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Describe a place you visited that has been affected by pollution. v.1

Describe a place you visited that has been affected by pollution. v. 1
Describe a place you visited that has been affected by pollution. You should say: where it is why and when you went there how it has been affected by the pollution and explain what are the reasons for this pollution. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer 1: Thank you for letting me talk about this topic. Last year I went to visit (. . . say an area name in your city/country. . . ) with two of my friends and thought we would enjoy our trip. We heard from a teacher that this was a beautiful place to visit and after that, we planned to go there. To our surprise, this place was severely affected by the pollution and instead of enjoying our trip, we cut it short and returned home immediately. It was early summer last year and visiting a place near a river which is surrounded by natural beauty and recommended by one of our favourite teachers was an excellent idea, at least at that time. I am sure the teacher who suggested this place had no idea about the severity of the pollution there and how things have become worse. The water pollution was quite severe there and the black and greasy elements that were floating on the water created a shocking scene. Uncontrolled waste management, toxic elements from factories and industries, motorised vehicles running on the water and the lack of proper maintenance of the riverside are the main reasons the water has got polluted. More shockingly, the air pollution was also noticeable. I saw many industries and factories that were exhausting black fumes and that has made the air polluted more than any other part I know about. Uncontrolled urbanisation, the establishment of new factories & industries without proper planning, lack of strict policy and corruption in government offices are so far the main reasons for increasing pollution in our country. I wish this will stop and we will be conscious enough not to destroy our own inhabitants.   Cue Card Answer 2: My recent trip to Mumbai gave me a horrific experience! The water of the Mithi River has been polluted to its greatest extent for several reasons. The river, also known as Mahim River, is connected to the Arabian Sea and it was formerly used as a bird sanctuary. The river is located beside the Salsette Island in Mumbai. This is a seasonal river that swells up during the monsoon only and remains like a creek around the other months of the year. Presently, the condition of the river has deteriorated for the discharge of different chemicals and wastages from different sources that fall on the water of Mithi River. Before being polluted to this extent, the river served the role of the stormwater drain for Mumbai city. I went to Mumbai to take part in an admission test at a college. I have completed my secondary level and now aim to get admitted to any reputed college in Mumbai. I live with my family here in Kolkata and some of our intimate relatives live in Mumbai who invited me to attend the entrance exams. As this was my trip out of the Kolkata, my living place, my cousin took me out to show the entire city of Mumbai. But it was not possible for us to see all the notable things in a single day, and thus we made a plan to visit only the most remarkable places at a time. As part of the plan, my cousin took me near the bank of River Mithi. I was astonished by the current scenarios of the river. Thinks have changed negatively than the last time I saw this river! It seems that the residents of the city have no idea how the water of the river got polluted. Most of the polluting sources are the raw sewage that had been discharged into the water from sources like mills, factories, households etc. Moreover, the river water is also being polluted for cleaning animals on water, water vessels, releasing unsafe chemicals, organic wastes, animal wastes from cattle sheds, scraps, industrial waste, dumping garbage etc. Those have seriously contributed to the pollution of the water. As a result, the water is unusable now. Besides, the pollution is a great threat to the marine life of the river. But before the pollution, the river was a great place to visit and the banks were occupied in the evening hours by crowds to enjoy the natural beauty. Unfortunately, those days are over and now the river bank stinks. The pollution of the water is the outcome of some unplanned activities by both the government and residents of the city. A substantial number of industries have been set in the city and they discharge all their chemicals, garbage and other wastages on the water of Mithi River. Besides, there are some unplanned establishments near the river bank which also contributed on polluting the water by throwing waste materials here. The river is always seen busy with the cleaning of vessels, oil drums and some parts of the river is covered with water hyacinth. The combination of industrial wastes, sewage and other garbage dumped on the water has made it almost dirty, unusable and unhealthy. It appears that this is the detrimental impact of urbanisation and industrialisation together. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe a place you visited that has been affected by pollution. 1. My recent visit to Zabol in Iran has given a different experience to me. The entire region is filled with air pollution. I went there for some business purpose and found that the air is heavily mixed with dirt. It is hard to breathe in the air. Besides, the localities are also polluted with some other types of pollutants that cause habitation troublesome. The lack of awareness of the locals is the key cause of pollution, I believe. 2. Tangshan in China is a highly polluted area in the country. I had to visit the area for some commercial purposes and set some strategy to expand my business in the region. The locality is affected by air pollution. Smokes emitted from the mills and factories are the key pollutants. The indiscriminate establishments of mills and factories in the region basically are responsible for the environmental pollution here. Some other causes of overpopulation also contribute to degrading the environment. 3. Water pollution is a great concern for Dammam in Saudi Arabia. My office sent me there to make some background works for establishing a branch and I was unhappy with the environmental concern. The entire city is suffering from water pollution and even the drinking water is also polluted to some extent. Unplanned urbanization, the indifference of the municipality to check the matters are behind the pollution. The rise of shallow water may also be a potential concern in the coming days. 4. Lahore is a crowded city in Pakistan and I went in the city last week on a trip with my friend. The trip was intended to shop for the marriage ceremony of my friend’s elder sister. But I found the city filled with pollution. Almost all types of pollutions were there including noise and air. The cars and other vehicles on the streets were largely responsible for the noise pollution while the factories polluted the air. I think an unplanned urbanization is largely responsible for the pollutions. 5. I gained a weird experience in Greater Cairo in Egypt. I went to visit the pyramids of the country and experienced the noise pollution there. The city appeared overcrowded to me and thus the level of noise is out of tolerable limit. A good number of noise sources are active there including the vehicle horns, use of loudspeakers, shouts of street sellers among others. People are not careful about the matter and they behave insanely while creating the noise.
Describe
a
place
you visited that has been
affected
by
pollution
. You should say: where it is why and when you
went
there how it has been
affected
by the
pollution
and
explain
what are the
reasons
for this
pollution
. [You will
have to
talk about the
topic
for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
think
about what you're going to say. You can
make
some
notes to
help
you if you wish.
]
Sample Answer 1:

