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Describe a person whose job is important to the society. v.1

Describe a person whose job is important to the society. v. 1
Describe a person whose job is important to the society. You should say: who this person is what is his/her profession how s/he helps others and explain why the job this person has is important to the society. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer 1: Every honest job is noble in my opinion if it somehow helps others. While police officers risk their lives to protect the people and ensure the law and order, lawyers defend the innocents or prove a criminal guilty. Likewise, politicians devote their time and life for the greater good of the country, doctors heal our illness, scientists and researchers put our civilisation one step forward and this list goes on and on. However, for this cue card topic I would like to talk about a person who is a teacher and in my opinion, her job is quite important to the society as well as to the country. The name of this teacher is Mary Margaret and she is an English teacher in a high school located in our area. She is in fact, a much-revered teacher among her students and colleagues and I like the invaluable contribution she has for teaching in an excellent way. Besides, she is an honest person with many other excellent qualities that make her an exemplary person in our society. Teaching, in my opinion, is a very noble profession and makes the society a better place by eradicating our ignorance and by creating an enlightened generation. This profoundly important job is done by teachers who are doing a really great job for all of us. In this present era, formal educational institutes help us to enhance our knowledge and prepare us for the future. Creating an illuminated society is the main purpose of the education and teachers are helping us to acquire the wisdom and knowledge we need to lead a better life. This is why I personally think that a teacher's job is one of the most important jobs in our society. Speaking of Mary Margaret, I was one of her favourite students and her teaching style was quite unique. Her excellent teaching style helped me learn many grammatical rules and use English more fluently. As a teacher, she was quite devoted and punctual. She must be very proud that some of her students are in important positions nationwide and some of them still visit her.   Cue Card Sample Answer 2: It is indeed a pleasure to talk about a person who plays an important role in the society for the nature of his profession. I feel lucky as I know such a man and he is relative to me. Mr Alfred Cadman, my uncle, is such a person who contributes greatly to the society. Uncle Cadman is my paternal uncle, and in fact, the youngest of all the three brothers from my dad’s family. He completed his graduation in journalism a few years back and now works as a journalist. I believe his work is quite important to the society. He looks smart with his adventurer-like appearance and I like his humorous and courageous characters. He is around six feet in height with a bunch of solid muscles on his body. He loves to smile and helps people in their distress, and thus he is loved by all in the locality for his benevolent nature. Besides, he often participates in different types of adventurous activities and takes part at the annual adventure festival that takes place here in the last part of December every year. By profession, uncle Cadman is a journalist and works with a local daily. He is a senior reporter cum special correspondent for our locality on the daily newspaper. He collects news and prepares reports to be published in the daily newspaper, The Daily Life. Besides collecting events for his newspaper, he tries to bring out the real facts behind the events. Often he receives misinformation over different issues but he carefully verifies the information. He is careful about the authenticity of any information and when he seems satisfied with his thorough investigation, he submits the reports to his office to be published. As a result, he remains busy all the time around the day. Often he goes out for information even at midnight to get some stories for his newspaper. He is very cooperative with anyone. He has access to almost everywhere in the city and by dint of his profession, he is influential. So, when someone asks for help, he extends his hands towards those people and let them get the right things for them. If any officer at any government office denies providing any service to anyone without showing the exact cause, he helps the people to get the service and often report the corruption that the government officials get involved in. Besides, he is always informed about the surroundings in the locality and if smells something unusual, he tries to solve the issues immediately to prevent detrimental or unwanted impacts of the event. By this way, he always helps others and keeps the entire locality calm and peaceful. The profession of uncle Cadman appears something more than journalism. As he is a journalist, he has some commitments to the society. His job is to collect news and events, prepare them for the reporting and send to the headquarters to be published on the next day. But if he narrates everything on the report, it may bring a catastrophe for all. So, often he sends reports in a filtered manner to keep everything under control. The information he provides to the people keeps them updated which is a must to keep pace with the society. Actually, if there were no journalists, it would have been impossible to get to know about surrounding events regularly. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe a person whose job is important to the society. 1. Everyone should admit that the role of a teacher is undeniable to form a civil society. So, Mr Hans is playing the role since a long ago. He is a university teacher here in California. He is also a social scientist as well. He helps to build a nation. Dissemination of knowledge is the foremost task to form the backbone of a civil society and he is playing the most important role in sharing knowledge and ideas among his students. This is in fact, a highly important job for the social betterment. Students will learn and in future, they will form a nation based on their learning. 2. The doctors have much contribution to the society and my uncle Abdullah is a doctor. He is doctor specialized in medicine and has his own chamber in the centre of Kuala Lumpur. He helps people by advising about their illness and how to improve the situations. His job is important because if there are no doctors in the society, it would be difficult to lead a happy and healthy life. Doctors are always there to serve the people in their needs regardless of time and financial abilities. 3. Have you ever thought of food production? In fact, they are farmers who directly are involved in the food production and keep everything on. My relative Le Huang is a farmer and he grows food crops in Vietnam. By producing food crops, he supplies them to the local market and people get the crops to meet their hunger and live on. This is a great contribution to the society. In fact, his job is important because if farmers like him stop food production, there would be a disaster in the society. 4. Honestly, we never consider the job of a firefighter important for the society. But in reality, that profession is highly important. I know a man named Markus who is involved in the profession of a firefighter. He is responsible to control the fire-related incidents and he does that perfectly. A sudden fire may damage properties and lives, while the firefighters try to defeat the fire. Thus they serve the society to live in peace. 5. Majority of the people have no idea what happens with the garbage that we dispose of. In fact, the garbage collectors help to clean the garbage and keeps the environment clean. Samuel is a garbage collector and cleans my domestic garbage everyday morning. He helps to keep the locality clean and nice. Without his help, it would have been difficult for us to live a decent life. Think a day when there is garbage everywhere. Hope this would be clear to describe his importance in the society.
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who
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how s/he
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Sample Answer 1:

