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Describe an item of clothing you purchased that you didn’t like. v.1

Describe an item of clothing you purchased that you didn’t like. v. 1
Describe an item of clothing you purchased that you didn’t like. You should say: what the clothing was from where and why you bought it what colour and style it had and explain why you didn’t like it. Sample Answer 1: Well, that’s an interesting topic to talk about. A few months ago I purchased a tie that I’ve never used and did not like it just after I brought it home. I bought this tie from a street market near the city shopping mall and it cost me around 7 dollars. In my office, we are allowed to wear casual dresses on Thursday. However, we are required to wear complete formal dresses on Monday and Tuesday and tie is mandatory on these two days in office. I purchased the tie specifically to use it in my office. It was a blue colour tie with vertical white stripes all over it. I have had three ties and none of them had any stripes on it. I thought the striped tie would add some variations to my tie collection but unfortunately, I did not like it at all. Surprisingly I liked it when I picked it from the shop but as soon as I tried it at home, my disliking grew for it. Since I bought it from a street market, I did not have the chance to try it before purchasing. I chose it as it was and after I wore it at home, I found that it was shorter in length than usual. The making of the tie was poor and the stripes did not match me at all. After that, I thought to return it but it was quite impossible as the street market sellers often change their locations. Honestly speaking, I liked the colour and style of this tie but the poor making ruined it all. I still have this tie at home and I have no intention of wearing it ever again. This purchasing experience taught me a valuable lesson – never purchase an item of clothing too hastily and without actually trialling it first. I will perhaps never buy a tie from a street market.     Sample Answer 2: Recently my trip to Singapore was a great one and I had the chance to shop in the traditional street markets of the country. I bought a pair of jeans pant from a market there but that appears a bit faulty now. In fact, I went Singapore with my family to pass the Christmas vacation and meet some other relatives living in the country. To celebrate the Christmas, my dad took me to the street markets and bought me a couple of clothing at a moderate price. But before the purchase, he told me to check the item I am to buy as often the items appear faulty. He was right. I found a small hole in both of the pants and they are in the hip pocket. It seems that the holes have been made by any insect cut. When I wear them, they look really unpleasant and brings a sense of discomfort to me. Singapore is a popular tourist destination in Asia. Besides, some of my intimate relatives are there. In fact, my dad migrated to the USA from Singapore while my grandparents are still living there. So, whenever we have any vacation, we move to Singapore and we do not miss the events like Christmas. We moved Singapore on December 23 and my dad took me shopping on the next day. He prefers the street markets as those are the place where one can have the best things. But you are to select the pieces carefully as the sellers often try to deceive the customers about the price. From the Chinatown Street Market, I bought the pair of jeans pant. The seller asked for a higher price than the usual one but after a lot of bargain, he agreed to sell the pants after my price. I liked the pants as they were different in colour and style. The jeans pants were the combination of dark blue with a light shade of grey. So, they looked different. Besides, they were skinny. So, I thought they would suit me best. Further, they attracted my attention while they were on display. The sewing, the fabric etc. were fine. So, I decided to buy the pair. But my dad asked me to check for something else. But I argued with him and replied that I liked the colour and style of the pants. Usually, most of the jeans pants come with a zipper but this was a bit different. Instead of a zipper, it had bottoms which I have never used before. I was so excited that I forgot the advice from dad to check the pants carefully. After returning home, I discovered the holes in the pockets. But now I had nothing to do. The seller would not refund the price and actually, they do not have such refund policies as well. Moreover, the waist size did not match with me. My waistline is 27 inches while he pants come with the waist size 29. They were larger than me and I do not use belts with my pants. So, it was hard for me to adjust with the jeans pants. Hence, I started feeling irritated with the pants. Finally, I had to donate the pants to a charity fund which collected clothing for poor people. Indeed it was a bad buy for me this time. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card topic: Cue Card Topic: Describe an item of clothing you purchased that you didn’t like. 1. From now on, I will consider shopping from street markets as a crime for me. I bought a T-shirt last month and did not like it finally after returning home. I bought the shirt from Chinatown here in Thailand. It was dark blue with the traditional style. But later I disliked it because there were some holes in the back part of the shirt that I did not notice or I was not allowed to notice while purchasing. Due to the holes, I would be unable to wear it. And so, I did not like the clothing. 2. Although I liked the red-coloured skirt, I dislike it later because the colour appeared a bit fade. I bought the skirt from a brand shop in New Delhi. It was pa lain red with some designs on the lower parts. But I did not like the skirt as it came with a lace. In fact, I did not notice the lace on the waist while purchasing it. And when I noticed that, I felt a sense of irritation. Usually, I use skirts with bright colours and initially preferred the red – and when found the colour a bit fade, I did not like it anymore. 3. Riding bikes need a suitable jacket but the one that I bought last month is no longer the one I like! I bought the jacket from a superstore in central Indonesia. It was black in colour with a nice collar. It came with buttons all over it. But I did not like it afterwards because the buttons were distorted after I used it a few times. Even, one of the collar buttons was uprooted. Later, when I took it back to the shop, they refused to replace it. Considering all the grounds, an irritation grew on me for the jacket. 4. White is my favourite colour and I bought a white shirt last month. I bought it from a street vendor here in Sri Lanka. The shirt came with a nice collar and everything was fine. But I was shocked after it was washed. The fabric started shrinking. Actually, after a single wash with clean water, the shirt became shorter! I could not wear it anymore. It happened due to the fabric that was the finest in quality. Hereby, I could not like the shirt at all. 5. Last winter, I bought an overcoat for me. I purchased that from a shopping mall here in Moscow. It was grey in colour and had a belt to fasten around the waist. Everything was right but I missed one point while buying. It came with had no buttons. So, fastening the belts was a bit trouble for me. I also could not like it because it was too heavy to use. The colour also faded more than it was in the beginning. All the matters generated a sense of dislike for the overcoat on me. Part 3: Two-way discussion Let's talk about clothes. . . 1. What kind of clothes do people in your country usually wear? 2. How important is it to wear fashionable clothes in your country? 3. Do older people and younger people wear different coloured clothes? Now let's talk about spending money on clothes. . . 1. Are clothes expensive in your country? 2. Do people wear more expensive clothes to work in your country? 3. Do you think people spend too much money on clothes nowadays?
Describe
an
item
of clothing you
purchased
that you didn’t like. You should say: what the clothing was from where and why you
bought
it what
colour
and
style
it had and
explain
why you didn’t like it. Sample Answer 1:

Well
, that’s an interesting topic to
talk
about. A few
months
ago I
purchased
a
tie
that I’ve never
used
and did not like it
just
after I brought it home. I
bought
this
tie
from a
street
market
near the city
shopping
mall and it cost me around 7 dollars. In my office, we are
allowed
to
wear
casual dresses on Thursday.
However
, we
are required
to
wear
complete formal dresses on Monday and Tuesday and
tie
is mandatory on these two days in office. I
purchased
the
tie
specifically
to
use
it in my office. It was a blue
colour
tie
with vertical white stripes all over it. I have had three ties and none of them had any stripes on it. I
thought
the striped
tie
would
add
some
variations to my
tie
collection
but
unfortunately, I did not like it at all.
Surprisingly
I liked it when I picked it from the
shop
but
as
soon
as I tried it at home, my disliking grew for it. Since I
bought
it from a
street
market
, I did not have the chance to try it
before
purchasing. I chose it as it was and after I wore it at home, I found that it was
shorter in length
than usual. The making of the
tie
was poor and the stripes did not match me at all. After that, I
thought
to return it
but
it was quite impossible as the
street
market
sellers
often
change
their locations.
Honestly
speaking, I liked the
colour
and
style
of this
tie
but
the poor making ruined it all. I
still
have this
tie
at home and I have no intention of wearing it ever again. This purchasing experience taught me a valuable lesson
never
purchase
an
item
of clothing too
hastily
and without
actually
trialling
it
first
. I will perhaps never
buy
a
tie
from a
street
market
.
   
Sample Answer 2:

Recently my trip to Singapore was a great one and I had the chance to
shop
in the traditional
street
markets of the
country
. I
bought
a pair of jeans pant from a
market
there
but
that appears a
bit
faulty
now
.

In fact, I went Singapore with my family to pass the Christmas vacation and
meet
some
other relatives living in the
country
. To celebrate the Christmas, my
dad
took me to the
street
markets and
bought
me a couple of clothing at a moderate
price
.
But
before
the
purchase
, he
told
me to
check
the
item
I am to
buy
as
often
the
items
appear faulty. He was
right
. I found a
small
hole
in both of the
pants and
they are in the hip pocket. It seems that the
holes
have
been made
by any insect
cut
. When I
wear
them, they look
really
unpleasant and brings a sense of discomfort to me.

Singapore is a popular tourist destination in Asia.
Besides
,
some
of my intimate relatives are there. In fact, my
dad
migrated to the USA from Singapore while my grandparents are
still
living there.
So
, whenever we have any vacation, we
move
to
Singapore and
we do not miss the
events
like Christmas. We
moved
Singapore on December 23 and my
dad
took me
shopping
on the
next
day. He prefers the
street
markets as those are the place where one can have the best things.
But
you are to select the pieces
carefully
as the
sellers
often
try to deceive the customers about the
price
. From the Chinatown
Street
Market
, I
bought
the pair of jeans pant. The
seller
asked for
a higher
price
than the usual one
but
after
a lot of
bargain, he
agreed
to sell the
pants
after my price.

