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Describe a meal you invited others to your home or restaurant. v.1

Describe a meal you invited others to your home or restaurant. v. 1
Describe a meal you invited others to your home or restaurant. You should say: who you invited where and when you ate this meal what you ate and explain why you invited the person(s) to have a meal. Sample Answer 1: Well, for this cue card topic I would like to talk about a buffet meal I arranged in a restaurant where I invited 5 of my colleges a few months ago. I invited 5 colleagues from my office who are very close to me and indeed nice co-workers to work with. They helped me a lot in many events and all of them are very friendly. When I was promoted to a senior executive in my current office a few months back, I thought to treat some of my colleges and I naturally chose these five persons. They were John, Eric, Stephen, Anny and Bikash. I threw this treat in the ‘Royal Case Inn’ that offers the best buffet meals in the town. This place was only 20 minutes away from our office and we had our lunch there on Monday. The restaurant was o the 18th floor and we went there at around 12: 45 pm together from our office. There were plenty of food items for us which were included in our buffet lunch menu. I can recall more than 30 items were presented in the restaurant for the customers. We ate different food items based on our own choices and tastes. Some of the items which we all ate were Thai soup, fried rice, mixed salad, mutton curry, gravy fish items, opinion mixed fish and ice cream.  Usually, it is a common practice in our office to treat others whenever someone gets promoted. As soon as I got the confirmation letter about the promotion from the higher management, those colleges congratulated me and reminded me the treat. I was very happy to have been promoted as a senior executing in this multination company and threw this meal to celebrate.
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Describe
a
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meal
you
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invited
others to your home or
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restaurant
. You should say: who you
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invited
where and when you
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ate
this
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meal
what you
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ate
and
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explain
why you
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invited
the person(s) to have a
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meal
. Sample Answer 1:

Well
, for this cue card topic I would like to talk about a buffet
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meal
I arranged in a
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restaurant
where I
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invited
5 of my colleges a few months ago. I
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invited
5 colleagues from my
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office
who are
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very
close to me and
indeed
nice co-workers to work with. They
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helped
me a lot in
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many
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events
and all of them are
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very
friendly. When I
was promoted
to a senior executive in my
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current
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office
a few months back, I
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thought
to
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treat
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some
of my colleges and I
naturally
chose these five persons. They were John, Eric, Stephen,
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Anny
and
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Bikash
. I threw this
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treat
in the ‘Royal Case Inn’ that offers the best buffet
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meals
in the town. This place was
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only
20 minutes away from our
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office and
we had our lunch there on Monday. The
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restaurant
was o the 18th
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floor and
we went there at around 12: 45 pm together from our
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office
. There were
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plenty
of food
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items
for us which
were included
in our buffet lunch menu. I can recall more than 30
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items
were presented
in the
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restaurant
for the customers. We
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ate
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different
food
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items
based on our
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own
choices and tastes.
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Some of the
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items
which we all
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ate
were Thai soup, fried rice, mixed salad, mutton curry, gravy fish
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items
, opinion mixed fish and ice cream.  
Usually
, it is a common practice in our
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office
to
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treat
others whenever someone
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gets
promoted. As
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soon
as I
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got
the confirmation letter about the promotion from the higher management, those colleges congratulated me and reminded me the
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treat
. I was
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very
happy to have
been promoted
as a senior executing in this multination
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company
and threw this
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meal
to celebrate.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
33Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a meal you invited others to your home or restaurant. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
333 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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