Every honest
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job
is noble in my opinion if it somehow
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helps
others. While police officers
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risk
their
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lives
to protect the
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people
and ensure the law and order, lawyers defend the innocents or prove a criminal guilty.
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, politicians devote their time and
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life
for the greater
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good
of the country,
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doctors
heal our illness, scientists and researchers put our
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civilisation
one step forward and this list goes on and on.
However
, for this cue card
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I would like to
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and in my opinion, her
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is
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to the
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as
well
as to the country.

The name of this
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teacher
is Mary
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Margaret and
she is an English
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teacher
in a high school located in our area. She is in
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fact
, a much-revered
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teacher
among her
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students
and colleagues and I like the invaluable contribution she has for teaching
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in an excellent way
.
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, she is an honest
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person
with
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other
excellent qualities that
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her an exemplary
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person
in our society.

Teaching, in my opinion, is a
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very
noble
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profession
and
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makes
the
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society
a better place by eradicating our ignorance and by creating an enlightened generation. This
profoundly
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important
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job
is done
by
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teachers
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are doing a
really
great
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job
for all of us. In this present era, formal educational institutes
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help
us to enhance our
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knowledge
and prepare us for the future. Creating an illuminated
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society
is the main purpose of the education and
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teachers
are helping us to acquire the wisdom and
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knowledge
we need to lead a better
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. This is why I
personally
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is one of the most
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in our society.

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favourite
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students
and her teaching style was
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unique. Her excellent teaching style
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helped
me learn
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grammatical
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rules
and
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English more
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. As a
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, she was
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devoted and punctual. She
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proud that
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positions nationwide and
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of them
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Cue Card Sample Answer 2:

It is
indeed
a pleasure to
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about a
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person
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who
plays an
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important
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role
in the
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society
for the nature of his
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profession
. I feel lucky as I know such a
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man and
he is relative to me. Mr Alfred
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Cadman
, my
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uncle
, is such a
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person
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who
contributes
greatly
to the society.

Uncle
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Cadman
is my paternal
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uncle
, and in
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, the youngest of all the three brothers from my dad’s family. He completed his graduation in journalism a few years back and
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now
works as a
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. I believe his work is
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quite
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important
to the
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society
. He looks smart with his adventurer-like appearance and I like his humorous and courageous characters. He is around six feet in height with a bunch of solid muscles on his body.
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He
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in their distress, and
thus
he is
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loved
by all in the locality for his benevolent nature.
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participates in
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types of adventurous activities and
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at the annual adventure festival that takes place here in the last part of December every year.