Thank you for letting me talk about this
topic
. Last year I
went
to
visit
(.
.
.
say
an area name in your city/country.
.
.
)
with two of my friends and
thought
we would enjoy our
trip
. We heard from a teacher that this was a
beautiful
place
to
visit
and after that, we planned to go there. To our surprise, this
place
was
severely
affected
by the
pollution
and
instead
of enjoying our
trip
, we
cut
it short and returned home immediately.

It was early summer last year and visiting a
place
near a
river
which
is surrounded
by natural beauty and recommended by one of our
favourite
teachers was an excellent
idea
, at least at that time. I am sure the teacher who suggested this
place
had no
idea
about the severity of the
pollution
there and how things have become worse.

The
water
pollution
was quite severe there and the black and greasy elements that were floating on the
water
created a shocking scene. Uncontrolled
waste
management, toxic elements from
factories
and
industries
,
motorised
vehicles running on the
water
and the lack of proper maintenance of the riverside are the main
reasons
the
water
has
got
polluted
. More
shockingly
, the
air
pollution
was
also
noticeable. I
saw
many
industries
and
factories
that were exhausting black fumes and that has made the
air
polluted
more than any
other
part
I know about.

Uncontrolled
urbanisation
, the establishment of new
factories
&amp
;
industries
without proper planning, lack of strict policy and corruption in
government
offices are
so
far the main
reasons
for increasing
pollution
in our country. I wish this will
stop and
we will be conscious
enough
not to
destroy
our
own
inhabitants.
 
Cue Card Answer 2:

