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Describe a small and successful company you know. v.1

Describe a small and successful company you know. v. 1
Describe a small and successful company you know. You should say: what’s the name of the company how you know about it what kind of business this company does and explain why you think this company is successful. Sample Answer 1: Well, the first company that popped up in my mind after I read the topic of this cue card is known as ‘The rainfall’ and this is a readymade garments manufacturer in our hometown. In just 4-5 years this company has gained a huge popularity in the local and in some foreign markets and has expanded from a 10 employee-run company to a workplace for more than few hundred employees. In term of their success, I can say that this company is the role-model for many newly established companies in this same sector. ‘The rainfall’ is an interesting name and in a TV interview one of the founding members of this company told the history of this company and according to him the day they decided to establish this company was a rainy day and it was pouring heavily and ceaselessly. Since this company  is located in our hometown where I have observed their first establishment till their latest expansion in the capital city, I know most of the history of this company. One of the founding members is a relative of one of my friends and I have visited the main office of this company more than once. This company mainly produces readymade garments for ladies and gents of all ages and then it sell those products to local and international brands. The ready made dresses this company mainly works on includes jeans pants, cardigans, polo shirt, T-shirt and trousers. Recently they have started making kids items which are also gaining huge popularity. Their business includes manufacturing and packing the readymade garments, marketing those products and branding. So far they have achieved huge success and they are doing a great business. I would define their success basically in three ways. First, the expansion of the company is quite remarkable. They initially had a small factory and an office room with not more than 10-12 employees. This was probably not more than 6 years ago and in the next few years, they have become one of the largest readymade garments in our area. They now employ more than  4-5 hundred employees and have 7-8 offices in different locations. Second, their revenue must have gone higher than any other similar company in our area. They are doing better and bigger business and that has made it possible for the owners to become successful in this sector. Finally, the brand popularity of this company is quite enviable. They have been able to maintain the quality of their product and that has made them one of the most popular brands in our area.   Sample Answer 2: Paris is a metropolitan city. A good number of shops and cafes are available here. But in line with them, some small companies are also growing. Bullario is one of them and the company owns a small shop which is expert in producing handmade gift items. Bullario is a specialist on selling handmade attractive gift items. The company is small but its products are really handsome and lucrative. Besides, pricing is not an issue with them. They sell different types of show pieces, wax-made statues, handmade flowers, flower vases, and many other items for regular use. Besides, the items are also could be used for presenting to someone. Bullario initially emerged as an online business platform but with the gradual development and its demands of products, it has taken the shape of a real-life business organisation though small in size. Bullario currently operates in Paris only and it also plans for expanding the business in some other cities shortly. I was seeking a small gift item for my niece and searched for a suitable place nearby my location in Paris. Suddenly I saw a page on social networking site, facebook, about such an online store that sells the things I need. Then I browsed their website and came to know that they have both online and physical stores. Since the shop was near my residence, I planned for a visit. I was amazed by their collection of items. Despite being a very small shop, they arranged for diversified items. The collection and variety of items were really adorable. I picked a couple of small gift items and show pieces to present my niece. I talked with the owner of the shop and came to know about different important information about the shop. Bullario is mostly a small shop and deals in diversified gift items mostly. The most important matter is that majority of the items are handmade and definitely with care. Some of the items are imported from different parts of the world. The business is doing very well only for its attention to the quality. The refund policy of this company is also admirable. If the purchased products are in good condition, they do not hesitate to refund the money. Besides, the company also provides a provision to replace or exchange the products with any other products and adjust the pricing issues. This is really a helpful feature from this company whereas I had some bitter experience in replacing purchased goods from some large shops and superstores. But the scenario was completely opposite here. They were highly cordial in such matters. This is a successful company from many aspects. As far as I know from the owner that the demands of the products are increasing gradually. As a result, they are making more profits and planning to expand the business. They have been maintaining the product quality and are also aware of their rights and responsibilities towards the customers. They do not bargain with the customers and sells the products at a fixed price. But they provide some off to the majority of the products round the year. Besides, they have a smart marketing strategy. It does not follow the conventional methods of marketing rather relies on the digital marketing. Consequently, within a short time, Bullario has drawn the attention of many of its existing customers. Therefore, I think this is a successful company and in the long run, it will grow more.     Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a successful company in your hometown. Talk about a small business you know about. Talk about a company where you worked.
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Describe
a
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small
and
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successful
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company
you
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know
. You should say: what’s the name of the
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company
how you
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know
about it what kind of
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business
this
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company
does and
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explain
why you
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think
this
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company
is
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successful
. Sample Answer 1:

Well
, the
first
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company
that popped up in my mind after I read the topic of this
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cue
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card
is known
as ‘The rainfall’ and this is a
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readymade
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garments
manufacturer in our hometown. In
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just
4-5 years this
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company
has gained a huge popularity in the local and in
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some
foreign markets and has expanded from a 10 employee-run
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company
to a workplace for more than few hundred employees. In term of their success, I can say that this
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company
is the role-model for
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many
newly
established
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companies
in this same sector.