By
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profession
,
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Cadman
is a
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journalist
and works with a local
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daily
. He is a senior reporter
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cum
special correspondent for our locality on the
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newspaper. He collects news and prepares
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reports
to
be published
in the
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newspaper, The
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Life
.
Besides
collecting
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for his newspaper, he tries to bring out the real facts behind the
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events
.
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he receives misinformation over
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different
issues
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he
carefully
verifies the
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. He is careful about the authenticity of any
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information
and when he seems satisfied with his thorough investigation, he submits the
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reports
to his office to
be published
.
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, he remains busy all the time around the day.
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he goes out for
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information
even at midnight to
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get
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some
stories for his newspaper.

He is
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very
cooperative with anyone. He has access to almost everywhere in the city and by dint of his
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profession
, he is influential.
So
, when someone
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, he extends his hands towards those
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and
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them
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the
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office denies providing any service to anyone without showing the exact cause, he
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people
to
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officials
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get
involved in.
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, he is always informed about the surroundings in the locality and if smells something unusual, he tries to solve the issues immediately to
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prevent
detrimental or unwanted impacts of the
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event
. By this way, he always
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helps
others and
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keeps
the entire locality calm and peaceful.

The
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profession
of
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Cadman
appears something more than journalism. As he is a
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journalist
, he has
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some
commitments to the
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society
. His
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job
is to collect news and
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events
, prepare them for the reporting and
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send
to the headquarters to
be published
on the
next
day.
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if he narrates everything on the
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, it may bring a catastrophe for all.
So
,
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often
he
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sends
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reports
in a filtered manner to
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keep
everything under control. The
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information
he provides to the
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people
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keeps
them updated which is a
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must to
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keep
pace with the
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society
.
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, if there were no
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journalists
, it would have been impossible to
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get
to know about surrounding
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events
regularly
. More
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Ideas
to
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talk
about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card
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topic
:
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:
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a
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person
whose
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job
is
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important
to the
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society
. 1. Everyone should admit that the
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role
of a
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teacher
is undeniable to form a civil
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society
.
So
, Mr Hans is playing the
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role
since a long ago. He is a university
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teacher
here in California. He is
also
a social scientist as
well
.
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He
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helps
to build a nation. Dissemination of
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knowledge
is the foremost task to form the backbone of a civil
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society and
he is playing the most
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important
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role
in sharing
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knowledge
and
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ideas
among his
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students
. This is in
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fact
, a
highly
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important
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job
for the social betterment.
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Students
will learn and
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in future
, they will form a nation based on their learning.

2. The
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doctors
have much contribution to the
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society
and my
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uncle
Abdullah is a
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doctor
. He is
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doctor
specialized in medicine and has his
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own
chamber in the
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centre
of Kuala Lumpur. He
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helps
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people
by advising about their illness and how to
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improve
the situations. His
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job
is
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important
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because
if there are no
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doctors
in the
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society
, it would be difficult to lead a happy and healthy
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life
.
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Doctors
are always there to serve the
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people
in their needs regardless of time and financial abilities.

3. Have you ever
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thought
of
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food
production? In
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fact
, they are farmers
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who
directly
are involved
in the
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food
production and
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keep
everything on. My relative Le Huang is a
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farmer and
he grows
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food
crops in Vietnam. By producing
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food
crops, he supplies them to the local market and
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people
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get
the crops to
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meet
their hunger and
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live
on. This is a great contribution to the
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society
. In
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fact
, his
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is
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important
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because
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stop
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food
production, there would be a disaster in the
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society. 4
.
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, we never consider the
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job
of a firefighter
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important
for the
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society
.
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in reality, that
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profession
is
highly
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important
. I know a
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man
named Markus
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who
is involved
in the
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profession
of a firefighter. He is responsible to control the fire-related
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incidents and
he does that
perfectly
. A sudden fire may damage properties and
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lives
, while the firefighters try to defeat the fire.
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Thus
they serve the
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society
to
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live
in peace.

5. Majority of the
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people
have no
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idea
what happens with the garbage that we dispose of. In
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fact
, the garbage collectors
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help
to
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clean
the garbage and
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keeps
the environment
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clean
. Samuel is a garbage collector and
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cleans
my domestic garbage everyday morning. He
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helps
to
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keep
the locality
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clean
and nice. Without his
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help
, it would have been difficult for us to
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live
a decent
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life
.
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Think
a day when there is garbage everywhere. Hope this would be
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clear
to
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describe
his importance in the
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society
.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
199Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a person whose job is important to the society. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
14 paragraphs
1472 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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