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Describe a person who has been an important influence in your life. v.1

Describe a person who has been an important influence in your life. v. 1
Describe a person who has been an important influence in your life. You should say: who this person is and how long you have known him or her why you chose this person how this person has influenced your life and explain how you feel about him or her.
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who has been an
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influence in your life. You should say: who this
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is and how long you have known him or her why you chose this
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person
how this
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has influenced your life and
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how you feel about him or her.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a person who has been an important influence in your life. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
49 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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