My recent
trip
to Mumbai gave me a horrific experience! The
water
of the
Mithi
River
has been
polluted
to its greatest extent for several
reasons
. The
river
,
also
known as
Mahim
River
,
is connected
to the Arabian Sea and it was
formerly
used
as a bird sanctuary.
The
river
is located
beside the
Salsette
Island in Mumbai. This is a seasonal
river
that swells up during the monsoon
only
and remains like a creek around the
other
months of the year.
Presently
, the condition of the
river
has deteriorated for the discharge of
different
chemicals and
wastages
from
different
sources
that fall on the
water
of
Mithi
River
.
Before
being
polluted
to this extent, the
river
served the role of the stormwater drain for Mumbai city. I
went
to Mumbai to take
part
in an admission
test
at a college. I have completed my secondary level and
now
aim to
get
admitted to any reputed college in Mumbai.
I
live
with my family here in Kolkata and
some
of our intimate relatives
live
in Mumbai who invited me to attend the entrance exams. As this was my
trip
out of the Kolkata, my living
place
, my cousin took me out to
show
the entire city of Mumbai.
But
it was not possible for us to
see
all the notable things in a single day, and
thus
we made a plan to
visit
only
the most remarkable
places
at a time. As
part
of the plan, my cousin took me near the
bank
of
River
Mithi
. I
was astonished
by the
current
scenarios of the
river
.
Thinks
have
changed
negatively
than the last time I
saw
this
river
! It seems that the residents of the city have no
idea
how the
water
of the
river
got
polluted
. Most of the polluting
sources
are the raw sewage that had
been discharged
into the
water
from
sources
like mills,
factories
, households etc.
Moreover
, the
river
water
is
also
being
polluted
for cleaning animals on
water
,
water
vessels, releasing unsafe chemicals, organic
wastes
, animal
wastes
from cattle sheds, scraps, industrial
waste
, dumping garbage etc. Those have
seriously
contributed to the
pollution
of the
water
.
As a result
, the
water
is unusable
now
.
Besides
, the
pollution
is a great threat to the marine life of the
river
.
But
before
the
pollution
, the
river
was a great
place
to
visit
and the
banks
were occupied
in the evening hours by crowds to enjoy the natural beauty. Unfortunately, those days are over and
now
the
river
bank
stinks. The
pollution
of the
water
is the outcome of
some
unplanned
activities by both the
government
and residents of the city. A substantial number of
industries
have
been set
in the
city and
they discharge all their chemicals, garbage and
other
wastages on
the
water
of
Mithi
River
.
Besides
, there are
some
unplanned
establishments near the
river
bank
which
also
contributed on polluting the
water
by throwing
waste
materials here. The
river
is always
seen
busy with the cleaning of vessels, oil drums and
some
parts
of the
river
is covered
with
water
hyacinth. The combination of industrial
wastes
, sewage and
other
garbage dumped on the
water
has made it almost dirty, unusable and unhealthy. It appears that this is the detrimental impact of
urbanisation
and
industrialisation
together.

More
Ideas
to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card
topic
:
Topic
:
Describe
a
place
you visited that has been
affected
by
pollution
. 1. My recent
visit
to
Zabol
in Iran has
given
a
different
experience to me. The entire region
is filled
with
air
pollution
. I
went
there for
some
business purpose and found that the
air
is
heavily
mixed with dirt. It is
hard
to breathe in the
air
.
Besides
, the localities are
also
polluted
with
some
other
types of pollutants that cause habitation troublesome. The lack of awareness of the locals is the key cause of
pollution
, I believe.

2. Tangshan in China is a
highly
polluted
area in the country. I had to
visit
the area for
some
commercial purposes and set
some
strategy to expand my business in the region. The locality is
affected
by
air
pollution
. Smokes emitted from the mills and
factories
are the key pollutants. The indiscriminate establishments of mills and
factories
in the region
basically
are responsible for the environmental
pollution
here.
Some
other
causes of overpopulation
also
contribute to degrading the environment.

3.
Water
pollution
is a great concern for
Dammam
in Saudi Arabia. My office
sent
me there to
make
some
background works for establishing a
branch and
I was unhappy with the environmental concern. The entire city is suffering from
water
pollution
and even the drinking
water
is
also
polluted
to
some
extent.
Unplanned
urbanization
, the indifference of the municipality to
check
the matters are behind the
pollution
. The rise of shallow
water
may
also
be a potential concern in the coming days.

4. Lahore is a crowded city in Pakistan and I
went
in the city last week on a
trip
with my friend. The
trip
was intended
to shop for the marriage ceremony of my friend’s elder sister.
But
I found the city filled with
pollution
. Almost all types of
pollutions
were there including
noise
and
air
. The cars and
other
vehicles on the streets were
largely
responsible for the
noise
pollution
while the
factories
polluted
the
air
. I
think
an
unplanned
urbanization
is
largely
responsible for the
pollutions. 5
. I gained a weird experience in Greater Cairo in Egypt.
I
went
to
visit
the pyramids of the country and experienced the
noise
pollution
there. The city appeared overcrowded to me and
thus
the level of
noise
is out of tolerable limit. A
good
number of
noise
sources
are active there including the vehicle horns,
use
of loudspeakers, shouts of street sellers among others.
People
are not careful about the
matter and
they behave
insanely
while creating the
noise
.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
177Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
34Mistakes
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