I liked the
pants
as they were
different in colour
and
style
. The jeans
pants
were the combination of dark blue with a light shade of
grey
.
So
, they looked
different
.
Besides
, they were skinny.
So
, I
thought
they would suit me best.
Further
, they attracted my attention while they were on display. The sewing, the fabric etc. were fine.
So
, I decided to
buy
the pair.
But
my
dad
asked me to
check
for something else.
But
I argued with him and replied that I liked the
colour
and
style
of the
pants
.
Usually
, most of the jeans
pants
come
with a zipper
but
this was a
bit
different
.
Instead
of a zipper, it had bottoms which I have never
used
before
.

I was
so
excited that I forgot the advice from
dad
to
check
the
pants
carefully
. After returning home, I discovered the
holes
in the pockets.
But
now
I had nothing to do. The
seller
would not refund the
price
and
actually
, they do not have such refund policies as
well
.
Moreover
, the
waist
size did not match with me. My waistline is
27 inches
while he
pants
come
with the
waist
size 29. They were larger than me and I do not
use
belts with my
pants
.
So
, it was
hard
for me to adjust with the jeans
pants
.
Hence
, I
started
feeling irritated with the
pants
.
Finally
, I had to donate the
pants
to a charity fund which collected clothing for poor
people
.
Indeed
it was a
bad
buy
for me this time. More
Ideas
to
talk
about this Cue Card topic: Cue Card Topic:
Describe
an
item
of clothing you
purchased
that you didn’t like. 1. From
now
on, I will consider
shopping
from
street
markets as a crime for me. I
bought
a T-shirt last
month
and did not like it
finally
after returning home. I
bought
the
shirt
from Chinatown here in Thailand. It was dark blue with the traditional
style
.
But
later I disliked it
because
there were
some
holes
in the back part of the
shirt
that I did not
notice or
I was not
allowed
to notice while purchasing. Due to the
holes
, I would be unable to
wear
it. And
so
, I did not like the clothing.

2. Although I liked the
red-coloured
skirt
, I dislike it later
because
the
colour
appeared a
bit
fade. I
bought
the
skirt
from a brand
shop
in New Delhi. It was pa lain red with
some
designs on the lower parts.
But
I did not like the
skirt
as it
came
with a lace. In fact, I did not notice the lace on the
waist
while purchasing it. And when I noticed that, I felt a sense of irritation.
Usually
, I
use
skirts
with bright
colours
and
initially
preferred the red
and when found the
colour
a
bit
fade, I did not like it anymore.

3. Riding bikes need a suitable jacket
but
the one that I
bought
last
month
is no longer the one I like! I
bought
the jacket from a superstore in central Indonesia. It was
black in colour
with a nice collar. It
came
with
buttons
all over it.
But
I did not like it afterwards
because
the
buttons
were distorted
after I
used
it a few times. Even, one of the collar
buttons
was uprooted
. Later, when I took it back to the
shop
, they refused to replace it. Considering all the grounds, an irritation grew on me for the jacket.

4. White is my
favourite
colour
and I
bought
a white
shirt
last
month
. I
bought
it from a
street
vendor here in Sri Lanka. The
shirt
came
with a nice collar and everything was fine.
But
I
was shocked
after it
was washed
. The fabric
started
shrinking.
Actually
, after a single wash with clean water, the
shirt
became shorter! I could not
wear
it anymore. It happened due to the fabric that was the finest in quality. Hereby, I could not like the
shirt
at all.

5. Last winter, I
bought
an overcoat for me. I
purchased
that from a
shopping
mall here in Moscow. It was
grey in colour
and had a belt to fasten around the
waist
. Everything was
right
but
I missed one point while buying. It
came
with had no
buttons
.
So
, fastening the belts was a
bit
trouble for me. I
also
could not like it
because
it was too heavy to
use
. The
colour
also
faded more than it was in the beginning. All the matters generated a sense of dislike for the overcoat on me. Part 3: Two-way discussion
Let
's
talk
about
clothes
.
.
.


1. What kind of
clothes
do
people
in your
country
usually
wear? 2
. How
important
is it to
wear
fashionable
clothes
in your
country? 3
. Do older
people
and younger
people
wear
different
coloured
clothes
?
Now
let
's
talk
about spending money on
clothes
.
.
.


1. Are
clothes
expensive in your
country? 2
. Do
people
wear
more expensive
clothes
to work in your
country? 3
. Do you
think
people
spend too much money on
clothes
nowadays?
21Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
152Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
31Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe an item of clothing you purchased that you didn’t like. v. 1

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