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Describe a quiet place you like to go to sometimes. v.1

Describe a quiet place you like to go to sometimes. v. 1
Describe a quiet place you like to go to sometimes. You should say: where it is when you go there why you like the place and what you did the last time you went there. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer: Bill Fredrick Park in Orlando is a quiet place and I often go there to spend some leisure hours. This is a park that has an area of 180 acres and the environment is so amicable. The vastness of the park helps people to submerge into silence. This is a nice candidate task for me and I will explain the matter in brief here. I like to go there for relaxation and I prefer the evening hours. After passing few busy days in the university, I really need some moments for myself. A tranquil place like this park is the right one for me. I also have plans to spend a night in the park by camping and count the unlimited stars in the wide open sky, hope this will happen soon. I like the place for some specific reasons. The park is one of the most impressive sites in the state. The golf course is adorable and boating is another interesting activity here. The sandy trails are awesome for hiking. Besides, the park contains some other amenities like clean and well-managed toilets, and the space for kids etc. is also notable. The park is not far away from the downtown of Orlando. It is only a 20-minute drive from the city. A large number of trees are available in the park and anyone can take shelter under the tree shades with nice sitting arrangements. When I went to the park last time, I had a wonderful experience. It was a family get together. We reached there in the evening at the pre-booked location inside the park. We all stayed a night by camping in a camping zone. The barbeque party was amazing and it was arranged by my uncle. Fishing in the lake was another interesting event. We all were happy. I would recommend anyone from my area to have some quality and tranquil time in this park. There is a lot to explore and enjoy. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe a quiet place you like to go to sometimes. 1. Visiting a quiet and peaceful pace is my passion and often I visit Lundy Island. This is a nice place to make some solo visits. I prefer to spend the evening hours there. The island is adorned with natural beauties and the sunset scene from the Island is wonderful. So, I like the place. Last time, I took some photographs of the setting sun. I have shared the photos on my social networking profile. Everyone liked the photos. 2. Peaceful places attract me more than any other thing. So, I often visit the Goolwa in South Australia. This is a small town beside the longest river. I usually pass an entire day in the area and take part in various activities. The historic port is an attractive place there while the architecture made of sandstone are adorable indeed. For all the reasons, I like the place so much. Fishing in the river was a great activity last time I visited the place. 3. Finding a quiet place in a busy city like Singapore is really challenging. But the HortPark is a contrast to the hefty and noisy city. Usually, I pass my evening hours in the park. After getting out of my office, I pay a visit there and spend around one or more hours by sitting inside the park. The loneliness inspires me to visit the park. I had completed reading a short novel last time when I went there. 4. Amid hundreds of quiet places in Russia, I prefer the Vyatskoe village. The village is located in the Yaroslavl region and one of the old merchant villages in the country. I pay visits to the village during the weekends and spend the entire day amid festivities. This is a cultural heritage now and the number of museums is notable. I am in love with the place for the modern features in a rural setting. The cinema that I enjoyed last time was appealing. 5. The Nile River is termed as the blood of Egypt. It offers an outstanding view. So, often I pay visits to the river bank. Generally, the best time to visit the river is either in the early morning or in the evening hours. So, there is no exact schedule for me to visit the place. Sometimes, I go there in the moonlit to enjoy the natural beauties. The charming views are the key attraction for me. I took a boat ride in last time when I went there. It was a moonlit night then.
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Describe
a
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quiet
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place
you like to go
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to
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sometimes
. You should say: where it is when you go there why you like the
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place
and what you did the last
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time
you
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went
there. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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Sample Answer:

Bill Fredrick
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Park
in Orlando is a
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quiet
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place
and I
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often
go there to
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spend
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some
leisure
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hours
. This is a
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park
that has an area of 180 acres and the environment is
so
amicable. The vastness of the
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park
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helps
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people
to submerge into silence. This is a nice candidate task for me and I will
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explain
the matter
in brief
here.

I like to go there for relaxation and I prefer the evening
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hours
. After passing few busy days in the university, I
really
need
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some
moments for myself. A tranquil
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place
like this
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park
is the
right
one for me. I
also
have plans to
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spend
a night in the
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park
by camping and count the unlimited stars in the wide open sky, hope this will happen
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soon
. I like the
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place
for
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some
specific reasons. The
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park
is one of the most impressive sites in the state. The golf course is adorable and boating is another interesting activity here.
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The
sandy trails are awesome for hiking.
Besides
, the
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park
contains
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some
other amenities like clean and
well
-managed toilets, and the space for kids etc. is
also
notable. The
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park
is not far away from the downtown of Orlando. It is
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only
a 20-minute drive from the city.
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A large number of
trees are available in the
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park
and anyone can take shelter under the tree shades with nice sitting arrangements.

When I
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went
to the
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park
last
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time
, I had a wonderful experience. It was a family
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get
together. We reached there in the evening at the pre-booked location inside the
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park
. We all stayed a night by camping in a camping zone. The
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barbeque
party was amazing and it
was arranged
by my uncle. Fishing in the lake was another interesting
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event
. We all were happy. I would recommend anyone from my area to have
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some
quality and tranquil
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time
in this
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park
. There is a lot to explore and enjoy. More
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Ideas
to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic:
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Describe
a
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quiet
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place
you like to go
Did you mean "too"?
to
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sometimes
. 1. Visiting a
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quiet
and peaceful pace is my passion and
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often
I
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visit
Lundy Island. This is a nice
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place
to
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make
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some
solo
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visits
. I prefer to
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spend
the evening
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hours
there. The island
is adorned
with natural beauties and the sunset scene from the Island is wonderful.
So
, I like the
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place
. Last
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time
, I took
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some
photographs of the setting sun. I have shared the photos on my social networking profile. Everyone liked the photos.

2. Peaceful
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places
attract me more than any other thing.
So
, I
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often
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visit
the
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Goolwa
in South Australia. This is a
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small
town beside the longest
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river
. I
usually
pass an entire day in the area and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in various activities. The historic port is an attractive
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place
there while the architecture made of sandstone are adorable
indeed
. For all the reasons, I like the
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place
so
much. Fishing in the
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river
was a great activity last
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time
I visited the
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place. 3
. Finding a
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quiet
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place
in a busy city like Singapore is
really
challenging.
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But
the
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HortPark
is a contrast to the hefty and noisy city.
Usually
, I pass my evening
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hours
in the
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park
. After getting out of my office, I pay a
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visit
there and
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spend
around one or more
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hours
by sitting inside the
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park
. The loneliness inspires me to
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visit
the
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park
. I had completed reading a short novel last
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time
when I
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went
there.

4. Amid hundreds of
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quiet
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places
in Russia, I prefer the
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Vyatskoe
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village
. The
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village
is located
in the Yaroslavl region and one of the
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old
merchant
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villages
in the country. I pay
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visits
to the
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village
during the weekends and
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spend
the entire day amid festivities. This is a cultural heritage
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now
and the number of museums is notable. I am in
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love
with the
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place
for the modern features in a rural setting. The cinema that I enjoyed last
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time
was appealing.

5. The Nile
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River
is termed
as the blood of Egypt. It offers an outstanding view.
So
,
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often
I pay
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visits
to the
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river
bank.
Generally
, the best
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time
to
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visit
the
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river
is either in the early morning or in the evening
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hours
.
So
, there is no exact schedule for me to
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visit
the
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place
.
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Sometimes
, I go there in the moonlit to enjoy the natural beauties. The charming views are the key attraction for me. I took a boat ride in last
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time
when I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
went
there. It was a moonlit night then.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
83Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a quiet place you like to go to sometimes. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
8 paragraphs
845 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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