in the near future. I want to visit (.
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.
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.
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a
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sea
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beach
name in your
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country
.
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.
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.
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)
and take my
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parents
on this
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very
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special
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trip
. The main reason this would be a
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special
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trip
is that my
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parents
would be with me and this would be the
first
time they will visit the largest
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sea
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beach
in our
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country
. Having my
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parents
with me there would
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make
it
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special
. It's been more than 7 years when we had our last
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trip
together.

Probably
we will have this
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special
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trip
in the
next
January. I will take few days off from my office and would prepare for the
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trip
. This would be 6-8 hours
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journey and
we would prefer to travel by
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train
rather
than bus. My
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parents
are
also
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very
excited about the
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journey and
they are
also
looking forward to going on this trip.

We do not need much preparation for this
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trip
as this would a short
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trip and
we would be staying for
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only
4-5 days,
I guess
. We would
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only
need to
be concerned
about the weather condition and pick clothes that are suitable for
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the summer season
.
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We
will
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start
this
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trip
from the city
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train
station and our preference would be to book a
first
-
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class
compartment of the
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train
. The
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train
journey is
usually
pleasant in our
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country and
we will have the chance to
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enjoy
the scenic beauty on both sides of our route.

After we arrive the destination, we will
first
reserve a nice hotel for us that will have the view of the
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sea
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beach
. If we take the
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train
at around 6: 00 in the morning, we will reach there
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just
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before
2: 00 pm, I assume. We will have our lunch and take rest for a couple of hours. In the afternoon we will go and
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enjoy
the
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sea
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beach
and stay for a couple of hours there. We will
also
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enjoy
the sea-foods from a renowned restaurant and
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get
back to our hotel at night. During this
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trip
, we will visit two other nearby
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famous
tourists destinations and
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enjoy
our stay there. We will
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buy
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some
gifts for other family members and relatives and
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enjoy
the whole
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trip
.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
48Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Mistakes
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Roger Ascham

IELTS speaking Describe a special trip you would like to go on in the future. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
518 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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