‘The rainfall’ is an interesting name and in a TV interview one of the founding members of this
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company
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told
the history of this
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company
and according to him the day they decided to establish this
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company
was a rainy day and it was pouring
heavily
and
ceaselessly
.

Since this
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company
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is located
in our hometown where I have observed their
first
establishment till their latest expansion in the capital city, I
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know
most of the history of this
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company
. One of the founding members is a relative of one of my friends and I have visited the main office of this
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company
more than once.

This
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company
mainly
produces
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readymade
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garments
for ladies and gents of all ages and then it
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sell
those
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products
to local and international brands. The
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ready made
dresses this
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company
mainly
works on includes jeans pants, cardigans, polo shirt, T-shirt and trousers. Recently they have
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started
making kids
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items
which are
also
gaining huge popularity. Their
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business
includes manufacturing and packing the
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readymade
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garments
,
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marketing
those
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products
and branding.
So
far they have achieved huge
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success and
they are doing a great business.

I would define their success
basically
in three ways.
First
, the expansion of the
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company
is quite remarkable. They
initially
had a
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small
factory and an office room with not more than 10-12 employees. This was
probably
not more than 6 years ago and in the
next
few years, they have become one of the largest
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readymade
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garments
in our area. They
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now
employ more than
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4-5 hundred employees and have 7-8 offices in
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different
locations. Second, their revenue
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must
have gone higher than any
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other
similar
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company
in our area. They are doing better and bigger
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business
and that has made it possible for the owners to become
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successful
in this sector.
Finally
, the brand popularity of this
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company
is quite enviable. They have been able to maintain the quality of their
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product
and that has made them one of the most popular brands in our area.
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Sample Answer 2:

Paris is a metropolitan city. A
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good
number of
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shops
and
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cafes
are available here.
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But
in line with them,
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some
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small
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companies
are
also
growing.
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Bullario
is one of them and the
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company
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owns
a
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small
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shop
which is expert in producing
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handmade
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gift
items.

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Bullario
is a specialist on selling
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handmade
attractive
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gift
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items
. The
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company
is
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small
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but
its
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products
are
really
handsome and lucrative.
Besides
, pricing is not an issue with them. They
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sell
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different
types of
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show
pieces, wax-made statues,
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handmade
flowers, flower vases, and
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many
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other
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items
for regular
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use
.
Besides
, the
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items
are
also
could be
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used
for presenting to someone.
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Bullario
initially
emerged as an online
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business
platform
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but
with the gradual development and its demands of
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products
, it has taken the shape of a real-life
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business
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organisation
though
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small in size
.
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Bullario
currently
operates in Paris
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only
and it
also
plans for expanding the
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business
in
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some
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other
cities shortly.

I was seeking a
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small
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gift
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item
for my niece and searched for a suitable place nearby my location in Paris.
Suddenly
I
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saw
a page on social networking site,
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facebook
, about such an online store that sells the things I need. Then I browsed their website and came to
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know
that they have both online and physical stores. Since the
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shop
was near my residence, I planned for a visit. I
was amazed
by their collection of
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items
. Despite being a
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very
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small
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shop
, they arranged for diversified
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items
. The collection and variety of
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items
were
really
adorable. I picked a couple of
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small
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gift
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items
and
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show
pieces to present my niece. I talked with the owner of the
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shop
and came to
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know
about
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different
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important
information about the shop.

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Bullario
is
mostly
a
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small
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shop
and deals in diversified
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gift
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items
mostly
. The most
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important
matter is that majority of the
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items
are
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handmade
and definitely with care.
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Some of the
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items
are imported
from
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different
parts of the world. The
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business
is doing
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very
well
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only
for its attention to the quality. The refund policy of this
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company
is
also
admirable. If the
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purchased
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products
are in
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good
condition, they do not hesitate to refund the money.
Besides
, the
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company
also
provides a provision to replace or exchange the
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products
with any
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other
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products
and adjust the pricing issues. This is
really
a helpful feature from this
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company
whereas I had
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some
bitter experience in replacing
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purchased
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goods
from
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some
large
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shops
and superstores.
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But
the scenario was completely opposite here. They were
highly
cordial in such matters.

This is a
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successful
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company
from
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many
aspects.
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As
far as I
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know
from the owner that the demands of the
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products
are increasing
gradually
.
As a result
, they are making more profits and planning to expand the
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business
. They have been maintaining the
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product
quality and are
also
aware of their rights and responsibilities towards the customers. They do not bargain with the customers and sells the
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products
at a
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fixed
price.
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But
they provide
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some
off to the majority of the
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products
round the
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year
.
Besides
, they have a smart
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marketing
strategy. It does not follow the conventional methods of
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marketing
rather
relies on the digital
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marketing
.
Consequently
, within a short time,
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Bullario
has drawn the attention of
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many
of its existing customers.
Therefore
, I
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think
this is a
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successful
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company
and in the long run, it will grow more.
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IELTS speaking Describe a small and successful company you know. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
11 paragraphs
1097 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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